these are addicting 3 stories in 4 days!!!

Author's Response: Very cool! I'm glad you've enjoyed them.

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YES, I KNEW IT, it was actually pretty obvious!!!

Author's Response: Haha, that's cool that you figured it out! Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

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Wow.. I found all your albus storys really amazing! I only found them 2 nights ago and have just finished the third! There just like the real harry potter books! Love them!

Author's Response: Wow! That's some impressive speed reading. I'm so glad you've enjoyed the stories that much. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

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I don,t trust Balladanis at all, i mean he is doing mind reading on a Student that is wrong and I think Albus should bring that to the head masters attn . I don't trust that dark arts teacher as far as I could throw him and that is not to far at all.

Something about that man makes the hairs on the back of my neck stand up.

Author's Response: There's definitely something fishy about him. You're right to suspect him! Whatever it is, it will be revealed by the end of the story. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

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I believe Albus is going to solve this one and get yet one more award for services to the School. Albus to much like his Dad Harry not to be involved with stopping trouble. In fact in the words of Olivander I think it is clear we can expect great things from you MR. Potter.

Author's Response: Albus is a lot like his father. He also has a bit of a "saving people thing". Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

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And the Plot thickens. this is getting real good. Who Ever wrote this I want to say to them they have a Gift for the Harry Potter Universe. Please Keeps writing Albus Potter Books. I have read like there and I love them.

I am a massive Potter fan.

Author's Response: Aw, thank you! I'm definitely going to keep writing the stories. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

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I would love to see a Albus Potter story where the whole Potter family takes a trip to the United States. and Visits a School for Witch Craft and Wizardry her in my country., That would be Awesome.

I mean With Orion Cody being and American. We kneed a America trip . But before some suggests I write it Hold fire I can,t write I don,t have a creative bone in my body. That is why I am a Ham Radio OPP.

I and I have a Inkling that Albus is going to be a Dumbledoor level Wizard due to his power and the fact his wand is made by the Leprechauns and it chose him it is an extremely powerful wand. Evan more powerful then the Elder wand of Dumbledoor.

In fact if I were a betting man witch I use to be many years ago I would venture as far as to say that Albus will become the youngest Headmaster Hogwarts has ever seen.

Author's Response: There are probably stories about Albus going to the United States. It's a fairly common plot point. Although I have no idea who Orion Cody is.

In my story, Al's wand was not made by a leprechaun. Nor will he become headmaster. Although that would make for an interesting story. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

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Who Is Amanda? Albus only has 2 siblings James and Lilly. And who is Matt I thought Scorpius Malfoy was Albus,s best bud.

Author's Response: Amanda is Albus's friend. His siblings are obviously James and Lily. Matt is Albus's best friend in this story. Scorpius is Albus's best friend in some other stories, but him being Al's best friend is not canon. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

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I love the story so far But I Hope they are not going to try to raise Voldemort he is dead Harry Potter destroyed Voldermort years and years ago. The Dark Lord is Dead and will remain Dead. all of the horcourxes were destroyed By Potter and Dumbledoor. Tom Riddle,s Soul was vanquished for ever. The Dark lord will never return. So how can one talk to Voldermort when he is Dead as a Door Nail.???

Author's Response: They may try, but Voldemort is indeed, dead. Technically, you could talk to him if you had the Resurrection Stone. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

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I got my work back on my book Albus potter and the dungeon of merlins mist i will up soon i will tell u when it up hopefully your next book will be up then and if u can, can u tell me the tittle of your next book

Author's Response: Albus Potter and the Keeper of the Hallows, and the first chapter is now up. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

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Hiya, love this story. Sorry 4 not reviewing b4 now. Grt series.

Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

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never mind the last review my brother deleted the books from my computer and how far are you in the next albus boook

Author's Response: Oh that's too bad. I'm a few chapters into it, hoping to continue once NaNo is over and post the first chapter once I get into a good writing groove. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

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hi its Albus S Potter this is my new name Prongslet becaues i lost the password on my old one as you know ive finaly got my book finished just waiting for chapter 1 to be validated its called Albus Potter and the Dungeon of Merlins Mist i will tell you when the chapter is up bye for now

Author's Response: Hi! Your Albus Potter story sounds intriguing, based on the title. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

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Hi!! I have read ALL your fiction involving Albus, Matt, Amy and their friends. I am ready to start on Beyond the Shadow, even though I am always reluctant to read W'sIP. Are you intending to finish? And are you going to continue on with Albus and Matt etc? I want to hear about the World Cup!!! lol. Anyway, I thought I would drop you a line to let you know I thought you did an amazing job, especially the 'Australiaficationing' you did with Matt and Amy's early story. I am in Australia. Only one point...what you call the first floor (ie the one you enter on) we call the ground floor. Cheers :) jezzy

Author's Response: Aw, I'm glad you've read all of my stories! Hope you've enjoyed them. I'm always reluctant to read WIPs as well, but I do intend on finishing Beyond the Shadow, no matter how long it takes me. I've been very busy with grad school and most recently with NaNoWriMo, but I hope to get back to writing fan fic soon.

