I'm absolutely astounded by this. I wish you could update sooner. 10/10
I also had the thought of what would happen if that happened to me. I think I sense a wish is approaching. Since Gabby is a bit of a loner, she saw Lily Evans had it all and wanted everything she had. But that's my guess. I could be wrong. :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! It made my day! I wanted to do something a little different, and was so excited when I thought of the concept. I don't want to give anything away, so you'll just have to keep reading :)

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good chapter! yay, james! update again soon, i want to see their relationship develop! =]

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed my story so far and I hope you like what I have coming up.

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Really great start! It seems interesting and really different! The only thing you should improve is the pace of the story- it's going a bit fast, but other than that it's great :)

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Sofia

Author's Response: Thank you for the review and the suggestion!

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I saw this in the Betas Wanted section and I thought I was gonna come take a look. I like the story! I can't wait to see what goes next. :P You did a really good job. :)

~ Sevvy

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you did decide to take a look. I hope you like what I write next!

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interesting story! cant wait to see where this goes, update again soon! =]

Author's Response: Thanks! I hope you enjoy the rest of it :)

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