{reviewid: 2723644, reviewer: 'gabriel'}
23rd July 2012:
While I am waiting for you to update I have start reading all the reviews and I have to say that everyone seem to be blaming Lily for this relationship and say that Roxanne is right but they dont see that Roxanne is becoming a slut by dressing like this for what?to impress a bloke who is going to use her to get back at her brother and treat her like she is nothing?i am sorry but I would rather be in Lilys situation rather than Roxannes
Author's Response: I think I would be too. I like Roxanne's character alot, because shes very different from Lily and I really enjoy writing her. She is right though, regardless of her own choices, when it comes down to it Lily really should have owned up to her mistake instead of being in a relationship with someone she didn't fancy. As well, by Lily making no efforts to correct her mistake shes being rather selfish because she is scared. Of course, Roxanne and her issues is a whole other discussion.
Thanks so much!
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{reviewid: 2723640, reviewer: 'lisa'}
23rd July 2012:
Wait isn't that Harris Lilys enemy?why did she do that?why would she say that Lily is desperately looking for a boy to kiss?i really HATE her..i suppose you wont let her go unpunished right?
Author's Response: Because unfortunately Bridgette is insecure and jealous of Lily and Roxanne in the very shallowest of ways and she did it to embarrass Lily. I have plans for her! No worries!
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{reviewid: 2723328, reviewer: 'lily'}
22nd July 2012:
I thought Fred was dating a girl from Slytherin!why is he going out with another girl?
Author's Response: Its the same girl! Im assuming you got confused by the mention of who he snogged at the party? He is seeing Kim Prouse from Slytherin, Kim and Fred are a funny couple, she was seeing Davies but 'chose' Fred in the loosest of terms. They are more casual, friends with benefits, hang out etc. They are not dating.
Thanks for the question!
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{reviewid: 2720253, reviewer: 'harrypotter'}
15th July 2012:
My cousin read your story and she came to the conclusion that somehow James or Louis is going to end up with Lily's enemy (aka Bridgette)..please please please don't do that to James or Louis and don't do that to us...!
Author's Response: Hmm that's an interesting angle! You never know! Thanks for the insight and review ;)
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{reviewid: 2719372, reviewer: 'Megan'}
13th July 2012:
One day I'm going to come back to this story and there will be a new chapter (which I check for daily). That day will be glorious. PS I'm obsessed with this story!!
Author's Response: haha that day will be glorious! Im working on it! Thank you so much for the review!!
xx
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{reviewid: 2717284, reviewer: 'katie'}
| Review #56, by katie | Mess |
8th July 2012:
Just started reading this story and im addicted!Poor Roxy:-(i really thought that Davies liked her...did he do that to her because of his hatred towards Fred ? Cause I remember you saying that they were both seeing Kim for a while but she chose Fred as her boyfriend.right?
Author's Response: Aww Im so glad you like it! Davies is unfortunately one of those silly immature boys we often encounter in real life and literature. He was attracted to Roxanne and his intentions of sleeping with her weren't malicious, he merely wanted to sleep with her. She wasn't ready, he didn't want anything more from her and thus he was a jerk. His hatred towards Fred had a bit to do with it, knowing that dating Roxanne would piss him off. Kim and Fred are a funny couple, she was seeing Davies but 'chose' Fred in the loosest of terms. They are more casual, friends with benefits, hang out etc. They are not dating.
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{reviewid: 2717059, reviewer: 'vassia'}
8th July 2012:
I cant imagine Luke being in a relationship with Natalie..Natalie is very different from Lily and I really dont know how her relationship could be with Luke especially when you say that even though they fall back together really easily they end up in public break ups!
Author's Response: Im hoping to go into more detail about their relationship of course, but in general terms, yes Natalie is very different from Lily so it was a very different relationship. I also see it (with Natalie and Luke) as not very serious, they were together because it was easy, because they were young and got along. I dont see it being very deep or meaningful.
Thanks for the review!
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{reviewid: 2716837, reviewer: 'demetria'}
7th July 2012:
can't wait for your update..it's been like 2 months since you've last upadated! are you going to write more than one chapter this summer ?
