Well finally, I hope that they get together soon! I love it! this story is amazing!!
NatalieAuthor's Response: Wow, thank you so much! It means a lot to know that you're enjoying it so much! :D Report Review
I wish that Teddy and Dom would get together. I really like this story. Great work.
NatalieAuthor's Response: Thanks! I'm glad that you're enjoying it! :) Report Review
yiikes. but dom and teddy finally admit they're in love with each other! more soon please :)Author's Response: Yeah, it's about time, isn't it? There'll be more soon, I promise. :) Report Review
Ouch! Good for you, Bill.Author's Response: Yeah, it's about time that Bill did something good... Report Review
OMG! I love this story! Keep it coming.Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it! And I promise to keep it coming ;) Report Review
Whoa!!! What??? It's because of Dom isn't it? Oh gee. Oh gee. I'm waiting waiting waitingAuthor's Response: Yes, it's because of Dom. And if you think this is shocking, then you'll probably fall out of your chair in a couple of chapters... Report Review
I know I've said it many times and I know you're tired of hearing it,but I'm going to say it again.I HATE Teddy Lupin! He is beyond a jerk and is,well something I can't use the words on here to describe.A lot of people here say he's romantic but NO he's not.All he is is a perv who would like nothing more than to string BOTH sisters along and be able to sleep with both of them.There is NOTHING romantic or hot about that at all.I'm hopping in the end he not only gets dumped by both Vic and Dom but Bill puts the AK curse on him! Ohh and good on Bill for dumping Fluer!Author's Response: Please, keep telling me that you hate Teddy. Cause that is exactly what I'm going for, and I'm glad that it has stayed that way. Report Review
I really love that the dad left the mom haha i mean i kinda hate that the mom wasnt mad with teddy i mean he obviosly had something to do with the whole pregnacy thing right? Oh and hopefully nate stays with dom i mean its not fair that he's all in love with her and she's so into teddy hopefully they stay togethere and get married!Teddy needs to stop bothering dom also i hate that he says he loves her but wont stay with her (sorry i keep bringing that up its just that teddy gets on my nerves) Hopefully once teddy gets married with victoir he forgets about dom.
p.s. wouldnt it be crazy if dom gave her baby to vic? its all up to you haha even tough i know you probably wouldnt agree to it right hahah.Author's Response: I'm glad you don't like him :D You're not supposed to (I'm sure I've said that before...)
And giving Vic the baby WOULD be crazy...
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no. fix it. Dom's parent's have to stay together or its just like every other NG story on here. other that that the story is perfect. quite well written.!Author's Response: Thanks! As for the parents, I'll say that there is more to the situation than what has been revealed... Report Review
OMG :O ! wow. wow. wow. omg more is needed really soon please!!Author's Response: Wow, thank you!!! I'm already half-way done with the next chapter, so it'll be up soon. Report Review
OMFG! Good for you Bill!!! I totally applaud him. Fleur is horrible! I hope that Teddy and Vic are miserable...just for the fact that I hate the pairing and Teddy is obviously still in love with Dom. I'm starting to give up hope on Dom/Teddy :( GREAT CHAPTER however!Author's Response: Yeah, I thought it was about time for Bill to have some backbone...
As for Dom/Teddy, there's a lot more of that relationship coming up...
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How can you just leave me hanging like that!???!! GEEZ! :OAuthor's Response: Sorry. But I like leaving little cliffhangers... Report Review
i think its better that dom is not going to listen to teddy anymore. I mean she gets on my nerves when she's with him haha. i mean why is she listening to him he wont leave Vic and he swears he loves her they're making things to complicated if i was her i'd be mad and i wouldnt listen to him.
Hopefully Vic leaves teddy and Dom dosent stay with him either so that he can learn his lesson hahah well anyhow i like the story so far(:Author's Response: I think its better for Dom as well. She needs to stand up for herself. As for the Dom/Teddy/Vic triangle, I can't say anything without spoiling the story; we're at that point in the story.
