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Review #26, by LightLeviosa5443 Kisses and Cat Wounds

30th October 2013:
That chapter was brilliant. I loved it.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

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Review #27, by ZenaShaw2101 Epilogue

18th October 2013:
oh my god that was amazing! I loved it and Im so looking at some more of your books! thanks for writing it! x

Author's Response: Aw, I'm glad you liked it so much! This one was a lot of fun to write. I hope you enjoy the others. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

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Review #28, by ihate coming up with usernames Epilogue

16th October 2013:
And then they get married. That's that. I declare it. It is done. And they all live happily, ever, after. (And James becomes the richest of them all)

Author's Response: I do imagine them getting married one day, but not for years. They're the live in the moment types. James will be the richest of all three. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

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Review #29, by ihate coming up with usernames Similarities

15th October 2013:
You better make it so they stay together. Please? For me? I love them to much to break up!

Author's Response: Lily and Matt breaking up would be so sad! Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

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Review #30, by ihate coming up with usernames Kisses and Cat Wounds

15th October 2013:
Lily, you did the best thing in your life. AND THEN YOU LET HIM GO! Love the story

Author's Response: Haha, I'm glad you like it so much! Lily can still get him back. ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

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Review #31, by Liana Epilogue

22nd September 2013:
I guess I thought you'd have them married:D with kids. As I said before I wish you'd write a sequel. But I also want the entire Albus series even more. You mentioned your sister. What ever happened to her stories? Anyway loved this story and love all of the next gen characters you've created.

Author's Response: I thought about having them married, but so many romance fics end in marriage, and I wanted to leave this one open-ended, especially given everything Matt and Lily have been through and their personalities. I don't see them getting married quickly. I see them dating for quite a few years, and then eventually tying the knot in a very small ceremony. Sorry, no sequel to this one, though!

My sister hasn't written fanfic in years and she didn't like the fics she had up on HPFF, so she deleted them. She still writes original fic, though. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

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Review #32, by Liana Lycanthropy and All

22nd September 2013:
That almost made me teary. The ending was so beautiful. I'll bet they'll have kids some day and they'll be as well adjusted as Sophie. I'll be moving on to your fifth Albus novel. I remember when I fist discovered your writing and all because of your pen name. My youngest daughter loves ducks so I figured that anyone with duck in their name had to be good:D

Author's Response: Aww, I'm glad you enjoyed it so much! Honestly, I am undecided about whether Matt and Lily would have kids, given Lily's current opinion of them and Matt's obvious fear of passing on his lycanthropy. But who knows? If they did, I imagine they'd only have one. I hope you enjoy the 5th Albus novel!

Haha, that's an awesome way of discovering my fics! I adore ducks as well (which is probably obvious). Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

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Review #33, by Liana Questions

22nd September 2013:
Hard to believe this story is almost finished. I've enjoyed it so much. I can understand Lily's nerves. If Matt weren't so nice he could've easily broken up with her. It's very late and I'm too tired to say much else:D

Author's Response: This one went really quickly! I don't remember how long it took to write, but it's definitely my shortest novel. Matt's definitely too nice to break up with Lily, and he's also too in love with her. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

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Review #34, by Liana A Proposal

21st September 2013:
You are really going to have to continue this story line. It's hard to believe that Harry and Ginny could be grandparents in this universe you're creating. I love Matt and Lily as a couple.

Author's Response: Sorry! I really have no plans on continuing this one. It's a stand alone novel. I have to concentrate on finishing my Albus series. I'm not sure if I'll be ready to leave their universe after I finish it, though, so it's possible I'll write another fic with the same characters.

The thought of Harry and Ginny as grandparents is so crazy! I'm glad you like Matt and Lily as a couple. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

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Review #35, by Liana Similarities

21st September 2013:
Ahh, now the wheels are turning. I wonder how she'll bring this up to Matt. I know she's going to. Someone else asked what happened to Amanda so now I'm wondering about that too.

Author's Response: You'll find out! You're right that she'll somehow bring it up, though, because she's Lily and she won't be able to keep it to herself. Amanda wasn't mentioned much in this fic because she didn't have a big role. She's still around, though. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

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Review #36, by Liana News

19th September 2013:
I was afraid there for a second that Lily had suddenly figured out that Matt was a werewolf. I feel like I've been reading your stories for a while now and your characters are like canon to me when you're looking at the next generation.