Author's Response: Ughh I know, I'm awful arent I? Im hoping to be able to write alot this weekend so hopefully there will be two updates for August! Fingers crossed! Thanks for the review!
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{reviewid: 2716050, reviewer: 'danielle'}
4th July 2012:
When are you going to update?please dont abandon it!
Author's Response: Soon I hope! Im sorry for the wait! Thanks for being so patient! I won't abandon it!
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{reviewid: 2713905, reviewer: 'jazzy'}
28th June 2012:
When Luke said "believe me I do not want to be your brother" I what were his feelings towards Lily?cause in most of the chapters we only see things from Lilys respective!
Author's Response: Well, it has a lot of meanings, in a way Luke doesn't want to be her brother because he doesnt want to be a Potter. But the more important one is his attraction to Lily...being related to her would tend to complicate things.
Thanks!
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{reviewid: 2713482, reviewer: 'sila'}
27th June 2012:
Just started reading this story and I am already in love with you;-)just wondering why James and Fred are so negative about their sisters getting a boyfriend!?are they scared or something?
Author's Response: Aww you are so sweet thank you :) Well for James, its his general over protectiveness as an older brother, he doesnt want to see Lily hurt or even think about her snogging a bloke let alone anything else. I think James shoulders alot as the oldest potter and the oldest brother. For Fred, its similar situation but he also knows Roxanne doesn't have the healthiest outlook on some situations. This will come up more in time! Thanks for your questions and the review!
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{reviewid: 2713296, reviewer: 'eleanor'}
26th June 2012:
Excuse me Natalie didnt know who Lily was ? Does she live in her own world? So they had met before and she didnt remember who Lily POTTER is?
Author's Response: Haha she does know who she is, it was more of a thing that Natalie had never fully been introduced to Lily, or at least not that she remembered.
Thanks!
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{reviewid: 2713290, reviewer: 'marie'}
26th June 2012:
Is it my idea or Scorpious has actually understand whats going on between Lily and Luke?
Author's Response: Haha I will offer a vaguish answer, Scorpius is pretty perceptive, I wouldn't say he knows for sure or anything but he can definitely recognize that Luke seems to pay more attention to Lily then necessary.
Thanks!
xx
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{reviewid: 2712195, reviewer: 'chase%21'}
24th June 2012:
Um hi! so Ie just started reading this story(since i didnt review any others) and lemme tell you i am seriously gonna Advada Kadavra yo butt if youre gonna kill me and probably other readers by making us wait so long! Its truely an awesometastic story and everyday i keep checking and checking! Roxanne is totally hilarious, Lily is adorkable, James is.like a bloody god, Albus is just amazing and awkward, and everyone else is spot on! You seriously know how to write even in a boys point of view. That i could never do and youre amazing at it! But you know what i realized? Dom is a bit of a bitch in like every story i read! hehehe but she does seem snooty! PLEASE please udate soon or ill end up reviewing everyday to beg you to update! Seriously youre an awesome wonderful writer adn you have an addicting story!
Update soon!
Author's Response: Im sorry! I knowww it takes forever, and I know it sounds like such an excuse but I am so so busy with summer school and work. But I am writing!! Im glad you like everyone so much :) I think that Dom just doesnt take shit and I love that about her and I really enjoy writing her. Thank you so much for the lovely lovely review! You're a doll!
xx
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{reviewid: 2711039, reviewer: 'lira'}
21st June 2012:
OMG this chapter was amazing!what I didnt understand is why Luke doesn't like Scorpious and how the professor realised that they were using the transfiguration time as a cover..?i mean Lily and Luke could have been seen together for so many reasons how the hell did Aldridge found out?
Author's Response: Oh good I'm so glad you liked it! Luke doesn't dislike Scorpius don't worry! He just doesn't know the guy and he's just a tad jealous of Lily giving another goodlooking guy any kind of attention. Thanks so much for the review!!
