this story is amazing. please update soon! Report Review
Wow! This story is absolutely addicting - please update!! :) Report Review
I'm in love with this story. :) Report Review
I love this chapter! The voice in the story is great. Report Review
This seems like a great story! :) Report Review
wow. this is intense. i really enjoy your writing. i just hope that callie will be more happy next chapter. i want evan to forgive her... or maybe for her to punch sirius... and james... and remus... that would be excellent :) keep writing! Report Review
Right, I've spent the whole day reading this, so am going to do one review of all of it so far! I really like the story - CLIFFHANGER MUCH! - but theres a few little problems that stop me giving you a 10... i swear at the beginning you said she was brought up not to have a problem with halfbloods or something? and then her mother is all pureblood woo! type thing? that could just be my appalling memory... theres also a few spelling errors somewhere along the line... But apart from me nitpicking - i really like it (so ive favourite-ed it so update soon!)Author's Response: Oh wow i feel very special! thank you so so much for dedicating your time to it! And yes, im very cruel but it will be resolved soon enough i promise :) And yes I did say that the Stebbins were greatly against the pureblood mania. Callie's mother however wasn't always a Stebbins, she came from a very affluent, pure blood manic family, who's views have been passed on to her. Callie and her siblings have adopted the Stebbins view of blood and lineage (a great wonder to their father). And as to why their father married their mother when they had such different views, i suppose that love can conquer most things, Callie's father tends to ignore her mother's pureblood mania, and her mother in turn has slightly toned down a little. I think the family just merely ignore the difference in opinion. Or at least Callie's mother is not so vocal on her opinions ;) and i do apologise greatly for the spelling i do go over it once or twice, but there's a lot there to read and i know sometimes i must just skip over my spelling mistakes :S And dw its definitely not nitpicking i'm glad you asked! and i will one day go over and make sure my spelling and grammar is perfected in this story :) I am so very happy that you put it in your favourites wednesday will be the day i finish the next chapter and i will then post it on here! :) thank you so so much for the review!xxx Report Review
Loves! I'm happy to see a strong, feisty main female character and I like very much that you paired her with Remus. Very enjoyable story. Can't wait for the next chapter. hope we find out the juicy details about New Years!Author's Response: so so so glad you do like it! I'm so glad that you get Callie's character, I wanted her not to be a shy and retiring character, nor a lovesick slut of Sirius. I am so glad you're liking this story an update is currently having the finished touches added to it :) thanks for the review xxx Report Review
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon! This is my favourite marauders story and I am really desperate to continue reading it! Also, I hope you don't cut Evan out of the story now that he and Callie are over as I really do like Evan! I don't feel like you can really blame his for being so mean. I mean, his girlfriend cheated on him with one of his most hated people! I'm surprised he's been as nice as he has been! One again, please update!Author's Response: i am just so so glad you like it! and it's such a compliment to hear that its your fav marauders story, thats a big feat! Dw Evan will definitely not be cut, in fact he will make a very fiesty return in the next chapter or so, he may seem to have fallen out of love with Callie, but its not really the case. And i freely admit I'd absolute hate anyone who did that to me, and yet, you can help who you fall in love with. Nor can he help still retaining some of his feelings for Callie, and why at the party he was going to pretend everything was ok in front of their mothers, until the little revelation. He wanted one last night with her, and he's eager now to have it. an update is in its lasts stages i promise! thanks for the review xxx Report Review
Amazing- I just found this story, and have been reading all 19 chapters non stop. It is now 1.45 in the morning- it's that addicting. Your use use of cliffhangers is phenomenal! This last one especially is extremely suspenseful...I'm absolutely dying for more. Everything is written so beautifully and descriptively, with the last section on Cal's quidditch fiasco being completely and utterly STUPENDOUS!!! Can't wait for an update! Brilliant!Author's Response: hahah that's serious dedication! im really glad you're liking the story too :) Dw my cliffhanger will be resolved asap, im in the final stages of the next chapter! you know what as arrogant as it sound i am quite happy with my description of Callie's quidditch fiasco! and it makes me exceedingly happy to have a comment specifically on that as i worked so hard and edited it so many times to get it right! so thank you so so much! :) an update is coming thank you so much for the review xxx Report Review
Great chapter, please update!!! XOXO WildFlower! 10/10!Author's Response: so glad you liked it! :D an update is coming, I've just been a bit busy with my first term of uni, but i promise it'll be here soon!" thanks for the review Report Review
wow! poor Callie! amazing chapter tho, cant wait for the next oneAuthor's Response: dw we both know callie's far stronger than minial things such as quidditch and their mishaps! :) glad you liked the chapter an update is coming! xxx Report Review
