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Review #26, by Rjadi The Wedding -for everyone else

16th April 2012:
This was an amazing story. I feel like it gave me closure! Thank you so much for writing such an amazing story. Its truly a really something i could not put down until i had finished it.

Author's Response: Thank you! I am glad you enjoyed this story so much that you called it 'amazing'.

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Review #27, by fatima a.k.a. Carmen Del La Rosa

30th March 2012:
Hey I love this story- my only thought is how come harry didn't leave anything in his will for Teddy

Author's Response: It has been a long time since I wrote this, but If I remember correctly, Harry had set up a trust fund for Teddy. I guess he should have left some in his will anyway.

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Review #28, by HP fan fic critic The Wedding -for everyone else

25th March 2012:
Well...It's been a while since I read a fan fiction. I think the last time I read one was in 2009.
Anyways, there were a few minor typos here and there.
There are too many British slang.
The story line was really good. The amount of action and romance was just the right amount. There are some chapters that was pretty boring but there are some chapters that are so exciting I refused to go to bed. You are quite good at ending a chapter at climax, making me stay up another 30 min to keep reading.
You incorporated most of the main characters. However, you didn't say anything about the Malfoys as they would have been trialed.
You made Harry hold out for sex for so long I was starting to wonder if he was gay. Also, you wrote this story as if everyone was on Ginny side telling Harry not to have sex with her. This is not how men thinks.
Finally, considering how you made me read through 45 chapters to the point where Harry and Ginny have sex, you could have at least described the sex in detail.
Overall, excellent story. I play to read your next book.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review.
I do want to say that I did touch on the Malfoys. It was slight and in passing. Harry had to write up a deposition on his knowledge of the Malfoy's involvement. They also were a willing family to give up much of its gold to avoid going to Azkaban. (Narcissa's help in the forest was also a factor)
I didn't want to delve to much into Harry and Ginny's first time or even their second time. This fic skirted soft-porn and I didn't want to take it over the edge. Sorry if that disappointed you.

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Review #29, by Snape 394 The Wedding -for everyone else

28th January 2012:
Thank you, Thank you and thank you again for this wonderful story.I have read quite a versions of Harry Potter's after life.Some of them are as vile and abusive as they indicate the bitterness.
This story so far is the perfect one which catches the moral which lies under the original JKR story. I have been thrilled by reading this story.Its beautiful.Its marvelous. Thank you for writing this story. I have rated it 10/10 but it seems so underrated 20/10 would be good enough for this story line.
Again thank you very much

Author's Response: You are very welcome. I am so glad that I was able to make you so happy with the story.

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Review #30, by Jessica The Wedding -for everyone else

19th January 2012:
The whole story was beautifully written and made me feel like Harry Potter wasn't over. Thanks for spending the hours writing.

Author's Response: You are very welcome and thanks for the review.

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Review #31, by Angel The Wedding -for everyone else

21st December 2011:
oh wow, that was a great story. I enjoyed it immensely, except for one part but the rest of it makes up for that. i loved the ending and the train station wedding, totally unique. I didnt like the fact that Harry and Ginny slept together before they were married, but i guess nowadays most young people dont care about that. Great story.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I am glad that you enjoyed it. I had considered having them wait until marriage, but I also wanted to make a point about true commitment. They had it even before they said the vows. That is why they were actually bonded as Ginny walked down the aisle.
(I think the baby boomers from the 60's popularized Free Love)

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Review #32, by Jaz The Taming of Zabini

12th November 2011:
Hey, i am amazed at how brilliant this story is. I would actually compare your writing skills to the j.k.Rowling herself. Literally can't stop reading it :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I am so glad you are enjoying this story.

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Review #33, by septumsempra The Wedding -for everyone else

3rd November 2011:
Alright so I enjoyed the story, good plot, good ideas. However, the only thing keeping me from loving it were the many grammatical mistakes. A lot of verbs were used in the wrong tense and words were misspelled. My suggestion is, if ever you have time, go back through your story and edit it. Other than that one issue, great story!

Author's Response: Alright duly noted.

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Review #34, by Jason Garriott Easter Traditions

28th October 2011:
I think this story is bloody good reading!! I think Harry and Ginny make a great couple!! I am glad that no one was killed on the night bus!!

Author's Response: Thank you, Harrys training and life experiences have paid off.

