Great chapter. I love how you write her way of thinking. You give a sort of reason behind everything. Very good. Loved it! well worth the wait.

Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, I've always seen Hermione as a bit of an overthinker who analyzes every word and detail. I'm glad it came across the way I wanted it to. Thank you!

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I like this chapter a lot. it seems to be filled with much more emotion than the others

Author's Response: thanks! I was hoping for that :)

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Ah! The past two chapter have been the best yet! I'm so, so happy I found your story. I was honestly begining to believe there were no good writer left here on HPFF. But this story... it's original. It's new. It's not fluffy. I love it.

The whole bit about Ron's one night stands definitely added a lot to the plot. Especially when you gave their names and described them. Ah! I love that you finally told us how Draco saved her life! I was wondering about that but I forgot as I read more. That was really really good though. Also, you write spectacularly from Hermione's point of view. The sarcasm and blunt-ness of the character make her so much more interesting.

By far, my favorite part of this chapter was when Draco gave her firewhiskey and said she could stay at his place. I'm super curious how that's gonna turn out. Please please update soon! I need to know what happens!

Thank you for writing this!
Hermione Malfoy

Author's Response: WOWWW! I'm super glad you found this story too, because that was a super sweet review! I'm doing my best to update as soon as possible!
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Wow. For some reason, that last line almost broke my heart.ö It's just so..sad! But really well written. I think one of the things I love best about this story is how you write it. The chapters are somewhat short, but so full of substance; they're packed with meaning and I know that it'll all lead to something eventually. I love how you write! Good job!

Author's Response: Aww, thank you! I'm really glad you're enjoying it! xx

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aww, so sad. an irrational hatred always adds to a story line :D

Author's Response: Haha, that's what I'm thinking! Thanks for the review!
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Ronald has suddenly got lower morals, lol, any who this was good. ;D

Author's Response: He's a slut. Haha, thank you!
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ah so hermione has been wanting to be gone for a while. interesting. You do such a good job writing this.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying the story!
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It's getting better! if that is even possible. Omg i hate cliff hangers yet keeps me interested so i love them at the same time. Love/hate relationship with cliffhangers. anyway i look forward to chappy 5

Author's Response: I know what you mean about the cliffhangers! We hate to read them, but love to write them. Thought I'd try it for once! Haha chapter five is going up right... NOW.
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An interesting chapter.

You are progressing well in the story. I like how you have Hermione slowly recovering from her ordeal.

Making friends with Draco so soon was a bit of a surprise, but believable. Her reaction to it was so on canon. It is exactly what I would expect from Hermione.

The story still has a surprising subject matter, but you are doing it well. I look forward to future chapters.

Good job.

Author's Response: Thank you for the kind review! I'm glad you're enjoying it, and that you think I'm doing a good job. You're lovely
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This is really good!! Please update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks, love! I'm working on it as we speak!
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I like your style of writing and the way Hermione's character is portrayed. She is slightly sarcastic and funny and she is just freakin' awesome!

Author's Response: YOU are just freakin' awesome! Thanks for the review!
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This is quite interesting. And I love that hermione is still witty even after she tried to kill herself. I'm excited to see what happens next(:

Author's Response: Thought I'd bring some humor in. Can't be all dark, right? Thanks for reviewing!
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I'm continuing to love your less-than-perfect portrayal of Hermione here. It's a relief to read that she's not as perfect as everyone has always assumed her to be. And I love how this chapter is rife with subtle humor, like the cheesecake allusions and the joke about firewhisky. Keep writing! I'm loving it. :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying it as much as I am!
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Ouch... heartless Ron, heartless.

Author's Response: It's not all black and white! Think about how Ron's feeling! Thanks for the review

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It's weird, you know.. Seeing Hermione this way.. But it's sort of understandable.. I mean don't the greatest minds go crazy at some point? Oh well.. That scene between Ron and Hermione was a bit blunt.. I was expecting a shouting match but hey, people change right? Anyway, I like this story.. I really do.. It touches on reality a lot.. :)

Author's Response: The shouting match will happen! Thanks for reading and reviewing, love!
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hmm. I like what you have so far, but wish your chapters were longer!!!

Do keep writing!

Author's Response: I'll keep that in mind, as I do struggle to make them long enough. It's never good enough for you, though, is it!? Haha, I joke. Love you!
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i am not the biggest fan of cheesecake. but now i really want some.
really badly.
anyways, back to the story.
i wish she'd forgive harry! I love him!! and I love ron too..but we have to pick on someone throughout the stories.
xoxo ~

Author's Response: Cheesecake is amazing if it's a good recipe!
Well, they will be forgiven eventually!
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ANother good chapter. I look forward to seeing what happens next.

Author's Response: Thank youuu.
I'm really enjoying the writing so far. Thanks for continuing to enjoy the read!
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Very original story, it's nice to read something else for a change ^^ (in the Draco&Hermione category, that is)

I'm looking forward to the next chapter !

Nina x

Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much! You're very sweet. I'm working hard on chapter three, hope it doesn't disappoint!

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pretty good story, Interesting. Hard to see exactly were your going with this. I look forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: At this point, I don't even think I know where I'm going with this lol. I'm working on chapter three now. Thanks for the lovely review!
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Great start... please update soon... :D

Author's Response: I promise I will!

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I am already hooked and I'm prepared to wait for as long as you take to continue. It makes a change to have Hermoine at a seeming disadvantage. It is a novel approach to a dramione story. Take a bow because you are one talented weaver of tales.

Author's Response: Wow. Thank you for such an incredibly nice review! I am going to work harder to post the second chapter now.

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interesting. its very out there and different.
this is a good thing of course.
i wonder how things will turn out. :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I will try and update ASAP for you

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This chapter is quite brilliant. Quite very brilliant :) Hope everything goes well and there are more chapters soon cause I can't wait to read them.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I am working hard on chapter two :)

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That was brilliant!
It's a unique idea and you carried it out marvelously!
xoxo ~

Author's Response: Why, thank you, ma'am!

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