Author's Response: Aw, I'm glad you think of my characters as canon! That's so sweet. Lily might've figured it out. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

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Review #37, by Liana Fatal Flaw

19th September 2013:
I'm sure glad Lily talked to Rose. I don't think that if she figures out Matt's secret she should mention it at all. It'll be best if she waits for him to tell her. I don't think Rose will be that shocked. She lives in your world and certainly must know that Bill and Sophie are werewolves.

Author's Response: It would be best for Lily to wait for Matt to tell her, but that could take months or years and Lily is impatient and probably won't be able to wait that long. She won't be incredibly shocked, given that she's related to Bill and Sophie. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

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Review #38, by Liana Scars

19th September 2013:
I wonder if Lily will figure it out eventually when Matt gets sick whenever there's a full moon. You gave me such a homey feeling describing the family dinners. It''s a pain when you have to share a big secret with someone but you're afraid they won't understand after you tell them. I'm really getting into this story.

Author's Response: You'll have to wait and see if Lily figures it out! I'm glad you liked the way I described the family dinner; I've got a lot of experience with those. Secrets are tough, for both sides. It's one big hurdle Matt and Lily will have to get past. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

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Review #39, by Liana I Love You

18th September 2013:
That was such a sweet chapter. I love it when authors describe food:D I wonder what family members who know about Matt are going to think when Lily brings him home and introduces him as her boyfriend. I'm sure you'll let us know. I think I'm obsessing over Matt's being a werewolf:D
This is such a fun story.

Author's Response: Aw, I'm glad you like it! I'm never sure on describing food, because I don't want to go overboard with it, but I like doing it. I love food. Since Lily's parents already know Matt, I'm not going to do a big 'Lily bringing Matt home to meet the parents' scene. But it will be mentioned. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

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Review #40, by Liana Falling in Love

18th September 2013:
Lily and Matt may be acting like teenagers but they are so adorable like that. I can understand how they feel. I've even seen older people who act kind of squirrelly when they fall in love. There are the giggles and dreamy looks--the distraction with each other. You do a great job of portraying that.

Author's Response: They're definitely acting like teenagers, which is pretty funny. I've seen older people act that way, too, and it's kind of sweet in a way. I'm glad you like the way I portrayed it. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

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Review #41, by Liana Nothing to Worry About

18th September 2013:
Lily is just asking for trouble when she keeps worrying about what Matt might mean when he says something rather than take it at face value. She doesn't know any better, though, I guess. Her experiences are telling her to be suspicious all the time. She really does have to take into account that Matt is Al's best friend so he can't be too strange.

Author's Response: Lily is definitely asking for trouble. But you're right; her previous relationships made her who she is today and she gets suspicious at the smallest things. She keeps having to reassure herself that if Matt were involved with anything sketchy, Albus would've warned her. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

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Review #42, by Liana A Gentleman

15th September 2013:
I thought it was hilarious that Bradley was late for work because he couldn't Apparate with a hungover Muggle in his alley. I think I answered my own question. Lily doesn't seem to have a clue that Matt is a werewolf.

Author's Response: I thought that was pretty funny, too! Chances are the Muggle wouldn't remember seeing Bradley apparate, but he didn't want to take the chance. Haha, I suppose you did! Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

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Review #43, by Liana First Date

15th September 2013:
That was so sweet. I'm always charmed when I encounter a male of any age who has good manners. I forgot--does Lily know Matt is a werewolf?

Author's Response: Me too! Men with good manners and who are polite are very attractive in my opinion. At this point, Lily does not know Matt is a werewolf. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

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Review #44, by Liana Plans

15th September 2013:
It must be so difficult to have to ask family members if you can go out with someone. Maybe awkward's the word. I haven't been on this site for a long time. I was surprised at the new format. So far it's working for me. I'm happy that Lily was able to finally ask Matt out. I could really feel her pain, though, before she asked him. That was very brave to ask him in front of Albus.

