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Review #26, by Gab Ever After

28th July 2012:
Wow. Just wow. This story was just so amazing, words can't describe how much I loved it. You are an amazing writer and I can't wait to read more of your work. Never stop writing!!!

Author's Response: Oh, my gosh! You are too kind for words!

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! :) (I'll never stop writing -- couldn't even if I wanted to, I'm afraid)

*Maria


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Review #27, by ImYourFelixFelicis Surprises. Plural.

26th July 2012:
I'm loving the story and everything, and I know you've completed the story and probably don't want to change anything its just the fact you've got to remember that they are English, not American(It'll help in future stories) and in England we don't say that girls have a Wallet, men have wallets, Girls have purses, and they have bags, not purses. And we don't say kindergarten, we say Pre-School or Play-School. I know its a bit picky, but trying to stick to the plot? It's based in England/Scotland -but ignoring Scotland- it would be 100 times better if you just used the correct wording. I know it may be the correct wording in where ever you live (America I'm guessing?) but sticking to Joannes words, if you get what I mean? Anyways, i thought that it would help you in the future writing again as it would be more grammatically correct :D

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Review #28, by HermioneEverdeen Ever After

20th July 2012:
OMGOMGOMG!!!
This is my second time reading this. And it gives me goose bumps everytime(:. Whenever I tell my friends to check out this site, I always recommend this story first...
You might want to know. I probably shouldn't be reading this, but I am 11 years old, but this... This... Is the most amazing story ever. I love your writing, and I love your ideas for your stories. You are my favorite autor on this site.(:
Lovies,
Sarahh

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Review #29, by dracos lover Ever After

17th July 2012:
Omg i absolutly love ur book its amazing. I uad read ur book ages ago n i have read it again n again now dat its finished i happy but sad. Although there should be a celebration because theres a sequal!

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Review #30, by prankster peeves Sacred Coffee Station

13th July 2012:
Will you pls write a draco point of view chapter?

Author's Response: I already have, dearie ^^

Thanks for reading and reviewing :)

*Maria


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Review #31, by Vivyan Ever After

10th July 2012:
AH WOW AMAZING E :D
by the way, I'm fangirling inside about namedropping Tobias all over the place, seriously Divergent awesomeness.anyways, I absolutely loved your story , and thanks for writing it haha. hopefully that doesn't sound too corny (: anyways, yeah, i loved your story and i can't wait to read the sequel.

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Review #32, by Vivyan Martin

10th July 2012:
WOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOW

no words. :D

Author's Response: Hahah, thanks ^^

*Maria


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Review #33, by Vivyan Hand On Your Heart

10th July 2012:
i'm depending on those next four chapters, for the record

Author's Response: Take a deep breath; things will work out somehow ;)

Thanks for reading and reviewing ^^

*Maria


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Review #34, by Vivyan Sick

10th July 2012:
me gusta the plot twist (: totally agree with ginny on the whole hermione being a bitch thing, and I'm very happy she said something. Relieved the burning desire in me to scream at Hermione about how much of an idiot she's being haha

Author's Response: Me gusta that you gusta :)

She IS an idiot. But I'd be an idiot too if it were me, I suppose. Just minus the cheating :p Hahah.

Thanks for the read and the review!

*Maria


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Review #35, by Vivyan A Fine Line

10th July 2012:
GOD HERMIONE WHAT AN IDIOT AGHH
sorry just had to get that out there, but fiinalllyyy! (: very excited she's realized she loves him though

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Review #36, by Vivyan That Sign You've Been Looking For

10th July 2012:
Well, I'm desperately hoping Martin is cheating or something or other, because she seriously needs to choose Draco. I'm not a fan of Hermione being stuck between them. Martin is sweet and all, but I mean, she LOVES Draco, and its killing me here. Oh well.

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Review #37, by HP0247 Kissing Pavement

5th July 2012:
Very nice start - I like!!

