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133 Reviews Found

Review #26, by hermione888 Reveal

7th June 2010:
I love compassionate Draco...This chapter was delightful keep up the good work. I have to say that I've been waiting forever for you to update. lol 10/10

Author's Response: Thanks. CH. 12 is in the que right now so hopefully that will be a quick update. :D

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Review #27, by kikkina123 Reveal

7th June 2010:
i really enjoyed rading this chapter!the most thing i enjoyed was d fact that d hatred between malfoy and hermione is left behind and they r now kind of friends!!i hope this friendship will soon transform itself into something more...something bigger!!!i really hope malfoy and hermione end up 2gether!!pls update soon cause i can hardly wait!:D:);)

Author's Response: thanks. Chapter 12 is in the que.

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Review #28, by Kiki Reveal

7th June 2010:
Nice chapter!!i loved the way malfoy's character changed.hermione and malfoy r like friends now!:D.YAY!!!i hope they eventually end up 2gether.soon!!!when r u publishing d next chapter?im getting restless:P

Author's Response: Chapter 12 is in the que! Thanks for the review.

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Review #29, by Kiki Reveal

7th June 2010:
Nice chapter!!i loved the way malfoy's character changed.hermione and malfoy r like friends now!:D.YAY!!!i hope they eventually end up 2gether.soon!!!when r u publishing d next chapter?im getting restless:P

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Review #30, by A lover. Reveal

7th June 2010:
Please another million chapters like like

Author's Response: lol. I'm working on it. Chapter 12 is already in the que. thanks for the review.

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Review #31, by Sabrina Reveal

7th June 2010:
i only just caught up and this story is really good... can't wait to hear more!!

Author's Response: thanks so much.

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Review #32, by Kay Reveal

2nd June 2010:
I've never actually been much of a Draco/Hermione fan, but this story just captured me. I like it a lot, please continue!
I'd love longer chapters, these last few were more enjoyable for me.

Author's Response: Thanks. I've been trying for longer chapters recently.

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Review #33, by Molly H Reveal

1st June 2010:
WOW! this story is AMAZING! i was never a big dramione fan but now i kind of am a fan. I think maybe a kiss the future? just a comment. you are a wonderful writer and i love this story.
hearts and smiles from molly

Author's Response: Thank you so very much. We'll just have to see about that kiss. hmm...could make things interesting.

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Review #34, by slithern_ice_elf Reveal

1st June 2010:
thats too sweet, gael. are one of theses chapters leading up to a kiss, perhaps? :) yes, yes it is. i think that would be quite amazing. please write again son. :) ily.

Author's Response: wow. people really want them to kiss. I'm thinking about it. Thanks miss mary louise. ily2.

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Review #35, by Hermionetwin Recovery, Rebellion, and Renaissance

24th April 2010:
That was an amazing chapter!! I absolutly love how Draco made it his goal to bring back the life in her, and he didn't straight forward say that be had feelings for her :) keep it up.

Author's Response: Congratulations! You are the hundredth reviewer of TMAH! Here is your virtual cake and confetti with a big smile :D
So thanks for the review. I'm glad you liked Draco's goal.


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Review #36, by Mandy_Bear Recovery, Rebellion, and Renaissance

15th April 2010:
so i tried commenting but then my computer went crazy and i lost what i had written soo take 2!
i love where this story is going! its so cute how hermione is realizing her attraction to draco and how she defies him. so cute! your story is coming along!! yay!! update soon! i cant wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks for going through your computer troubles to comment!

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Review #37, by hermione888 Recovery, Rebellion, and Renaissance

15th April 2010:
Yay! Great chapter it was awesome! I love Draco (he's so hot)
i think i see some dramoine action in the future. Good Job! 10/10

Author's Response: Thanks. Yup, there's some Dramione action coming up, but... well, it may end up not being totally as expected.