INSANEE! I love it. When are we going to get to find out about (in detail) what happened on New Years!Author's Response: so so glad you do! and hm well i dont know whether to ever write in detail about what actually happened, or just give a fee hitns as to what happened and leave it at that :/ thanks for the review so glad you liked it :) xxx Report Review
I've read this in one sitting, and I've really enjoyed this story so far. The writing is great, it's funny, moody and sexy all rolled into one. I can't wait for the next chapter. 10/10Author's Response: the whole thing!? hahah, very impressive! so, so glad you're enjoying it though! its such a compliment to hear you say you like my writing! the next chapter is comign soon thanks so much for the review xxx Report Review
This was so good. I normally never log on to my account, but i had to to write this review. I loved this story sooo soosos much!Author's Response: i am so so glad you liked it! and more importantly took the time to log in and review the chapter as i love hearing what my readers think :) thanks so much fort he review an update is on its way :) xxx Report Review
Just started reading this today, obsessed! THIS IS SUCH A CLIFFIE D: I feel so anxious for the next update x]Author's Response: Ahh so glad you liked it! hopefully there's enough to keep you reading ill the nex chapter comes along ;) an update will be up shortly though :) thanks so much fro the review! x Report Review
You're back! Honestly, I sort-of forget the previous chapters so I'm going to re-read the whole story right after I post my review. However, this chapter is a wonderful update and I couldn't help but wonder what is going on with Callie. But anyway, just take you time for the next update :)Author's Response: pahaha oh no it shows how long I haven't updated for! I am so glad you're still readin, liking it and reviewing it too though! thanks so much i really appreciate it :) xxx Report Review
CLIFFIE T.T Hahaha I love Cal. (: Can't wait to read more! :D.Author's Response: Yeah sorry about that, biut it will be updated soon, so you won't have to wait too long for an update on such a cliffie chapter :) I'm so glad you're still enjoying Calliope's character too! thanks so much for the review xx Report Review
:) nice.sry it took me a "while" to review, but.:) btw, in the last chap, i just noticed, i thinku wrote Evan instead of Nott somewhere. p.s i liked it, tho i want more sirius stuff ;)Author's Response: lol, i happy for a review whenever :) oh thanks for telling me I'll go back, have a look and change it! and there will be more Sirius stuff soon, I promise thanks for the review as ever xxx Report Review
Hurray you updated! He he I love this story! It's always so intense...and will it be Remus, or Sirius, Remus or Sirius. And love the take on Remus, totally original, different from any other creation of him. As a matter of fact, all of your characters seem to ring true. Lily, James, Sirius...yup yup yup so keep updating, because I love your writing, it's convincing, aluring, passionate, aggrivating, humorous and beautiful.Author's Response: Yeah, finally updated :) I'm really glad you like the story and the Sirius/Remus thing isn't becoming too tiresome, you will be getting some answers about who it'll be soon! I'm really glad you like the portryal of the characters too, and I hope they're not too by the book either! This has to be the nicest compliment an author can get, so thank you so much thanks for the review xxx Report Review
Once again love the song choice! I can't stop reading this!Author's Response: They're so good (L) I adore that you're liking this title choices :D thanks for the review xxx Report Review
I have to admit I liked your story but when i recognized your title for the first chapter i was like, "I HAVE TO READ THIS!" They are such di*ks to her! I would be angry too!Author's Response: I love when reviews mention the songs used as titles! And I love even more when it's little bands like cage the elephant! Which means you have very, very good taste in music ;) Glad you liked the story too, and I hope you enjoy some of my other title choices! thanks for the review xxx Report Review
I love it!!! I love the story, and i love Callie, and I love Remus, and I love Lily, ans Annie, and Sirius, and James, and hell, i even love Peter. But most of all, I love you wonderful author of this amazing story! so update soon! Lots of love, TaylorAuthor's Response: Lol, i'm glad you love it then :) This has got to be one of THE nicest reviews ever! an update will be coming as I'm off school for the next two weeks due to easter :) thank you so so much for the review Taylor! xxx Report Review
I loved this chapter! Oh man! I can't wait for more! I loooved it! I don't know what else to say, gah Lupin and Callie, Sirius and Callie!!! Do I sense a love triangle? Haha! Love those! Glad they are back at school also ^^ Update soon! XOXO WildFlower!Author's Response: Yes, a definate love triangle going on! I'm so glad you liked the chapter, and that they're back at school! thanks for the review xxx Report Review
I LOVE IT!!! UPDATE SOON!!! !!! !!!Author's Response: glad you do! thanks for the review An update is coming ;) xxx Report Review
navigation
home
search HPFF read stories write stories login/register get help site links forums podcasts Terms of Service Site Rules contact us
categories & genres
Genre: - crossover - drama - fluff - general - horror/dark - humor - mystery - romance - action/adventure - angst - au - young adult
Popular Pairings: - harry/ginny - ron/hermione - james/lily - draco/hermione - more...
Format: - one-shot - short story - novella - novel - short story collection - songfic
quick links
my account ToS random story site rules help merchandise
fanfictionworld.net