Author's Response: I think it'd be really awkward. Luckily I've never been in that situation, but I imagine the Weasleys and Potters go through it a lot since their family is so huge. I'm glad you like the new format of the site! Lily is very excited about having asked Matt out. Albus had already given her the 'okay' so she wasn't too nervous about that aspect of it. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

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Review #45, by HallowGlow Epilogue

14th September 2013:
This was a really good story and I liked reading it and I have been reading others of yours and could not help but notice that Amanda from your next generation is not here and that made me think that you may kill her off in the other books later please don't if you are thinking about it is just a hunch of mine so I ghood be very wrong but thank you and I love your stories and im really excited did you see that there is going to be a movie Fantastic beast and where to find them I am very excited.

Author's Response: I'm really glad you liked this story! When I started writing this I didn't know what Amanda would be doing at this point in her life, so I intentionally didn't mention her for a while (it was fairly easy, since this fic is from Lily's POV). I think I mentioned her once or twice. I won't be killing her off in my other fic, so don't worry.

I did hear about Fantastic Beasts and I think it's fantastic! So excited! Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

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Review #46, by Nefertari Thompson Epilogue

13th September 2013:

Author's Response: Aww, I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

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Review #47, by onestop_hpfan18 Epilogue

7th June 2013:
This was such a gooey, sugary sweet epilogue. I think I overdosed on sugar reading it (but in the best way possible because sugar highs are the best feelings). And I especially love reading sweet ends to romances. I also like that you didn't have the epilogue as their wedding as I think it would have been a huge leap for Lily since she seemed far from ready in her life to get married throughout the whole story and even if it had taken place years later it would have been harder to get into after being used to the character you established for her. Sorry it took me this long to finish reading this, but better late then never. (:

Author's Response: Aww, I'm glad you liked it! It was even more sugary sweet before I rewrote it (too much so). But I didn't want this one to end with a marriage or engagement because that's how I ended Beyond the Shadow. So I figured I'd end it at a wedding (just not Lily's), just how it began. But Lily's whole perspective changed in between. She does have a long way to go before she's ready for marriage, though. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

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Review #48, by onestop_hpfan18 Lycanthropy and All

7th June 2013:
Awww, I love Lily and Matt even more after this chapter. Nothing can deter them from being together, even his lycanthropy and the uncertain future. They belong together.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! They really are perfect for each other. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

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Review #49, by Luke Epilogue

20th May 2013:
I really liked the story, it's definitely not the sort of thing I'd usually read and I found it very pleasant.

When I read the first chapter and worked out which partnership the book would be based on, I do admit to making a whooping noise and being generally very excited.

I like the reality you've given all the characters, Lily's almost fear of relationships which could have been expanded on slightly as well as the journey she takes as a character parallel and intertwined to her relationship with Matt in becoming an investigator.

You really do show a wonderful character arc in this story in which the characters do change and grow as the relationship progresses and it was wonderful to read about.

... I do get the feeling that your AP series may go beyond 7 books... as with him always at work and doing stuff, dark and interesting stuff must be going on as well as his relationship with the fiancee which also proves interesting... maybe there will be a time jump?

Overall a solid piece of work that had me very interested and looking forward to updates.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it, especially since it's not what you usually read.

Aw, very happy you liked the ship! They just fit together so well. I probably could've expanded Lily's fear of relationships, but this was meant to be a shorter story, so I didn't go as deep as I could've if I wanted to make it really long.

More than seven? Ahh! Yes, Albus's work is very interesting and would make for a good novel, but I'll have to see how I feel after I finish the next three. I might want to try something else. Who knows. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

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Review #50, by HGPotter Epilogue

14th May 2013:
I loved this story and I look forward to reading the next Albus novel because I loved all of them and I will be so excited when you post it.
All of your stories that I have reviewed on I gave a 10/10 because you writing is amazing.
I'm 13 and I am still working on my writing skills and I hope to get better. Thank you for writing such amazing stories and I hope you keep writing forever and ever and ever and ever!!

Author's Response: Aw, I'm so glad you liked it! I posted the new Albus story today, so check it out and let me know what you think!

Keep writing! The best way to get better at writing is to keep writing and reading. I'm so glad you like my stories so much. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

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