{reviewid: 2693861, reviewer: 'bballtomboy22'}
6th May 2012:
No!!! You left me on the edge :( Your mean leaving me with such a cliff hanger... Apart from the meanness at the end it was a great chapter! Keep up the great work :)
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I am glad you liked the cliffhanger. I had to add one more complication to Harry and friends.
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{reviewid: 2684246, reviewer: 'bballtomboy22'}
11th April 2012:
I enjoined the new chapter and a swear I have come to this page 100 times hoping for an update since I got back last night... I realy have enjoined this story and am looking forward to the next chapter!!
Author's Response: Thank you, I hope you had a nice trip. I will try to get the chapter up in the next couple of days, but. We will see how it goes. My lack of updating hasn't been because of a lack of wanting to write or knowing what to write. It has been a lack of time to write.
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{reviewid: 2682006, reviewer: 'Readerofstories'}
6th April 2012:
Wow amazing sofar just wondering when the next part is out because I don't want an amazing story like this one to just stop so suddenly with such a great atmosphere, Anyways can't wait till the next one!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I will try to get a chapter a week, but that isn't always possible. I will finish this story. It just might take a little while.
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{reviewid: 2681683, reviewer: 'Eager%20Reader'}
5th April 2012:
I swear I have been checking updates like 4 times a days since my last post LOL.
Anyways, great chapter! Can't wait for the next one.
As a suggesting, at the end of a chapter, you should write down when to expect the next chapter!
Author's Response: I am so glad that you are enjoying the story. I wish I could say exactly when the next chapter will be ready, but it might be wrong. Sorry!
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{reviewid: 2680204, reviewer: 'clari_tries_writing'}
2nd April 2012:
A great chapter, I can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Thank you I hope you like the next chapter when I can finally get it put together.
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{reviewid: 2678850, reviewer: 'Harrie'}
30th March 2012:
Nice Ending! I can't wait to see what happens next!!!
Author's Response: Thank you, I am glad you are enjoying the story.
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{reviewid: 2677426, reviewer: 'Eager%20Reader'}
26th March 2012:
I just read through all 15 chapters in 1 night. Now I'm all sad.
Can you give me an approximate time to your next chapter?
Author's Response: I regret to tell you this, but it won't be for another three or four days.
I am happy you are so eager to read the next chapter.
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{reviewid: 2677154, reviewer: 'bballtomboy22'}
26th March 2012:
I enjoyed the chapter ad I am looking forward the the next ones that are coming out even though I will most likely not be able to read them when they come out as I will be over seas... But anyway looking forward to reading the new chapters when I get back!!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review, and i hope you have a good trip.
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{reviewid: 2676946, reviewer: 'that%20random%20kid'}
25th March 2012:
Awww this chapter was really short. Im not gonna lie, i am i little disappointed. But the content was good, so that reconciles it a bit. Cant wait until the next chapter!
Author's Response: I am sorry to disappoint you with the length of the chapter because there may be more short chapters coming up. I try to write a chapter by what happens in it rather than word count. Hopefully the future chapters are interesting enough to make them tolerable.
Thank you for the review.
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{reviewid: 2670035, reviewer: 'bballtomboy22'}
9th March 2012:
Enjoyed the chapter!!! Can't wait for the next one!!! You realy are good at writing stories! I have read every one of the stories that you have written! Keep up the good work!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I am glad you enjoy my story telling style. I have other things going on and haven't had the time to start the next chapter. I think the next couple of chapter will be a bit shorter so I may be able to get them out quicker.
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{reviewid: 2669892, reviewer: 'Lily'}
8th March 2012:
Ok,really good story and I only follow story's that have good potential. When is the next chapter coming out!!! UPDATE QUICKLY!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I will try to update quickly.
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{reviewid: 2669891, reviewer: 'Lily'}
8th March 2012:
Ok,really good story and I only follow story's that have good potential. When is the next chapter coming out!!! UPDATE QUICKLY!
