{reviewid: 2735859, reviewer: 'Ellie'}
29th August 2012:
Wondaful ending! I love this chapter! Keep working pleaassse!
I CANNOT wait for the next one!!
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{reviewid: 2735856, reviewer: 'Julia'}
29th August 2012:
Love love love! As always(: I love how Remus wasn't a jerk about her going with Adain or anything. He just swept her away(: I love it! Maybe next chapter Sirius can come back in again? Maybe some Sirius/ Jessica drama concerning a certain strange friend we all love? Just some thoughts. Fabulous as always! Cant wait for the next chapter!!
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{reviewid: 2735836, reviewer: 'CaseyyRaee'}
29th August 2012:
AH. You should have seen my face when I saw that you'd updated. I flipped out!! I LOVE THIS. I SHALL SHIP REMUS/SHAYLEE ALL OF MY DAYS. But...you're making me love Aiden!! WHAT? I just love this, thanks so much for writing it!
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{reviewid: 2735835, reviewer: 'gutqra'}
29th August 2012:
This fanfic.is the best!
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{reviewid: 2735798, reviewer: 'Bryarly'}
29th August 2012:
So I have kind of been rooting for Shaylee and Remus the whole time, like, always, but that might be because I mostly just can't seem to like Aiden. I don't know why, he's lovely but just... Ugh.
Anyways, the point of that whole rant was that even though I have been rooting for them from the beginning, I think Emily kidnapping Remus would have been hilarious.
If a little weird.
And I can't wait for the next chapter.
Bryarly :)
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{reviewid: 2735765, reviewer: 'Rose'}
29th August 2012:
NO!!!
This was a very sad ending! I must read on!
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{reviewid: 2735761, reviewer: 'house%20elf'}
29th August 2012:
This chapter is so funny! I love how Emily was calling Remus 'bad boy' and 'naughty boy' hahaha. And how Shaylee gave Aidan a puppet show! She is mad haha
Depressed Shaylee made me sad though :(
"Look, let's just leave it alright? It never would have worked out between us anyway." That was mean of Remus to say :( I hope he didn't mean it...
Love the ending! So cute! Can't wait for the next one :D
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{reviewid: 2735699, reviewer: 'TheMagicofMusic'}
29th August 2012:
Oh my god I love you!!!and I love this story!!! Poor Aiden though :( Hope he finds a nice girl. Keep writing :)
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{reviewid: 2735631, reviewer: 'Rosie'}
| Review #34, by Rosie | Hello |
28th August 2012:
That WAS SO CUTE! Love this story!
I have no feedback to give, 'cuz I suck at that, but I wanted to say how much I love this.
Now onto chapter two!
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{reviewid: 2733957, reviewer: 'bemyseverussnape'}
22nd August 2012:
Please continue with this story!! I absolutely love it :)
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{reviewid: 2733304, reviewer: 'SweetAndSilent21'}
20th August 2012:
I've been reading this story since 2008 I believe and I still love it haha. Thank you for not abandoning it! It really is a wonderful story, keep it up! :)
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{reviewid: 2732512, reviewer: 'b'}
18th August 2012:
Uuuupdate NOW pretty pleaAaSase?
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{reviewid: 2730747, reviewer: 'Julia'}
12th August 2012:
Please UPDATE! I am soo excited for the next chapter!
Will Remus forgive Shaylee and Sirius? Will James find out
what is going on? Will Sirius an shaylee get closer? Will
shaylee and Remus's relationship survive? I need to
know! AH! I'm dying waiting for this story!!! I love
how weird and amazing shaylee is! And Sirius is adorable! I
absolutely love him! And Remus doesn't want to be with the
girl he likes because of his furry little problem!! And James
is a lovesick cute 17 yr old(:
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{reviewid: 2730177, reviewer: 'LowennaSmith'}
10th August 2012:
I love this story so much! You're such a good writer and so funny. I can't wait for the next chapter!
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{reviewid: 2729815, reviewer: 'innocentlybeautiful'}
9th August 2012:
MORE! I WANT MORE! I WANT MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! NOOOWWW!! *two year old tantrum commences*
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{reviewid: 2727541, reviewer: 'Shelby'}
3rd August 2012:
I absolutely loved the scare! Keep up the humor
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{reviewid: 2726383, reviewer: 'AlAndAl'}
31st July 2012:
Ooh my gosh. I just found this story yesterday and spent half the night reading up to ch 16. After a while my brain went a bit wonky and I was laughing and rolling around and whatnot, so I decided to finish the rest when my mind wasn't exploding. I just have to say WOW I LOVE THIS STORY. I think Remus/OC stories are so cute and I've spent the last day reading this squealing with delight! Shaylee actually reminds me way too much of myself just by her awkwardness and weirdness. Needless to say, I love her! Haha update soon :')
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{reviewid: 2722757, reviewer: 'YellowDaisies'}
20th July 2012:
I now cannot wait for the next chapter :) I love the way you write, I can relate very well to the way Shaylee thinks about things, and my gut instincts seem to be extremely similar (i.e. run and hide)
Excellent, keep it coming.
Daisy x
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{reviewid: 2721055, reviewer: 'YellowDaisies'}
17th July 2012:
She elbowed him in the manly parts!!
I started laughing and now half of my family are looking at me like i've lost it.
Brilliant
Daisy
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{reviewid: 2720663, reviewer: 'YellowDaisies'}
16th July 2012:
I started reading this story today and have next to no complaints, but because I can't justify liking a story quite this much and pronounce it faultless the only objections I have are regarding grammar and spelling.
'Right, she defiantly wants something. ;
that should be spelt 'definitely'
and also
'the nicest person too you' that should be to with one 'o' as should the other use of the 'too' in that paragraph.
Sorry about the nit-picking but I tend to think in terms of always improving and I do love the story thus far.
RemusxOC is my favourite pairing
Daisy x
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{reviewid: 2718279, reviewer: 'Angie'}
10th July 2012:
Ah! This story is perfect!!! I love it! Please write more chapters soon!!
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{reviewid: 2718242, reviewer: 'lopla'}
10th July 2012:
That last part was frickin' hilarious! She elbowed him in his manly parts! HAHAHAHAHAHA
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{reviewid: 2718227, reviewer: 'lopla'}
10th July 2012:
I don't have a goldfish, so I'll tell you about my siamese fighting fish! His name is Henri Gaspard. He is a LOVELY sparkly blue and if he had claws and weren't confined to a tank I think he'd maul me. I love him though, so I forgive him. Btw great story! I like the different POVs:)
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{reviewid: 2717495, reviewer: 'Julia'}
9th July 2012:
I am so hooked on this story! I love how you describe what's going on in shaylee and Remus's heads and I LOVE shaylee and Sirius's relationship! These past few chapters have been by far my favorite(: I love where the story is going and you are doing such a great job. I have been checking for updates like everyday and everytime you add a chapter I get so excited! You never dissapoint!(: PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!
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{reviewid: 2717319, reviewer: 'XLaughingxCrazyX'}
8th July 2012:
I love the story! I literally was in tears after this chapter, the best part being the end ;) I can't wait to read the rest
10/10
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