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Review #38, by Becca Ever After

5th July 2012:
What a great story! I loved it!

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Review #39, by Devoted Ever After

5th July 2012:
best. chapter. ever.
words can not describe the. joy i felt when i read this chapter.
you are the best writer i've come across so far!
and im already reading the sequal!
please dont stop writing!!

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Review #40, by Becca K Ever After

3rd July 2012:
Maria-
Hello there. This is the second time I've read Otherwise Engaged, and I am equally impressed with it. I'm soo glad you wrote this! It's my absolute favorite hpff yet, and I've been searching for some good ones for a long time! Hermione/Draco is one of my favorite pairings! Just a personal suggestion, but would you possibly consider writing a story with a pairing of severus/lilly? Life would be made!! But anyways, this story was written realistically, and I'm happy it was so long! Another great part of this is that, except for a few typos, Otherwise Engages was very well written! I find it very hard to sit and read something that is written badly, and sadly it's difficult to find really well written hpff stories that are written as well as this one. I'm very excited to get to read the sequel! I don't know if you do this sort of thing or not, but if it interests you at all, I would love to find some way for us to talk.
Thanks again for writing such an amazing story!
Yours truly,
Becca

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Review #41, by Melody Church Doors

26th June 2012:
EP! NSDH WHDB U ^_^
I've been screaming for the past few chapters "JUST TELL HIM!" XD

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Review #42, by Vie Omnia Vincit Amor

26th June 2012:
Can I just say that I was crying. Not many people can make me cry with fanfics but this did. Thank you!

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Review #43, by Vie The Sparkling Nest

26th June 2012:
I just wanted to say, your fanfiction is amazing! You describe your characters so well! Thank you for writing it!!!

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Review #44, by fizzingwizzbies Ever After

25th June 2012:
Just read this whole story, and wow it was far to adicting. I literally could not stop reading! Normally I am totally in hate a Draco and hermione because I love romione so much... However this story was very realistic in the sense that you kept Ron and hermiones friendship and didn't try and change too much. You won me over. So yeh, I love love loved this story. Congrats on being an amazing writer! X

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Review #45, by olivandershappenings Ever After

24th June 2012:
I just finished reading the whole thing. This is so amazing. You are an amazing writer and I hope I'll be as good as you someday. You are such an inspiration and I'm going to read all of your other stories too. YOU'RE AWESOME!

Author's Response: Oh, your words warms my heart, dearie ^^, I am really glad you enjoyed my story, and I hope you'll find the others entertaining as well :) Make sure you check out the sequel, Expecting Otherwise ^^

Thanks for reading and reviewing :)

*Maria


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Review #46, by LunaLovegood7 Hand On Your Heart

23rd June 2012:
No. How could Hermione do that to him? :'(

Author's Response: :/ Sorry, but it had to be done :/

Well, she is one very confused woman.

Thanks for reading and reviewing :)

*Maria


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Review #47, by LunaLovegood7 When Everything Changed

23rd June 2012:
I can't believe Draco!!

Author's Response: Me neither! He's a jerk here...

Thanks for reading and reviewing :)

*Maria


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Review #48, by LunaLovegood7 Sick

23rd June 2012:
That was unexpected lol.

Author's Response: Hahah, yeah ^^

Thanks for reading and reviewing :)

*Maria


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Review #49, by Keikokeiko999 Ever After

22nd June 2012:
This is awesome. I can't imagine the sequel being anything but fantastic. Keep writing!

Author's Response: Thank you! I really hope you'll enjoy the sequel as well :)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

*Maria


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Review #50, by B Ever After

21st June 2012:
Just stayed up to the early hours of the
morning to read it all, absolutely loved it! You
have a real talent, I loved the banter between
H & D.. can't wait to read the sequel!

Author's Response: That makes me happy to hear! hahah^^ You really can measure the captivation level of a story by how long you stay up to read it xD

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

*Maria


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