I've already written the World Cup part! And I'm very excited to continue writing the fourth Albus story so once I get into a good groove of writing I'll post the first chapter.

Good to know I did a decent job of 'Australiaficationing'! Oh, yeah, I always forget about the first floor versus ground floor thing. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

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I really liked the story.just wondering if you could throw in a romance in there for albus in the next one. also I was wondering about the animagas. looking forward to more.

Author's Response: I'm glad you like the story! I probably won't start putting any romance in until their fifth year. They're only going to be 14 in the next one and romance has never been my main focus for this series anyway. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

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Sorry about all the reviews with asking about storys but I got a great idea and I'm sticking to it no mater what it is going to be called albus potter and the... What is the title u have to wait I will tell u when it's up

Author's Response: I have no idea what the title of my new story is going to be. You'll find out when it's up. ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

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Thanks I think I will go with lily but my user name is going to be different because I frogot my password (I typed Albus S Potter in the name part) they new one will be like Prongslet or something I will tell u what it is when I'm reviewing the next book or telling u my book is done ok bye for now till the next review

Author's Response: Ok, sounds good! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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Nice first chapter. Good way to start. My only complaint is your foreshadowing here is too heavy, please stop giving everything away ahead of time.

Author's Response: I guess everyone likes different amounts of foreshadowing. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

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how i said i have a new idea i really have 3 one for each potter but i dont know which one to start with now i dont want u saying James becaues hes first born i just want u to pick the tittle that intrests u the most so here they r:James potter and the Phoenix Ruby, Albus Potter and the Pegasus Jewel and Lily Potter and the Unicorn Jade.
Im asking u becaues u write such great story so pick the tittle that intrests u the most and plz put it in your reponse and one last question have you got a tittle for book 4 and what chapter r u on can u tell me that to plz ok bye for now

Author's Response: Personally, I would go with Lily because I think there are more stories here that center around Albus and James so a Lily story would be a nice change. They all sound interesting, though. Aw, I'm so glad you like my stories. Nope, I still don't have a title for the fourth Albus story. I'm on the fourth chapter. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

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Another nice story, thank you,

River

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

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Forget my last reviews I got an entirely diffirint idea to use can't wait for book 4 bye

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i dont know how to pm or the meet the ahtors page so i will talk in reviews. I guss i have to tell you what i ment by the new map and the maraders den. I ment that Albus and his freinds are trying to make a name for themselfs so they make the seconed marader which consists of Albus P.(Prongs)
Jake H.(Moony) Jamie W.(Padfoot) and Zane W.(Wormtail). So the new map idea is that they make a new map becaues the first one gets stolen so they find a way to make one and later on burnt when they find it. The Maraders Den idea is that they will look for a secret room (Zane finds but forgets where) to just relax and use as there prank planing room so they find it it empty so they make it there own and use it for Project A. Hope thats ok bye

P.S cant wait for book 4

Author's Response: If you're interested in joining the forums (they're awesome and great for help on fan fic) there's a link on the right side of the HPFF page. Yeah, your idea is slightly different from mine which is good, although I saw in your next review that you're using a different idea anyway. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

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I forgot to put this in my last review and since I can't review again in the same chapter here I am. I wanted to know if you got any tips on writing these kind of books I've started the first book in my Albus adventures (it kinda has your idea of a new map and the maraders den but not going to saw more) and I have thought of the whole plot but can't find words for it. So any tip plz I'm only on chapter 1 I rellay need help so if u got tips can u tell me oh and plz hurry with book 4 I really want to read it ok bye

Author's Response: The best advice I have is to just start writing and try to make a habit of writing every day or every other day. Everyone's writing process is different and you have to find out what works for you. But consistent writing is always helpful.

I have no idea what the main plot of your Albus story is, but I really do not like people taking the main plot points of my stories. The new map/marauders den idea is my idea and one of the main plot points. I have seen the 'new marauders' thing done before, so I won't claim that that's entirely original (although I've never actually read anything else with that plot, just heard of it being done before). As I've said before, feel free to use a professor's name or something small like that, but please don't use my main plot points.

If you want to discuss that further (or writing in general) feel free to PM me on the forums or post on my Meet the Author page. I'm under the same username at the forums. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

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whens the next book coming out i have been waiting for so long (well not that long but it feels like it). Have you gottin a name for it yet if u have can u tell me. and plz hurry up with the story plz!

Hope it come out soon bye

Author's Response: I'm not sure when it's coming out. I'm working on chapter four right now. I've had an insanely busy summer and haven't had a lot of time for writing. I don't have a title for it yet. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

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Great story! I really enjoyed your fic. It was hard for me to walk away from my computer!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

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