Wow, what an intense chapter. I liked it a lot. You conveyed the emotions very well, I liked the characterization along with the dialog. Good luck with the challenge and happy birthday!

Author's Response: Thank you!! Both for the wishes and the kind review! I am happy you liked it :)

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its good one shot,
i think u like melfoy family . i too like draco but i am not a draco/moine sheeper and all ur other stories have this pairing so it make me littel sad ( hehehe)
but in reality i want to read more ur stories , i like ur writing skill , may be i will change my mind and start reading ur stories.
can u help me , pls tell me which story is best among all ur stories , i will start from that . most of this stories now in this site has same theme

10/10

Author's Response: Hey... haha yes malfoys are my favorite xD well only 2 of my stories are Draco/hermione pairings so u can read the others :-)
I am glad you like my writing skill, thank you.
You can read Change, Muggle Studies, The three generations: Sorting Ceremony, and A portrait existence a: Phineas Nigellus Black. These are my best pieces in the order :-) {and none of these are dracomione}
Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing!!

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I really should sign into my account for this review, so I can also add it into my favorites.

That was just...wow. I adore Lucius Malfoy. He is my favorite Harry Potter character of all time. Reading this made me cry my eyes out, which is a very good thing. I hardly ever cry when reading stories. Just, gah. I thought your characterizations were spot on and your description and detail were stunning. Obviously, you had plenty of emotion - made me cry. And even though I normally don't like Narcissa (at least, I didn't until the last book), she was beautifully executed.

This is an easy 10/10.

Author's Response: Hi there!! Your review flattered me!! Thank you so much :)

Aww I am so thrilled to know it made you cry, I really think it's a great accomplishment for me as an author to evoke such emotion in a reader. I am glad you found my characterizations and everything nice. A ton of thanks for the 10/10!

thanks a lot for reading & reviewing! kudos!

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It was... amazing. Good job :)

Author's Response: Hi!! I am glad you think so. Thank you for reading & reviewing :)

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I loved it, very well written and thought of. Almost cried.:')

Author's Response: Aww I am glad you liked it. thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

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:'( That was beautiful! I feel so sorry for Narcissa and I just want to give her a huge hug. It was a beautifully sad story line and you wrote it well. I couldn't stop crying as I read it (Keep in mind lately I cry because of everything... I saw a kitten eating and I cried xD) I love Narcissa/Lucius so much, in my eyes that pairing was one of the only pairings that you could say was True Love. I am quite sad now :(

Loved the story!
Best of luck with the challenge xx

Author's Response: Awww *hug*

I am flattered that you liked my story so much and found it beautiful but not sure what to say to you being upset over it. Don't cry hon xx

But really, I feel flattered that it evoked so much emotion in you (even though a kitten did it too xP)!

Thank you once again for your sweet review. Glad you liked it!! and thanks for the wishes!

love,
Aditi

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brilliant! I adore this short story so much!

Author's Response: i am glad you do. thank you for reading and reviewing :)

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Aww.. sob. That was heart-wrenching. To see that Lucius, despite all he had done, still loved his wife so. :'(

I think you characterised both of them perfectly. This was so easy to imagine to happen after the battle- well done on that count.

Your descriptions were again great- they definitely evoked emotion in me. :)

Umm..there was just this one sentence that I didn't comprehend, even in elf-speak. "He is it sits in the living room." Was that supposed to be, "He sits in the living room?"

Your writing is wonderful and keeps me intrigued. Such an enjoyable read. :)

Author's Response: Aww thank you for your sweet review. I am glad you found it so good :) I am so flattered that you think I characterized both of them "perfectly", it really means a lot to me :) Again, thanks a ton for the comments on the descriptions and the reality of the situation; good to know it all went well.

About that sentence, well I thought elves don't generally speak correct english so I put it in there, lol.

Glad you enjoyed this. Your review made my heart melt. Thank you :)

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