Author's Response: Thank you!
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{reviewid: 2668046, reviewer: 'adriaans'}
4th March 2012:
Great plot twist that will undoubtedly bring Lily and James closer
Author's Response: Thank you. Lily and James still have a ways to go to find each other.
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{reviewid: 2667821, reviewer: 'Lily'}
3rd March 2012:
That story is really good!!! When is the next chapter coming out?!?!?!?!
Author's Response: Thak you, I am having problems forming the next couple of chapters. I will try to put them together soon.
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{reviewid: 2663997, reviewer: 'that%20random%20kid'}
23rd February 2012:
Oh this is amazing. Plot twist!! Oh my, i was expecting their cover to be conpletely blown, but no you go and twist the plot so that everyone is obliviated! I love this story and cant wait until the next chapter!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I am glad you enjoyed my little twist.
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{reviewid: 2663548, reviewer: 'bballtomboy22'}
23rd February 2012:
Great chapter!!! I enjoyed it! I think an incedent that only James and lily remember will bring them together!
Keep up the good work, can't wait for the next chapter !
Author's Response: Thank you, I do appreciate your reviews. Concerning James and Lily be ready for a bumpy ride and a surprise for Harry.
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{reviewid: 2663493, reviewer: 'Lyken'}
22nd February 2012:
OH MY SWEET JESUS PLEASE DEAR GOD RELEASE MORE!
Author's Response: Thank you for the impassioned review. I will try to get a chapter up soon. This site is validating chapters within a day. I am used to having a week to write the next chapter while one is in the waiting.
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{reviewid: 2662517, reviewer: 'bballtomboy22'}
21st February 2012:
Enjoyed the chapter once again! Keep up the good work! Can't wait for the next chapter! The last little bit was sweet!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I am glad you enjoyed the ending.
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{reviewid: 2660113, reviewer: 'Anon.'}
16th February 2012:
This chapter was amazing. Please write faster :)
Author's Response: I can write faster, but the errors make the reading slower. Thank you!
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{reviewid: 2656724, reviewer: 'Harrie'}
9th February 2012:
This chapter was just beautiful! I loved it!! Awesome action and pace, I cant wait for the next one!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for the glowing review. I will try to get the next chapter put together soon. I am at a bit of a crossroads as to how to wrap things up.
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{reviewid: 2656654, reviewer: 'FunnyHeady91'}
9th February 2012:
Great chapter, I'm looking forward to the next one:)
Author's Response: Thank you, I will try to put it together soon.
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{reviewid: 2656427, reviewer: 'Tanisha'}
9th February 2012:
I enjoyed this chapter and loved how fast you got it up!! Like I say every chapter keep up the good work! Can't wait fOr the next chapter! 😃
Author's Response: Thank you for the reviews. I will get the next chapter up soon.
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{reviewid: 2655212, reviewer: 'goldensnitch12'}
6th February 2012:
Another great chapter! I hope you update soon!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I am almost done with the next chapter.
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{reviewid: 2655046, reviewer: 'Fooenti'}
6th February 2012:
Hello there!
I wanted to say that this is such a wonderful story! I've read many of Harry going back to the marauders' era but none like this one. I love the fact of Teddy and Ray being there too! Soo keep writing! I can't wait to read the next chapter
Author's Response: I have read the one where he immediately tell s his parents who he is. I have always wondered about what effects it would have in the future.
Thank you!
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{reviewid: 2654876, reviewer: 'bballtomboy22'}
6th February 2012:
OH MY GOSH! OH MY GOSH! How could you be so mean and leave us with a ciffe hanger!! OH MY GOSH! OH MY GOSH!
ANYWAYS.
That was a great chaper! Can't wait for the next one! I am enjoying your writing so much! Ill be Stalking this page for the next chapter!
Author's Response: I can be a meany, just ask my daughter! There will be several more cliffies in this story, so be prepared.
Thank you!
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