love where this story is going. please please don't forget about it!! Report Review
I adore this story! I find it hilarious the way Aunt Pearl and Felicia are treating her. Although, I do of course feel sorry for her as that would suck...
Your writing style is really good, there are some stories where I'm just like 'Meh, I can't be bothered reading this' from the very first paragraph, but yours is one of the ones that captured my attention straight away, so kudos :)
Please update soon :) Report Review
Good start! I love your writing style. But..I'm pretty sure I will have to continue this after I finish reading at least one other fanfic. I sometimes get fanfics confused when I read too many at once haha. I am also currently reading Falling to Pieces which is excellent. So don't worry, I will continue reading this one eventually :D Nice job! Report Review
Annie is very confused.
please update soon!!! Report Review
i love sirius!!! :D Report Review
this seems very interesting. Report Review
I really like this story! its different.. Please update soon :) Report Review
I love this story! Annie is so funny and intriguing, and I can't wait to see where she's sorted. Also, I love the Sirius/Annie dynamic. It's awesome. Please update soon...even though I see you updated recently, I can't help it, haha. Your writing style is captivating. Props! =) Report Review
I love you and your stories!
Therefore, I bestow upon you the speediest updating skills anyone could ever gift another. Report Review
This story is different (as your characters would say), but in a good way of course.
It must be difficult to be in Annie's position...she knows who she is, she just doesn't know if she can still be that person in England; but fitting in means losing herself.
I'm waiting for her to go to Hogwarts: I guess she won't be put in Slytherin?! If she's not then it would be easier to be Annie, she'd have other people to be with, though there would be bad consequences (like Sirius said).. but I can't see that far!
I guess I just want her to be aware of what's happening around her.
The only thing that confuses me is clothes.. I mean, I know we are talking about purebloods and all...but I'm not sure in the 70's there were corsets and bonnets, even in the wizarding world!
Update soon, it's intriguing! Report Review
Love this story immensely, so perhaps you could update? I'm thinking... NOW?
Haha! Report Review
i like this story so far and for some reason i hope Annie is a Gryffindor, it would just totally piss everybody else off :) btw why are fall for anything and falling to pieces deleted?Author's Response: theyre not deleted! they're just hidden until they next get validated because i wasn't very careful and used language in the chapter summaries... my fault! i've changed it and asked for them to be unhidden so just waiting on that! thanks for reviewing, glad you like annie :) Report Review
GAHH SO CUTE.
i lvoe it?
yes. Report Review
This story sounds so interesting! I just want to keep on reading it :D definately keep on writing this :)) Report Review
THIS IS MAD! written exceptionally well, im realy enjoying the story, your writing flows realy well and the best bit is; its so fun to read.
eagerly awaiting more. Report Review
I LOVE THIS STORY!
you are fast becoming my favourite author on the site and I think this is my favourite story.
when I saw you'd updated I was literally jumping in my seat and had to prepare for like 5 minutes so that conditions were perfect before I could sit down and actually read it.
i just hope soo much that annie is in gryffindor. i suppose it would be a completely different story if she wasn't, but it would just be lying to herself!! I love the true annie but i love her even more because i understand the confusion about trying to fit in. Trying to determine which thoughts/actions are you and which are fake is a problem i think alot of people can really relate to.
you are an amazing story teller.
i literally can not wait for more. Report Review
it's really good, I definiely like this story :) can't wait for the next chapter! I think your dialogue is very strong and well written Report Review
Not to state the obvious, but you've updated! Yay! I love the dichotomy that is Susannah/Annie. She's a great character. Congrats on another good chapter. Keep them coming please! 10/10 Report Review
So far, I'm addicted! You've done a wonderful job of characterizing Sirius, and Susannah is quite the character as well. Please put Susannah in Slytherin! Please? lol. I feel like she should keep up the double life that is Sussanah/ Annie. Gryffindor would be too radical. And some more ineraction with Evan Rosier would be much appreciated as well! I can't wait to see what you write next! :)
(Personally I think that Susannah should stick it out as a perfect pureblood princess for a while...perhaps with a slytherin boyfriend? hint, hint) ;) Report Review
annie! ahhh! i love sirius. god hes awesome. and annie needs to just get over herself and be her annie self around sirius. because hes awesome.
((“Oh. I’ve misplaced it.” Read: I buried it.)) HAHA. i approve.
((“That sounds completely sickening,” Sirius said, “But I want it.”)) haha i have so many convos like this. i love it.
you're awesome. Report Review
I've really enjoyed this story. So far it is very different and well written. I hope you keep updating. Report Review
I was wondering when you'd update this.
I liked this chapter - Annie's awkwardness on her own before she ran into Sirius and the Potters was utterly endearing. I've had a few experiences like that myself - but fortunately no one has had to bail me out, that would have been mortifying for me.
Here's a tip for more authenticity on Annie's background: look up stuff about India in the late 1970s- culture, politics, etc. Was Bollywood forming then? I can't remember if it was based in Delhi or not. Although...she is a pureblood, so I dunno...but if her uncles are a bit nutty, I can definitely see her uncles having no issues in showing Annie the Bollywood world. :) I'm just throwing it out there as a suggestion because that's a rather new place for an OC to come from for me; I've never heard of that before. I think if you pull if off right and accurately it's going to work, mostly because Britain used to own India - so it's not that far of a stretch (at least in my mind) for Annie to have come from there).
Good luck! Report Review
Ok I loved this chapter. I'm really happy she's starting to assert her own independence a little, because she seems like she has a very strong will. I'm also glad sirius seems to understand that she didn't know what she was saying when she said mudblood, cuz I think she'll need him a lot when school starts. I really hope you update this regularly now because I am really interested in how she does at hogwarts!!! PLEASE! Report Review
i absolutely loved the chapter. its stories like these why i love hpff. my friends think that its just harry potter this.,harry potter that on here but its just like reading a whole different story.
your writing style is amazing, especially the way you've incorporated all your ideas into the chapter, and let it flow perfectly too. normally when you read a chapter you just remember one or two things but i can definitely say that i will remember all of urs, the bonnet, the cat, the howler threats, running away in a way that only annie can (why did she not think of changing clothes?) and of course annir/sirius interactions.
only criticism would be to update sooner if u can please. thanks for a great read Report Review
yay, another chapter! I really like this story, I can't wait to see where you go with it! Report Review
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