Another great chapter! 10/10Author's Response: Thank you so much! Report Review
I love this story so flippin much!
I'm ecstatic that you updated and I really really loved this chapter. I like how complacent (or submissive?) James is when it comes to Henrietta. Like how he knows she's not into him but he sees no reason to do anything about it. I find it very realistic. And I love how jealous he seems of Amelie and her new bf!
Great writing and keeep up the amazing woorrk :)
-RebeccaAuthor's Response: Aaw, thank you so much! Basically, James wants a reason to make Amelie jealous, and he's keeping Henrietta close to make it seem that he is. Thanks for reading and reviewing! Report Review
Please please update!! this is d most awesome story EVER and i'm dying 2 read more!! ur awesome pls i'm beggin u 2 update! i love dis story and TEAM JAMES ALL THE WAY! PLS UPDATE!
xoxo AlessandraAuthor's Response: Thanks for your kind comments and for reading and reviewing! Report Review
Team James all the way!Author's Response: James, 9. Ewan, 3! Report Review
Another great chapter! 9/10!Author's Response: Aaaw, thank you! Report Review
This is not fair. James and Amelie are MEANT TO BE TOGETHER!!!
Emma xxAuthor's Response: Capitals and exclamation points for emphasis! Thanks for reading and reviewing, Emma! Report Review
I am in love with this story! 10/10!Author's Response: Aaaw, thank you! :D Report Review
I loved Raining and I can't believe I only just found out that there was a sequel! James and Amelie are meant to be together. They have to be! Great story!
Emma xxAuthor's Response: Aaw, thank you Emma! I love seeing how people don't seem to realise there's a sequel! Hahaha, thanks for all your lovely comments! :D Report Review
Woohoo! Go Ewan! Team Ewan FTW! Hahaha, I read Raining and this is three hours xD Really awesome writing! Truly loving it! :DAuthor's Response: Aaw thank you so much for reading both! HEaring that people do still surprises me! James, 8. Ewan, 3! Report Review
Team Amelie Happiness! YAY! update soon please!Author's Response: I think everyone is Amelie/happiness! :D Report Review
Awesome!!! i just started reading from Raining a few days ago and just finished what you got so far of this one!!! SO GOOD!!! I thought Raining was great and very well done, but this one is turning out to be awesome and even BETTER! I love the characters you introduced so far (even Henrietta) and cannot wait to see what you do with it!
Of course I'm Team James because I think he and Amelie are meant for each other, but that doesn't mean I don't love Ewan already :)
Can't wait for the next one!!! Keep writing! I'll check out your other stories now :3Author's Response: Aaah, I really can't believe it when people review and say they have read Raining - I finished it so long ago that I don't think about it much anymore! Lol. I know I'm writing Sunshine at the minute but I always seem to forget that it's a sequel!
And you like Henrietta! That's an... interesting choice, I suppose! XP
James, 8. Ewan, 2.
Thanks for reading and reviewing! :D Report Review
sorry :) I'm team James all the way... they're perfect for each other. but i do like Ewan. he reminds me a lot of my best friend actually. he's sarcastic and pretty damn funny too.Author's Response: James, 7.
THEY ARE PERFECT YES BECAUSE I WROTE THEM! LOL jk, I just love them very much. :D Report Review
Team James all the way... Sorry. I'm a sucker for the original love. I think she's pulling the same stuff I did recently trying to get over a guy. She's trying to make herself like someone else so she'll get over him. Oh well... It never works in the end. XD
Love the story! Keep it up! Author's Response: Who isn't a sucker for the original love?! Haha, thanks for reading and reviewing and for all your kind comments!
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Amazing chapter as usual!!! I actually really like Ewan; I think he'll be good for Amelie - for now, you know, while James is getting himself together. But once he has, Ewan has to get out of the picture and make room for him because I really like the idea of a cute James baby...just saying.
Can't wait for the next chapter! 10/10 :D
PS: Good luck with your exams! :DAuthor's Response: Aaw, thank you! And yes, I really like Ewan too, and he does make Amelie very happy! But I also love James too! I love him a lot too!
