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Review #26, by losers_lurgy one for each night

4th April 2012:
I really did love it. Finally a piece of writing that doesn't portray Lavender as a psycho spitefull ex. In fact quite a few fics ignore the fact that Lavender was even attacked by Fenrir Greyback. You show Lavender for what she really was- a human, with flaws and insecurities. Which is great!

I really loved the whole feel of your one-shot and the use of Rumplestilskin. I really loved the ending as well. Forgive me if i'm being dumb, but i don't understand what you're referring to by saying "a hush brewed potion, black and bitter".

Also thanks for your critiques on my one-shot. I've taken them on board and attempted to edit it :D!

Overall I loved this piece ! :)

Author's Response: Hullo! :3 I haven't really read much that's involved Lavender, so I can assume some things about how she's usually portrayed, but I actually don't know.

The Rumpelstiltskin bit is one of my favorite parts! And don't worry, it is a bit vague if you're not familiar, but she took a potion to abort the baby.

That's great! :D And thank you very much!


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Review #27, by ericajen one for each night

4th April 2012:
OH GINA, YOU ARE SUCH A LOVELY, LOVELY WRITER. (& person, ofc)

I rather liked this story! Dear Lav Lav does not get a whole lot of attention in the fic world, and when she does, it's usually in some negative way (Ron's 'charming' ex-girlfriend, ftw). So I like this more serious take on her. Actually she was super likable! You managed to capture the sadness of her story (with a few of your own twists, Cormac McLaggen hem hem) but still give her a little wit and spunk! I loved the last line. Why, /everything/. That was just perfect!

READING THIS WAS SO MUCH BETTER THAN PAYING ATTENTION IN ACCOUNTING. ILY. (:

errricaaa

Author's Response: ♥ ericuhh.

I never thought much of Lavender myself, really. I felt for Cho and Fleur, but never looked at Lavlav's way. The spunk was the most fun part! It was looking a bit drab in my first draft, but then she got some zing.

Funnily enough, the Cormac McLaggen part happened because of the banner. I needed her to cut her hair, and that led to Rumpelstiltskin and the baby.

♥ I WOULD HOPE FOR THAT MUCH AT LEAST. ILY2.


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