OMIGOD HOW ON EARTH COULD YOU LEAVE ME HANGING LIKE THIS? THIS REVENGE IDEA IS ABSOLUTELY POSITIVELY GENIUS AND I LOVE YOUR STORY AND YOUR WRITING IS FANTASTIC. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!Author's Response: I'm so glad that you liked this chapter. I am touched and flattered by your review. Thanks! Report Review
Hey~ I've got one or two things to say before I continue reading. The first is a bit of constructive criticism - please, always try to make sure the reader can tell who's saying what. I got a little lost a few times, especially when Hermione's lines and Draco's actions were on the same line.
Secondly, I really like this story, and it seems pretty plausible to me... Maybe just throw in a few more descriptive details?
Whatever you do, please keep writing!Author's Response: I hope you find that I corrected that issue in future chapters. I just haven't gone back and edited the beginning chapters. Hope you like it better further on. Thanks for the review! Report Review
Oh fantastic! I love when jokes are played in fan fiction--as long as they're done right--and yours is no exception! I'm curious to see how far you make them go with it! An idea I have for you to further the payback joke is that Blaise & Hermione should pretend to date and write letters to each other (as pen pals) to confuse Draco even more! Update this again soon, so excited for the joke to play out! :)Author's Response: thanks so much for the idea and for the review! I'm so glad to hear you are pleased with where this story is going. Report Review
Finally! I have been coming to HPFF every day just to check if you have uploaded a new chapter and it finally paid off! Yay! Please, oh, please don't take that long next time!
Anyway, about the chapter. It was great as always! I love it that you thought of including this little prank thing into your story since it makes it even more interesting. Good call! Although I hope this doesn't end up hurting Hermione's and Draco's relationship in the long run since Draco is a very proud person and could end up taking it way too personally. But still, a great idea!
A great new year to you and hope you have time to upload a new chapter soon! :)
LilianAuthor's Response: awww. thanks. I'm so happy to hear that you like the story enough to check so much! I hope not to take so long this time, but I start my next semester this coming week. we'll see. Thank you so much for being patient. Thanks for the review! Report Review
I really enjoyed this chapter!! Please write more soonAuthor's Response: I'm literally just the tiniest bit away from being done with the next chapter and I've outlined a few others, sorry for the wait. Thanks so much for the review! Report Review
Really good chapter, I liked it!:) and the previous one, too.
Draco and Hermione did a great job on planning it all - or at least, that's how I think it will turn out. I am so excited abour what's coming Author's Response: Thanks so much, I'm sorry about the wait. College is crazy. :D Hope to update soon. Report Review
I just have to say that I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story and keep checking back for more! I'm new to this site, and I read a few short fics of Dramione, but they were all unrealistic and cheesy. You have great character development, and so many brilliant ideas! Keep writing, I cant' wait to read what's next!!!Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm so glad it's realistic. That's what I'm going for. I'm sorry It's been a while. The next chapter is started, just not finished. Hope to update soonish. Thanks! You made my day! Report Review
i am literally in love with this. i usually don't read fanfiction because i feel really awkward reading it, but this is amazing! please update soon. c:Author's Response: I'm so glad that you like it. I hope to update soon, but we will see. Thank you so much for reviewing! Report Review
Love it! Really, its brilliant. I adore dracomiones, and yours is super. Post more soon? Pretty please? :)Author's Response: thanks so much for the review. I am glad you enjoy it so far. Report Review
So, time has this funny way of distracting me, and I went through this very long period of forgetting to look at all my hpff stories that I so desperately wait to be uploaded. Needless to say, I've been working my way through and checking up on them again and I was SO HAPPY to see multiple new chapters on your story! (Sorry, that shows how long I've been away... haha.)
So, yeah; through the past couple chapters I've barely been able to keep my hyperventilating-excitement muted with all of their dramatic pen-pal realizations! I find myself grinning like a maniac at my computer screen as Hermione notices Draco's fear of horses and Draco realizes Hermione HAS to be Grace from her mug and the letter. I'm growing very attached to Dramione, specifically YOUR Draco and Hermione. Your characters are so real and amazing, they go perfectly together, and it makes me happy. :)
I really, really hope you can blow me away with another chapter soon because now I'm all pumped to read more. :) This is really one of the best fan fictions I've read! Good luck with your busy life and trying to please impatient fans like me! (Just kidding, take your time. Really.)
You're totally awesome! God bless. Author's Response: awww. you can forget about my story as much as you want if it results in you writing reviews like this when you remember my story! This story made my day, no, it made my month. lol. You are so sweet! Thank you. I'm so glad that you like where this story and that you find my characters to be real, that was my hope. Thank you, thank you, thank you! You're the best! :D Report Review
Ahh, where is the next chapter?!