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GAH!! Lovely chapter, but I'm afraid I'll always be James/Amilee. This little Ewan bloke is DEFINITELY not tickling my fancy, no matter how attractive or sweet or smooth he is. And I think I know Amilee well enough to know that she is most definitely not over James, no matter what she might tell herself. The fact that James is most definitely not over her and is trying to get her back just makes it harder on me :) Oh pwetty pwease update soon!Author's Response: James, 4.
Aww, poor Ewan! I like him a lot, but then again, I invented him. But yes, even though James is an idiot, I still love him too! Aaw, bless. Hopefully I'll get some chapters done after my exams! Thanks for reading and reviewing!! Report Review
Team James all the way. i will except nothing else. :PAuthor's Response: James, 3.
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Definitely Team James, but also team Amelie happiness.Author's Response: James, 2.
Hopefully everyone is team Amelie/happiness! Report Review
AWWW. Ewan's adorable. :)
He's witty, can be snarky, but he's undeniably sweet. dawww.
But, question. How do you pronounce Ewan? Haha, I'm not sure how I should say it in my head...
Awesome chapter! :)Author's Response: I'm going to take this as a point for Ewan because you haven't said anything bad about him or said anything about James, so:
And Ewan, like Ewan McGregor (swoon) is pronounced you-an. I'm so glad you like him, actually. I thought people would resent him because of the competition against James. But yay! Fun! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Report Review
So I'm extremely happy with this chapter! It was so fun to read and I love Ewan he's like... perfect.
I'm definitely Team Amelie Happiness, but for me that makes me Team Ewan too since he seems to make her happier. I feel like James would just bring doom and hurt feelings and even though I love James, he's a very very stupid boy.
Anyways, LOVED THE CHAPTER! Update asap because I want to see what happens next :)
-RebeccaAuthor's Response: James, 1.
YAY! Finally! A Team Ewan! Aaw, I really love him, I really do. He does make Amelie happier, it's true. And James is an idiot, so I basically agree with you on all counts. Thanks for reading and reviewing! Report Review
The way I see it Team James = Team Amelie Happiness. It's not that I don't like Ewan...so much as I want him to jump off a cliff so she can be with James xDAuthor's Response: James, 1.
You'd really wish jumping off a cliff on Ewan!? Bless him, he only likes the girl. Thanks for reading and reviewing! Report Review
I love this story, I really hope to read more soon! Thanks for sharing!Author's Response: No, thank you for reading and reviewing! Report Review
So I just thought you should know that I spent the past two hours reading Raining and the four chapters you have up of this story and I really like them! Please update soon, I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter!Author's Response: Aaw, thank you so much! You're awesome! Report Review
hmmm, that was a bit weird of her to just change like that, but now it makes sense, and James is stupid to have believed it... she was rather convincing though, until she started giving him firewhiskey, which he's right, he should stop drinking that stuff. He probably only will when he gets Amelie back. Hopefully he grows up the rest of the way soon and she won't be too hard on him... unless it's for his own good lol :) great job though, I wasn't seeing that coming!Author's Response: Henrietta is a horrible, horrible girl. She's a mean girl. She's conniving, deceitful, a bit of a man's lady (eh). She does like James, though, in some sort of capacity. She probably loves him (I know I do). She wants to hold on to him. It's just a bonus that he's now a famous Quidditch player and gettin' loadza dollah. Eh. Thanks for reading and for the review! :D Report Review
I don't know if I liked that she lied about having a boyfriend, but really, James needs to grow up, he needs to break his old habits to get her back, and needs to stop making excuses. I still really admire Amelie for having such a backbone with it! She's pretty amazing lol, I wish she was actually able to get some lunch though, 'cause now she's probably missed it from the arguing lolAuthor's Response: Henrietta is horrible. And James is being an idiot, as always. Silly James. We're all hoping he's going to somehow end up with Amelie and come to his senses, but who knows? And yeah, I'd be annoyed if I had to miss my fancy-restaurant lunch, too. Thanks for the review! Report Review
Another great chapter! I can never guess what you're about to write next for a chapter lol, and it's great!Author's Response: Thank you! :D Report Review
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