Hey it's me, long_live_luna_bellatrix, here from the forums. . .
This was a really great starting chapter!!! I loved it! It's got me totally interested, I just couldn't stop reading. All your characters are wonderful, and very believable. They all act just as I would imagine a bunch of Slytherins, plus Hermione, would act when together. Pansy is especially great, the way she was acting at the beginning of the story. And Draco was great too, acting just right.
All in all, this was amazing. Everything was great! I can't wait to read chapter 2!!! Report Review
interesting so far. i wonder why Hermione is hanging out with slytherins now? post more soon. Report Review
Ooh mysterious :o
I love your summary and story so far - can't wait for more! Report Review
o greengrass is missing uh-oh. :) hehe i like it.
four young adults going off to get smashed... maybe later the murdeous stepfather will show up hehe. sorry i pictured a total "scary movie one" moment.
I like your story. i hope you can update soon.Author's Response: that's the plan XD halloween horror.
thanks for the review! Report Review
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