Haha, I can't wait for it.
I hope it's soon!
-KCAuthor's Response: haha, I'll see what I can do. thanks so much for reviewing! Report Review
fantastic! can't wait to see what happens at the dance!Author's Response: Thanks for the review, glad you enjoyed it! Report Review
prettyyy good!!! Im impressed! Keep updating :)) xoxoAuthor's Response: Thanks for the review. Report Review
Oh my god! Damion is Malfoy! I was so freaked when I first read that snippet at the end! OH MY GOD! XDAuthor's Response: haha. thank you so much for reviewing! Report Review
I don't know how I stumbled upon this story but I love it. Just as an idea to catch your muse, why doesn't McGonagall make an announcement that after the dance they can reveal their pen-pals because it went over so well...IDK just a suggestion!Author's Response: I'm so glad, both that you found it and that you like it. Thank you so much for the review and the idea. I appreciate it! Report Review
Just stumbled upon this story, and I love it! Your characterization is wonderful and the plot is really believable, I can't wait to read about the dance!Author's Response: I'm glad you stumbled upon it and that you like it. Thank you so much for the review!! Report Review
Yea an update! I forgive you for the long wait. It was worth it! This is my favorite story at the moment. I love that they included Pansy. Please try to update soon!Author's Response: aww, thanks for the forgiveness. I'm glad you felt it was worth the wait. Thank you so much for your review of kind words, they warm my heart. Report Review
frakin updatw plealeaAuthor's Response: thank you for reviewing Report Review
I loved it! I love the prep before a night out! really paints a picture of how everyone looks and gives a sense of everyone's feeling! I think I have all the pen-pals figured out! And I like that Hermione has kind of figured out hers is Draco!! Another excellent chapterAuthor's Response: I"m so glad you liked this chapter, it was certainly hard to write. Thank you so much for reviewing!!! Report Review
i just have to say i love this story can't wait for the updateAuthor's Response: thanks so much for the review, glad you like it! Report Review
love it! there are a lot of readers who r great fans, but dont know what to say in the review box. im 1 of them so keep writing and plz plz plz plz update soon! best of luck in collage!!! i say 9/10 because im waiting for the dance!Author's Response: thanks so much for making the effort to review, I really do appreciate it! Report Review
Oh yeah! I love balls!!! I LOVE Hermione dressing up and I LOVE how everything is coming in place now. Ginny and Blaise is a great pairing and Pansy asking Harry is oddly fitting in many ways :) What a great idea :D The girls dresses are lovely and the way they decided to prepare togeher is too. Pansy being seemingly unnearable in the beginning made it stay in character and believable :D Now I am just dying to find out what will happen when Drace and Hermione finally get to the terms of admitting to each other that they are pen pals :D If there is ever another situation that you are sticking to the letters, here are two more questions I have found difficult to answer. If they are no use in the story I still would love to read your answer. You are a great author and this is just to good of a story to quit reading or even worse to forget. I have never read any comparable story or the same plotline :D It's very original and that's why I love youf or posting!!! :D
Here are the questions:
Would you rather be able to hear any conversation or take back anything you say?
Would you rather be able to read everyone’s mind all the time or always know their future?Author's Response: I'm sorry, I have to say: "I love balls!!!" made my laugh. lol. I'm so glad you liked this chapter, it was a love/hate kind of thing. Thanks so much for the questions and the review, I might have just the place for them! Thanks! Report Review
Wuah! :) Finally I'm back to reading the story... I hate when I loose touch with the fanfictions I am reading and after reading this one I just see again how absolutely grateful I am that this story exists. I love the perfect balance between humor and seriousness and keep wandering about the penpal questions. Hermione is lovely in thanking Draco. This hug really says a lot. And then everything Draco does for her without really any background motives besides helping Hermione and caring for her. It makes me feel sort of lonely... I would like to have someone like that in my life :) Now I#m going to read the next chapters that are up :D :DAuthor's Response: I"m glad your back. You are too sweet. *blush* I want someone like that in my life too, sigh. I understand how you feel. thanks for reviewing! Report Review
Yay you updated! I kept checking every few days hoping for a new chapter and you gave one! Hope the following months treT you well and that we get another chapter soon!Author's Response: thanks for the review Report Review
Yay you updated! I kept checking every few days hoping for a new chapter and you gave one! Hope the following months treat you well and that we get another chapter soon!Author's Response: thanks for the review Report Review
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