love it! i can't wait to read the next chapter, please keep writing and update soon!

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This is so far beyond fantastic that words can’t even describe it! I found this story today and literally sat here and read the entire thing. I cannot get enough of this story. Fate just wants Rose and Scorpius to be together! I have to ask – Scorpius with all of his medical stuff, does he want to be a Healer? I feel like maybe he and Rose will have a secret relationship for a while….maybe a little cheesy, but you’re excellent at taking ideas that would cheesy if written by someone less skilled as a writer and making them seem natural and not all that cheesy. Brilliant work! I can’t wait to see where this story goes!

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YAY you posted another chapter! :D So excited. I love Scorpius to pieces and I think somehow, in some adorably squee worthy way, he should explain to Rosie that he didn't mean to shove her in a closet! I love them together, so much. Oh, and they should definitely run into each other at the Hogsmeade trip! I love Hogsmeade, I wish it were a real place :) Anyway, lovely chapter like always, and update super soon, yeah? :D

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yesss I want more "badly" written kiss scenes please! Rose and Scorpius are just so adorable, more of them I beggg x

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1. Updated! I have literally check at least four times a week since your last update to see if you have. I love this story so much!
2. I liked this chapter. Lots of inner-conflict. Rose and Scorpius are so perfect for each other! They're one of my favorite couples.
3. More kissing scenes please. ;)
4. No, Rose is not being a pyscho drama queen. I tend to overanalyize things myself as well, and it seems perfectly reasonable because of what happened. It certainly makes for a good read.
5. No tats for Scorpius. Unless on his back. A muscular back? :)
6. I have no idea what's going to happen, but I'd like to guess a romantic escapade up to a secret tower where they have a shouting match, a talk, and then some snogging. But that's a guess. :)
7. Please update real soon, or as soon as you possibly can. I'm looking forward to it.
-K

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I'm so pleased to see you've updated!! This was an interesting look into how the two of them are feeling. I'd expect them to be confused about what to do next. What do I think should happen next? Well the two of them should speak, of course, and more LOVELY written kissing scenes would be nice. (You did a good job, don't be so hard on yourself!) I'm itching for more, so update soon :)

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For all your worry, I think the scene was splendid. Please update!! I was so sad that there wasn't another chapter!! I think that your editing could be better; poor spelling and grammar can really detract from a great story like yours. Pay special attention to apostrophes in possessives. Please update and keep going with the story--I really like it!! :)

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So far, so good. Also, I'm pretty sure ketchup is called "tomato sauce" in England.

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Best scorpius Rose ever :D looking forward to the next chapter xxx

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if this sucks then the rest must be really good. I didn't think it sucked, as it's a lot better than a lot of things I've read. I love Rose and Scorpius... I just do.

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EPP So I'm like addicted to Rose/Scorps and this is one is in my top ten for sure!

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W-O-W nuff' said :)
pleasepleaseplease pleaseplease update soon!
LOVED it!
you rock! (fact!) :D
3891746237846786247815238842153451264/10!
did i mention update soon please? :p
becku ;)

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of course she ended up at Scorps house :)
LOVED it!
becky ;p
1 BILLION/10! yes, THAT amazing! ;D

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aw, amazing chappie! (as per usual!)
loved it!
becky ;p
10 million/10!

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aw, she knows! i wonder what will happen next!?!
must read more!
amazing!
beckhy ;p
1 million/10! :)

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aw, deffinatly cheesy but it worked :) loved it!
you're brilliant!
becky ;p

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aw, can't she tell he likes her!?! it's pretty obvious! :)
loved it!
you rock!
becky

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aw, poor Rose! :( amazing chappie though :)
you rock!
becky ;p

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oooh, cliff hanger! what will Scorp do? wow, what a prediciment :)
loved it! (again!)
becky ;p

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wow great chapter! i just realised i havent actualy reviewed the rest of this story, which is strange :)
loved it!
becky ;p 100/10!

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WOW.
lol thats what i can say to that chapter and aw its also very cutee, and btw loved the kissing scene and thank god it finally happened!!

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''Eighty four miles to the south west''
did she really walk that far?

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well...
i) consider your goal achived.
ii)lovely twist at the end.
iii) fav quote? gotta be; “Goodnight Rose.”
iv)loving it so far.

~Ed~

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This is really great. You've developed the characters very well and the kiss Rose and Scorpius shared was so natural...it fell right into place with the plot of the story you've set up. You shouldn't be nervous about writing them kissing at all, you did beautifully! The fact that their union is forbidden and something they both are struggling with is very apparent and I love how you portray the two of them.
Nice cliffhanger. I'm definitely intrigued. Can't wait to see what happens next!

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I loved ready what you have so far (up to the 11th chapter). I think you did great with the kissing scene. BTW- cheesy romantic stuff is great by me :)

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