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Review #35, by Jason Garriott Rumors and Scrutiny Part II - Darks secrets revealed

27th October 2011:
I am loving this story!! I hope it has a happy ending to it!! But I won't know until I read the whole story!! Poor Harry and Ginny, having to be separated on Valentines Day!!

Author's Response: I am so glad that you are loving it. Hopefully, you will be pleased with the ending. Almost all who have respondded have enjoyed it.

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Review #36, by septumsempra Promises

25th October 2011:
jeesh, ginny's mental. :D She's also far too emotional for my taste, but I do like this story!

Author's Response: She's wound a bit tight about Harry. She will eventually come out of it. I am glad you are enjoying the story.

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Review #37, by Jason Garriott Ron and Hermione's big announcement

21st October 2011:
Very good story!! Ginny sure does have a fly away temper! I love Mr. And Mrs. Weasley!

Author's Response: In the books they always hinted at her brothers being afraid of her temper. There must have been a reason, soon Harry will find out.

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Review #38, by Jason Garriott Finding the Grangers

18th October 2011:
This is a great story!! Harry is being sweet to Ginny!! The Weasley family are a great family!! Harry and Ginny are ment for each other!! Ron and Hermione are ment for each other also!! I hope Hermione finds her parents soon!!

Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I am glad you are enjoying the story.

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Review #39, by Helen Aquino The Wedding -for everyone else

12th October 2011:
47th chapter , well done Manwe, well done , i'm impressed

Author's Response: Thank you I am glad you enjoyed it.

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Review #40, by ~Ginny <3 The Wedding -for everyone else

21st September 2011:
So like... Woow !

This story is ah-mazing !! It's sooo good ! I loved it how it would drop off,... And then all of a sudden... BAM!! new complication !! You are such a fabulous writer !!

Author's Response: Thank you, for the enthusiastic review!

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Review #41, by Ian Davis Healing Harry

17th September 2011:
Only one thing wrong with this chapter, killing and murder are 2 differant things. I could see how a 17 or 18 year old might not be able to dicern the differance but the older characters should see it.

Author's Response: Taking of anothers life can be traumitizing to anyone. Thank you for the review.

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Review #42, by Flying Ford Anglia The End of the Mission

7th September 2011:
Why did you kill them?
Are you crazy!

Author's Response: I regretted doing that, but I needed it for the story.

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Review #43, by Ms CeeRae The Wizengamot and Diagon Alley

2nd September 2011:
Spectacular, just like the first.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review.

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Review #44, by Ms CeeRae A New Day

2nd September 2011:
Great chapter, and I love how they honored Fred. (:

Author's Response: Thank you for the review

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Review #45, by Flying Ford Anglia Promises

1st September 2011:
Hey im loveing this story. It is awesome!!! Just one thing though, in Australia we say Koala, not Koala bear. :)
Keep up the good work though!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review and the info.

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Review #46, by Kristen Promises

31st August 2011:
I like this chapter a lot! Lots of sexual activity! ;D But it kinda concerns me how you portray Ginny. I just don't think she would want to get pregnant with harry if she knew he had to go on a secret mission to save the world (which she had figured) I REALLY love this story though! I'm just gonna soak up this story like a mosquito!

Author's Response: Ginny feared that Harry would die. She knew he had to face Voldemort. She was desperate and worried that she would never see him again. She wasn't trying to trap him, but to have his child like she had always wanted, before it was too late.
I realize that I portray Ginny as being a little more emotional and irrational that most fics. But the possibility of losing the love of your life can make a person slightly crazy.

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Review #47, by EmilyPotter2390 The Wedding -for everyone else

24th August 2011:
This story was incredible! I think you really captured their future in an amazing light! I can't wait to read more by you :)


Author's Response: Thank you and I am glad you enjoyed it so much. Now I need to get writing again.

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Review #48, by HeadlessHuntsman A New Day

21st August 2011:
I love your story telling and character development. You area very polished writer and I appreciate it. I do however have one small complaint. I do not know if this is a cultural difference in editions of JKR's works but the name is Ginevra not Ginerva I know it is a small thing but, in my case it really detracts and sets my teeth on edge. Other than that one problem your work is great.


Author's Response: I have not taken the time to correct all the mistakes I made when I wrote this story. I evidently missed that again if it was in the first chapter.
Thank you for noticing the mistake.

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Review #49, by April a.k.a. Carmen Del La Rosa

20th August 2011:

Author's Response: Thank you!

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Review #50, by April Numb!

20th August 2011:

Author's Response: Thank you!

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