Hiya, I just wanted to say how much I loved this story, I think it was great how the story was a bit different to all the others on here where all the adults are perfect, with just the right amount of angst. It's better because even though it's in the first person of a teenager, it's not just another hogwarts drama thing, especially towards the end. But again, with the perfect amount of that in the begining with them all falling out, and the Anna being a b* and everything. Rose being portayed as not majorly goody goody is nice as well, because she wouldn't just be her mother, she has Weasley blood in her too and I think it's that mixture that means she's proud enough to admit she could fall for a Malfoy, but not so proud as to refuse to have anything to do with him because he IS a Malfoy if you know what I mean? I think this is a realistic story in that the characters have develpoed in a perfectly plausable way, Ron was never one to be happy in someone elses shadow and Hermione could always be a little tactless when it came to her work and her desire to be the best. Wow, this is basically me just telling you how awesome you were. Hope you appreciate it, and thanks for the story Rosa (: Report Review
you just killd me with the ann and al thing. seriouly i just started cursing and freaking out. but besides the whole ann and al thing i really like this book. :) Report Review
I love this story. It is awesome. Please keep writing! Report Review
You know what?? This is the best fanfiction I have ever read. I haven't read many, though? But still, I think it's great. There are some gramar mistakes, but I think you could even have it published. I am sirius. But if I really had to say something, it would be that we'd almost think that this is taking place in the Muggle world... It's not magical enough... But I had to think really hard to find something to say against it... Report Review
This is one of the best stories I've read on here by far!! I wish you were still writing... Report Review
I'm really enjoying this story:) my only question is what day did they come home? After they got off the train Rose used magic and I just assumed she had at least a couple more days until her birthday seeing as how it being her seventeenth and you hadn't mentioned it. But maybe not...you're doing a great job:) Report Review
Wow. Its now 5am and I just finished. That was a pretty amazing story. And I'm so glad there was no pregnancy shit with Rose, that's really overdone. I'm glad her and Ron sorted it. Yay :) well done, you're an amazing writer! And now I'm going to sleep :) x Report Review
OMG!!! This was amazing! Report Review
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I just don't know what to say! This is amazing! I have laughed, cried, smiled, ended up so far on the edge of my seat that I fell to the floor! I stayed up till 1 o clock in the morning (falling asleep reading it) the day before (eventually of) a major GCSE exam. But I love it! I'm so sad its over but you ended it well! It was amazing! I felt so many emotions! You are such a captivating author. If you write your own novel I will have to check it out!!! I will be following your writing from now. But overall, well done and thank you for writing such an amazing story! Xx Report Review
So far, I haven't been able to stop long enough to write a review. I've only stopped now, to let you know how much I love this! I will write a full review at the end. For now, I do not have the time :P xx Report Review
Good to know somebody has a life as messed up as mine. Iīm also curious of where you get your inspiration, thereīs much adult stuff to this story (and I donīt talk about s*x). Iīm very impressed by your ability as an author and I donīt say that often. Report Review
I loved being able to take part of the day today and just read this. I was intrigued by the plot idea, and I liked being able to see how both you and Rose matured and changed throughout the story. Your writing style did change as the story went on, and Rose really grew as a character in a believable way. I feel like this should probably be left as a stand alone story, with no sequel, but if you wanted to explore some of the events in the story and flesh them out, (E.g., Ron's accident, back stories about Tony and Anna, and other characters), that'd be a great starting point. :) Thank you for writing this, this story was definitely a high point in my day! Report Review
All I can say is thank you. By far the best fic I've ever read... It was believeable, had an amazing storyline that kept me gripped the entire time I was reading and your literacy skills are excellent which only made reading it that much more pleasant. To be honest I've been procrastinating about reading the last chapter because I didn't want it to end, but I couldn't imagine a better ending. Don't ever stop writing, you have an AMAZING talent and I hope that one day you'll consider a sequel because I'd love to see what happens to Rose after all this... Once again, thank you. I won't forget this story any time soon. Report Review
I find this very very good. Report Review
I LOVE that the Malfoys are so much more understanding and are so contradictory to any prejudice from the canon.Ron is such a jerk!And so is James!I'm so disappointed in the Weasley/Potter side of the family.At least Molly was accepting though. Report Review
Favorite chapter so far!I love this story altogether though.I love any story where Scorpius is snarky like his father but still good deep down.Can't wait to keep reading! Report Review
ohmegod, I love that song! Great chapter btw, so cute hahaha. Report Review
Love you. Thank you thank you thank you for not making them boyfriend/girlfriend so fast, it would've ruined the story. I was totally freaked at the end of last chapter. D: Report Review
Absolutely BRILLIANT story. You had me addicted to the end. Great job. :) Report Review
OMG!!! Miri is so cute!!! She is my favorite character, can you try and put a couple sentences of her in the next few chapters? The "Ewww!" was so cute! Keep writing! -Parvati Report Review
This was a brilliant and very moving story. I loved every bit of it, great writing! Report Review
Ahh like mother like daughter and... like father like son. Fun so far! Report Review
I love how you work out everything so precise and detailled! :D Report Review
OH MY GOSH I think I'm going to cry! I decided in the beginning that I wouldn't review until the end so- here I am! I just wanted to let you know that I loved this story from the start! It was my first scorpius/rose fanfic and at first I wasn't sure that I would like it- but now I'm really glad I read it! Thank you for not giving up on this story and working so hard on it. I also agree with your decision to not write a sequel because its wonderful just the way it is! Anyway- loved the story! Awesome! Report Review
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