awww. I like it. If you hadn't told me I wouldn't have known that it only took an hour. I like it a lot. I can't wait for the next update, fabulous story! 10/10!Author's Response: Haha, yeah...
Thank you! I'm glad you like the story so much! I'm really loving the feedback I'm getting from a story that was just something that randomly popped into my head so long ago. XD
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Very good and hope to read more soon. Merry Christmas :)Author's Response: Thank you! Hope you had a wonderful holiday! Report Review
Nice to see another update, I really like this story. At first I thought the baby project idea was kinda odd but it's working fine and I love the characters, Dom is my favorite I think...
Anyway, I look forward to seeing where the story turns next, keep up the good work :)Author's Response: Aw, thank you!
Haha, it was kind of odd to me at first too, but I thought it would be rather interesting to try out :)
I'm glad to hear that you like this story!
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Love this story, its soo...refreshing! my abs fava prt was when they kissed...i squealed in joy! Ooh update soon, that is when it opens..again!
`aida`Author's Response: Hey, there! Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you're enjoying the story...and I'm glad you stopped by to review! Haha! Thanks for reviewing!!
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i officailly hate you! this story is so ridiculously fantastic i want more but there isnt any! ugh panda bears anyways!Author's Response: Aww, I'm sorry! Haha, I'll make the next chapter extra long for people to enjoy!! I can't guarantee that I'll have anything up as soon as possible, but I'll try to get it out quickly. Report Review
OMG! thats all i can think right now.OMG OMG OMG OMG!Author's Response: Haha, that seems to be what a lot of people could think about after they read the chapter!! :) Report Review
i really adored this chapter..especially the stuffing the bra and the absoring orange juice part...pure genius i say!!!Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :) Report Review
i forgot to review the last chapter...sorry! but im really liking it and im pretty sure the girls in your lovely little story are the clones of my friends...lol
*cough* ma cherie *cough*Author's Response: Haha, I'm glad the girls can relate to your friends. I want these characters to feel real to the readers. :)
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again amazing but again another french mistake...ma cherie with the accentAuthor's Response: Yep, expected. xD
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i really liked this chapter...the ending was particularly spiffy!
another french error though and i feel it my duty as a french woman to inform you that you forgot the s on the end of de, it should be 'des'...also youre really saying to the community of sisters which technically means basically the same thing, but if you say a la sororite...with an accent over both the a and e then it says to the sisterhood as you truely wanted it..lol hopes this helps!Author's Response: It does, actually. Haha, you're like my own personal dictionary. Haha. I'm not great with my French quite yet...Struggling, but trying. xD Thanks for the review! Report Review
i liked it alot and the whole twilight allusion was pretty spiffy! but i feel it my duty to point out some certain french errors becasue right now you have the anut calling Alexia a boy not a girl and im sure you dont want that...lol...it should be "ma amie" not mon ami because mon is for a masculine subject and ma for feminine and you also need the extra e on ami to make it amie because that too is the feminine version...the same goes for "mon cheri" it should be ma cherie (have an accent...i just dont know how to do it) with the ma and the extra e...hoped this helped!Author's Response: Actually, that did. Haha. My French still needs work. Sigh.
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I really like your story. I have been reading stories on this site for a long time but actually created an account to let you know I am really looking forward to reading the rest of your story. You are very good at drawing the reader in and the first few chapters had a really good set up leading to the school year. And I am sure Dominique has every right to be suspicious of Andrea. Nice little twist of sibling rivalry.Author's Response: Thank you! Haha, I'll try not to disappoint you! It means a lot that you'd stop by and tell me all of this :) Thank you! I can't seem to stop saying that. Haha. Report Review
all James and Allie make is truces heh? it makes the development between them more interesting. i can't wait to read more!!!^_^
Harry and GinnyAuthor's Response: Haha, for now that's all they'll do. xD
I'm glad you like it. :)
I promise to make the next chapter really long and interesting!
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Nice chapter :) I like how they've come to a compromise! PGAuthor's Response: Thanks!
Yeah, I wanted them to take their...'relationship' to the next step. This seemed like the best thing to do. :D
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plz plz plz update soonAuthor's Response: Haha, I'll have to update after Christmas. The que's close soon. But I'll make the next chapter especially long! :) Report Review
Its a good Chapter
shows their relationship building
Cant wait for the next chapter
:-)Author's Response: Thanks!
Haha, I was hoping that that's what the readers would come up with. I hope I did a good job with it!!
Thanks for the review!
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Such a short chapter :(Author's Response: Haha, sorry about that! I wanted to make it longer, but I was running short on time...but I promise to make the next one even longer!! :) Report Review
Loved this story, can't wait til the next chapter! The whiteness is a bit of a problem, but I can see you can't help that happening. Update asap!
~ginny_malfoy22Author's Response: Haha, stupid whiteness. I didn't have internet at the time, so before I got it shut down, I e-mailed the chapters to myself and worked on them some more at my aunt's house. The whiteness...was because of my email. Grr. Anyway, thanks for the review! I promise, no more whiteness!! lol. Report Review
Great story on a whole and good chapter!! I hope you add another soon!!Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! I'm sort of struggling with the next chapter, but I hope to get it around soon. If not, I'll have it up after the staff comes back from break. But that's a long time! Anyway, thanks for the review! Report Review
The whiteness burns! I thought that something was seriously wrong with my laptop. Anywho I can't believe that she started crying! What a mood kill! And James is the jealous one about Fred and Allie. Dominique is one smart cookie < what the hell? weird...smart cookie. Update soon!
~NorahAuthor's Response: Haha, I like it. Smart cookie...mind if I use it?
Anyway, I'm really sorry about the whiteness. I got so mad, but I can't fix it unless I want to retype the whole damn thing, and I'm too lazy to do that. xD
Poor Allie...sigh. Mood swings suck. xD
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OMG! great story! plz plz plz update soon!Author's Response: Thank you!
I'm working on the next chapter as we speak :)
Should, hopefully, be out soon!!! Report Review
Gah, amazing! I'm sad they're pretending it never happened, but I am happy she's going out with Fred again! Ooh so muc drama. Update soon please!!Author's Response: Haha, thanks! Allie likes making things complicated ;) Evil won't run a much through Hogwarts with THIS generation. DRAMA will!!
Well, that's how I want it to be.
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Haha WOW! I loved it per usual but I am upset... Stupid Allie and her stupid conscience! JUST KIDDING! I hope it all works out! And I want to see Dom's part in it *grins wickedly*
Update soon!Author's Response: WOOT! I was kind of upset when I looked back and Dominique and the others didn't have much of a part to play in the story. I plan on changing that in the next chapter. Hee hee.
Yes, Allie's conscience can be VERY stupid. I completely agree - and I made her up!! Haha, I was thinking about what I want to happen later on in the story during my hunter's safety class. xD You can expect lots of drama in the sequel (yes, there WILL be a sequel!!)
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the aftermath of the kiss was interesting and i look 4ward to read what's going to happen next between them. will u update soon please?^_^
Harry and GinnyAuthor's Response: Thanks! Haha, Allie enjoys making things complicated. That's why the story'll be full of drama as it goes on ;) Report Review
I like this chapter.
Carnt wait for the next chapter
:-DAuthor's Response: Thank you!
Next chapter will be coming soon ;) Report Review
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