yay she finally admitted it!!!i cant wait until you have them get together!i really love this story hope you update soon.Author's Response: :D i had a blast with this chapter Report Review
lol, I loved this chapter :PAuthor's Response: :DD thankies!! Report Review
hahaha, lily evans, fall to the hotness that is james potter!
i loved all their note passing. and the sirius/james insinuating, very nice ;) and i must of course mention how much i agree with you/lily about james being able to pull off glasses. in my head, hes just perfect with them! and the last line is just hilarious
oh, and thankyou for updating so quickly :DAuthor's Response: :D thank you!! i realize this was a bit of a monumentous moment/filler chap...so the next one will probs be big and take forever and a day to right... :) Report Review
I freaking love it!! I can't wait for more and keep up the super good work! :DAuthor's Response: tehe! thank you!! Report Review
wow i loved it. the last two lines made my whole life. oh yes! i love your writing and i love how lily is sarcastic and stuff it just makes my day! thanks so much!Author's Response: lol thanks! i'm really happy you like my writing :P Report Review
okay, I like the idea of the story, but who is telling it?
There was no name what so ever so I'm really confused, but I like it! I guess I'll have to read more to find out :)Author's Response: hehehee.. yes, that was my intention for the first chap, lol. i wanted ppl to be like '...wait...what?' lol. thanks for reading! Report Review
The part where Sirius said he would die for James was actually the most adorable thing I've ever heard. I almost cried.
This chapter was really great, and I really like the way you portray James and Sirius!Author's Response: !! thank you so much! i absolutely love their relationships. if you want to read a good story that portrays their relationship PERFECTLY, read teh memory box (and i promise, i don't know the author or anything so i'm not telling you to read this story because the author's my BFF or something...the memory box is legit perfect. lol.) Report Review
i'm so sorry its taken me so long to read/review this. but im finally here!! ahhh adored this chapter :) its so amusing! the carpets, the 'my lady' ghost, and of course the ending.
awww. they are such a love hate relationship, and i love how its bringing lily and james closer. and of course, i'm muchly excited for james and lily's "scenes" together ;)
LOVED this chapterAuthor's Response: :DD thanks! the next chaop should be up in...october? lol. but anyways, i'm really happy you liked the chapter!! i'm really excited for james and lily's scenes to.. Report Review
thank you thank you thank you for updating! Please write more soon!Author's Response: :D update no later than october 31st. promise. but it'll probably be wayy before thatt. Report Review
great story!! please update soon! :D Though just constructively maybe it would help if there were chapter summaries in the chapter summary bit? Love the Rom & Jule quotes though!! Can't wait to see what happens! :DAuthor's Response: :D thanks! my next chapter will be up (at latest) in october. but my tentative date would be late september Report Review
lol wow this is really cute and funny! congrats on writing such a great story :D!Author's Response: :D thank you! Report Review
Yes! New chapter! :) It was great as always. Very funny. Lily makes me laugh. And so does Marlene. And Sirius. And Marlene likes him! Ah! That's so exciting! And James and Lily are talking about it! Which is more exciting, because they're talking! :D So, anyway FABULOUS story here! :)
PS Wanna know something funny? My name is Katie. I have very close friends named, Kate, Kira, Kara, and Kelsie. True story. It's very confusing. :)Author's Response: :D thank you! i'm so happy you like the story! and yes, james and lily are talking! d'you know what BLOWS? i wrote, like, half of chap seven the other night. but my laptop whizzed out and deleted it! and like...it was actually good! ahh!! blow my lifeee!!
p.s. Katie, Kate, Kira, Kara, and Kelsie? that's so freaking legit. Report Review
I'm performing romeo and juliet at my school!! yaay
Ok, so that was a tiny bit random, anyway
I like the chocolate idea, so cute
september? bullocksAuthor's Response: i know! i wish i could write it sooner! but i'm not a writer. and i have a lot of ideas for this story, so i'm trying to put it all in...well. lol. sorry! Report Review
i enjoyed that chapter :) it was longer too! James is lovely. with the bag of chocolates. aww, its so sweet that they have this little inside joke! and its hilarious how close mercutio and sirius' character actually are. awesome chapter!Author's Response: thank you! when i read romeo and juliet, sirius was all i could think about when i read mercutio! Report Review
"What are they, some cult? Seriously, do they think Malfoy is the God or something? Because, y'know, I never actually imagined dear ole' Jesus with hideous platinum blonde hair."
funniest thing EVER, i swear. thank you, thank you, for making my day:)Author's Response: hahha! thanks for making my day with this review! Report Review
Can't wait for the update (even if it is in September...=)Author's Response: :D yes i know! i'm trying to write soon but with dropping my sister off at college and starting up school it'll be hard.. Report Review
LOL! Seriously? Haha!
Update soon!Author's Response: updating :D Report Review
i love this! it reminds me of my teacher making my class perform the play...i was much like lily cuz she gave me juliet...lol. keep posting i wanna see what she does when missy makes them kiss ok? lol :)Author's Response: haha yeah i look forward to writing that scene Report Review
I actually died laughing when James said that thing about Marlene's monthlys ahahaha he's so great. I love him and Lily together they're so cute. And I love your Lily, she's so much more interesting and fiery than typical Lilies. The whole Romeo-Juliet idea is so great! Please update soon!!Author's Response: thank you!! i like my lily to! she is no nerd!! Report Review
ah this is epicly funny. I love the fact that their entire conversation is set around marlene being moody. i suppose every relationship needs a starting point...
her calling him James is sweet :) can't wait to read the next chapter (with all its romeo and juliety glory)Author's Response: hahah, yes. i haven't really gotten to romeo adn juliet, but i'm getting there! Report Review
i love the complaining and bitchy comments of lily! im enjoying reading this. its so amusing. Their insults in this chapter are increasingly worse, i love them. its like an insult-off.
haha when mcgonagall was taking house points off them at the beginning, i was half expecting her to scream "A plague o' both your houses"Author's Response: omg, i seriously almost put that in there!! hah! Report Review
this has had me in absoloute hysterics. and i think i like it even more because i know the play really after studying it for school. Missy. wow, i so love her. and her use of the pet name "siri", not that he doesn't deserve it though. i do love all his lily-taunting thoughAuthor's Response: haha yes. you'll soon see missy is an enigma, that girl ;) Report Review
i read the summary, and i was just so excited by the idea behind this story. i love that you have shakespeare quotes for the chapter titles, it just works so well. and i love the first chapter. SOOO funny. and i can't wait to read lily's reaction to this ;)Author's Response: thanks!!! Report Review
hahahahaha this cracks me up every time.and its nice 2 see that lilly and james are getting some."alone" time!!!Author's Response: :D thanks!! yeah, i'm really excited to write their 'alone time' line-reviewing moments. lol. Report Review
oh my goodness. james and marlenes monthlies?!?!? funniest thing i have EVER read! holy crap i am still not over it. love it. love it. love it. times a million.Author's Response: haha thanks!! the next chapter is in the queue. Report Review
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