A day alone... Im not too sure about that, they might have to leave town for that to happen.
Good chapter :)

Author's Response: Thank you! For a minute I was thinking I should just quit writing this thing :)

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That's a little weird

Author's Response: Um...thank you? I don't really know how to respond to that...

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Wow!totally unexpected I don't think she should have kissed him back though.

Author's Response: Well her not kissing him back wouldn't make for a very good dramione story now would it? :)

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Very well written :)

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Harry to the rescue! Yea! Can he embaeress everyone and make the happy couple come out still happy? the next chapter can only tell :)

Author's Response: he very well might just do that!

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When is the rest coming out?? Nice story! :)

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you can't leave us now! please post the next chapter soon ... It's great so far x

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i loved it plz write more

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Oh come on!! You can't leave it hanging. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Author's Response: That's the fun of Cliffy's! TeeHee.

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Oh please write the next chapter quickly!

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Nice story! Keep it up!

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Haha. Pansy scares me to. She is so possessive.

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I love Draco's response, "Because I wanted to"

I love that they love kissing each other and that he thinks she is beautiful.

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Grr.. Ronald is such a prat!!

Grr and Yea to Draco. One he is a prat too but his is recovering with such a sweet kiss.

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Author's Response: Thank you for your reviews! Gotta love Draco though..hehe

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That kiss was unexpected. I like it!!

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I quite like this story a lot. I like how you got straight into it instead of taking lots of time.

Author's Response: Thank you! No reason to beat around the bush when its much funner this way :)

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This is a really good first chapter, well done :)

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Cissa is almost a saint,I liked her introduction into the chapter. I think she understood where Draco was coming from.
Draco wanting hermione to cheer for him, I got the same impression myself. He is the team captain isnt her? If she cheers for him it would be like cheering for the Slytherin team. But to show support just for Draco himself, that is different. Boys can be so thick, even smart ones with smart girlfriends.
Your not planning on putting Draco in the hospital wing already are you? I'd like to see atleast one match before he goes down ;)
till next chapter, well done.

Author's Response: Thank you! you'll just have to wait and see ;)

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good one ! can't wait for the next chapter !
by the way i'm their daughter !

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good one !
by the way i'm their daughter !

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Hmm... Got to the good stuff early I see. Always liked Draco the best out of them all, this is fun. Good job!

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i wonder what lucius will say cant't wait to read what will happen next plz keep writing and plz update soon can't wait your story is AWESOME :):):):)!;);););)

Author's Response: Thank you! I am finally updating :)

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Omg showing the scar-first thing in my head-my gosh, NOBLE! then lucuis shows up. I'm like sh*t. GREAT. OMG THERE'S NOT ANOTHER CHAPTER YET? andOMG ur prego! Congrats! :D

Author's Response: Thank you for the congrats! Sorry it's taken so long but I did update the story!


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Omg that's an amazing story can't wait to hear what lucius will say plz upfate quicker than last time it was killing me waiting. Luv your story can't wait to read more :):):):):)!;):):):):)

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ah why do you do this to me.i NEED to read more hurry

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