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{reviewid: 2710655, reviewer: 'lottie'}
20th June 2012:
Haha loved the part where James got embarrassed it made me love him more if thats possible..when are you going to tell us about James crush?i think that he really needs to find someone better than Erin because she really broke his heart..is James still in love with her?though I still cant believe why Erin didnt want James!IS SHE BLIND ?
Author's Response: She's crazy right haha? James will be okay, don't worry! Thanks so much for your lovely review! Means a lot to me!
xx
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{reviewid: 2710653, reviewer: 'evi'}
20th June 2012:
Aw I love this story so much!Are you going to update anytime soon?
Author's Response: Im working on it!! Thanks so much for the review!!
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{reviewid: 2710354, reviewer: 'ciao'}
19th June 2012:
Why is Fred and James so fucking serious about the code? Is it really important to them?
Author's Response: I'll be going into more detail about it, especially when all the secrets come out. But for now to explain, the code was made when they were younger and it kinda became the back bone of the groups friendship. Its a bit childish, but James especially puts alot of faith into it.
Hopefully this explains it for you!
Thanks!
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{reviewid: 2710238, reviewer: 'miranda'}
19th June 2012:
LOVE Roxanne!she is always a laugh and I liked how she teased Lily about Luke and their lake encounter!wonder if Luke actually noticed Lily's bra as Roxy stated
Author's Response: well hellooo miranda, nice name haha
Im glad you like Roxanne, I think she balances Lily out really well.
Oh, he noticed ;)
Thanks for the review!!!
xx
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{reviewid: 2710169, reviewer: 'JennaLee1684'}
18th June 2012:
Please continue the story as it is very good and I would love to read how it ends!!!
Author's Response: It will for sure be continued! Thanks so much for the review!!
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{reviewid: 2709757, reviewer: 'helena'}
| Review #71, by helena | Space |
18th June 2012:
That bridgette girl really pisses me of..why does she hate Lily and Roxy?but I guess lily and roxy are so much better than her right?
Author's Response: In a way yes haha, she's very different, and very insecure. Lily and Roxanne have alot going for them, besides being pretty girls with a big family, they are essentially famous in the wizarding world. With Bridgette its a bit of resentment, personalities clashing and envy. Thanks so much for the review!
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{reviewid: 2709722, reviewer: 'candice'}
18th June 2012:
Aw I loved the part where luke explains for how long he knows lily...he had also helped James hex that boy who bullied lily..how sweet..although now I come to realise that james is a little protective over lily!i dont think that he would take it too well when he will find out about her and his best friend..
Author's Response: He wont take it well haha. But you will have to wait to find out about that ;)
Thanks so much for the review!!
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{reviewid: 2709036, reviewer: 'jessie'}
16th June 2012:
are you going to update anytime soon ? i can't wait to read your next chapter!
Author's Response: Im working on it! Thanks so much for the review!!
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{reviewid: 2708691, reviewer: 'PrincessAndromeda'}
15th June 2012:
I love Luke! He's literally everything I want in a guy. Lily better watch out you have some competition! Nah, he's the type of guy who won't look at another girl while he's with Lily. I love James,he's so adorable. And sexy and sweet and smart and romantic and hot. Excuse me while I drool all over Lily's forbidden boyfriend
Author's Response: Haha you're so cute, I agree though. Hes a gem hey? Hahaha im dying, I love "Lily's forbidden boyfriend." Forbidden relationships are so much sexier am I right? Thanks so much for the lovely review :)
xxx
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{reviewid: 2707650, reviewer: 'julianne'}
12th June 2012:
hahaha can't believe the professor found out about them..i thought that Louis/Damon/Fred would actually seen them first!however i do prefer that James would be the first of the maraunders to find out about Lily and Luke.i think that it will look weird if first Fred then Albus then Damon or Louis and the entire school find out first!i really want to see the reaction of the entire student body when Lily and Luke will go public (especially Bridgettes reaction - please don't make her find out about them before they go public, it will ruin the fun-)
Author's Response: Bridgette wont find out about them, dont worry! Thanks so much for the lovely review and all the insight! You are wonderful :)
xx
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