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Review #38, by hermione888 Kindly Luncheon

15th April 2010:
I like this chapter. It was pretty good. 10/10 (I was happy that there were no mistakes lol)

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Review #39, by DarkSilverNightmare Recovery, Rebellion, and Renaissance

14th April 2010:
*Stares* You are a maginificent writer! I love your story! Please, please, PLEASE continue!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

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Review #40, by xoxogina Recovery, Rebellion, and Renaissance

14th April 2010:
Wow. I just read all 10 chapters in one sitting and I am AMAZED. I've read quite a few Dramione fanfics, but while most are sort of disappointing, yours is fantastic! The slow, natural development of their relationship, the description of life at the Malfoy Mansion, and I love the bit you threw in about Draco's mom actually being nice!!!

I cannot WAIT to read more... I don't know how often you update, but if I don't get more soon, I might go raving mad. Actually, I'm already raving, but you know what I mean. I love your writing style, and you're super talented! Please update asap!

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm really glad you like it.

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Review #41, by ness17 Recovery, Rebellion, and Renaissance

14th April 2010:
aw dracos so swwet even if he wont admit it to himself

Author's Response: thanks. Yeah, he's a bit of a push over on some things.

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Review #42, by slithern_ice_elf Recovery, Rebellion, and Renaissance

11th April 2010:
:) i am a wonderful and devoted reader. :) i even get sneakpeeks. amazing chapter, cannot wait for the next one. if i could, i would give it an 11/10. :)

Author's Response: Awww... I luv you Mary. Thanks.

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Review #43, by hermione888 Summons

10th April 2010:
I haven't reviewed you in ages! Pretty short but very enjoyable. 10/10

Author's Response: thanks for the review, and I'm glad you're back!

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Review #44, by iscreamdraco Recovery, Rebellion, and Renaissance

10th April 2010:
nicee story! continue!
zzzo-
i.scream.draco.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!

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Review #45, by Me_Forever_Hated Recovery, Rebellion, and Renaissance

10th April 2010:
HEYY :)
this is great :) Keep up the good work :)
cant wait tilll more is out :)
Stupid voldermort! arrggg i hate him :) haha :) blame everything on him xD
anyways great story so updates soon :)))
xx

Author's Response: thanks a lot.

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Review #46, by Lynne Recovery, Rebellion, and Renaissance

9th April 2010:
i really like it! if only u could add a bit more dramione action (sry, no pressure) a kiss? something like that?

voldemort doesn't seem like the hospitable kind, though. i think u portrayed him kind of wrong. but still, it's a fanfic. anything is possible in the fan world of harry potter.

once again, i really like it. so can u pls pls pls update on the next chapter soon?

Author's Response: We're getting closer to some real Dramione action. Voldemort's being sinisterly nice. It's kinda hard to explain. But thanks for the review!

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Review #47, by Mandy_Bear The Lake

8th April 2010:
so ive already left you a comment but i wasnt logged in so here i am again. also, it seems like your are just summarizing the chapters, like you have the whole story in your head but you jusst give us the overview. maybe try to go into more detail? but still, fantastic job writing!

Author's Response: Thanks. I will definately try for some more detail.

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Review #48, by Mandy_bear The Lake

8th April 2010:
hey hey! i've only just started to read your fic and im sucked into it. please dont give up! i know its hard for writers to update without positive feedback so yay your story is really good and coming along nicely! one this though, try to make the chapters a little longer? it makes me sad cuz i read your story today while in class this morning and now im done:( update soon!
thanks sooo much for writing!

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Review #49, by thefraudulentpoet The Lake

28th March 2010:
Wonderful job, keep it up! I cannot wait to read the next chapter, please hurry up, I'm going to die if I don't find out what happens next. :C

:)

Author's Response: wow. thanks. no dying, okay? But I will try to update soon.

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Review #50, by awsomous It Begins

26th March 2010:
very good. although i don't know whether the malfoy's would care for a prisoner but all the same very good

Author's Response: thanks. It's all done under Voldemort's orders.

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