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I still think Teddy and Dom should get together, but he was a complete jerk. I don't know why, I mean a part of me hates him for hurting Dom and tearing her apart like he his, but at the same time you sort of know he doesn't want to...so yea I don't know. But GREAT CHAPTER as usual :)Author's Response: Teddy is definitely a complex character, and how he is perceived is different for each person. But that's the entire goal. I think I round character is so much more interesting than a flat character.
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Oh gee. Cute. Teddy. Needs. To. Jump. Off. A. Cliff. But oh gee. the confusion, the drama. WHAT ABOUT NATE?Author's Response: Yes, the confusion and drama are definitely here and they won't be going away for a bit. And Nate will be a lot more involved in the next few chapters. Report Review
For the life of me I can not understand how anyone here can leave feedback calling Teddy hot or say what he and Dom had was hot or romantic or whatever.Teddy is a complete male jerk! He want's to have his cake and eat it too.He wants to have BOTH sisters to sleep with.That's not romantic! That's being a pervert(whatever name with bad language you want to put here).Great job writting by the way.Author's Response: I absolutely agree! I love Teddy in a certain way because he's my character, but he is a bit of a jerk. Thanks for the review! Report Review
Ah!! That last scene reminded me of a Grey's Anatomy season finale about...three or four seasons ago... yeah? Or is that just me? Meredith and Derek getting it on in a spare hospital room?? No? ahahah. I don't know.
But it was a great chapter! :]Author's Response: That thought hadn't even occurred to me, but now that it was brought up I can kind of see that. It wasn't my intention.
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teddy needs to decide who he truly wants be with ughhh
more soon please! great chapter :)Author's Response: He really does, doesn't he? I promise that it'll happen. Thank you for the review! :) Report Review
DUMP VIC! JESUS TEDDY! STOP JERKING EVERYONE AROUND, GROW A PAIR AND GO FOR HER! Seriously. GAH! All I hear is little things by colbie callait right now. "wake up wake up take another chance don't you give up give up I don't want to lose you"Author's Response: Yeah, he's a bit on the wimpy side... Report Review
Oh were getting closer to finding out why Teddy is still with Vic! I personally hope it's cuz some stupid reason tha Dom can talk him out of or even an unbrakable vow with some sort of 'loop hole' in it. I mean it's just Teddy and Dom have something that they'll never have with Nate or Vic...in my opinion. Great chapter! :DAuthor's Response: I totally agree. It's one of those couple that you can't help but cheer for. And yes, Teddy will reveal everything in the next chapter...
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Okay I have to admit,I loathe Teddy here.I don't know how this story is going to end up Nate or Teddy but I can tell you now I hate Teddy.He's a jerk and all around,well I can't use the languate here to describe how I feel about him.I can't understand how Dom can get all hot and bothered any time he's around her when Nate is such a great guy to her?Author's Response: Yeah, Teddy isn't supposed to be well liked, so I'm really happy that he's coming across that way. I promise that Dom will give him what's coming soon...
And who can ever really explain why the heart acts the way it does? Report Review
Hi! Great story! thanks for the cliffhanger... :( but itll hopefully cleared up soon. you're a really good writer :)Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Of course it'll get cleared up soon. And again, thanks for your wonderful review! Report Review
wow this is a great story!! but why did you make rose and scorpius get married so young?? they're 16! that's my only complaint about the story but otherwise i love it more soon please!Author's Response: Actually, they're 17, but I know that its still young. Honestly, they just did what they thought was best for their baby and their lives. Thanks for the lovely review! Report Review
Poor Roxie! And poor George and Angelina, they were such a good couple! It's weird thinking of Roxie and James together, but I bet you'll write it so it's awesome!
Teddy and Dom need to stop snogging, it will only end in tears! Especially on Victoire's part!
Can't wait for more - love this story!Author's Response: It IS a bit weird; I don't even know if I'm going to have them together, but it was definitely a twist that I wanted.
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Lol, still weird, because they've grown up as cousins. Wasn't there some scandal when a man began dating his daughter, (but no worries, she was adopted!) It's still gross, less gross because they're cousins, but you know what I mean :P
I hate teddy. I hate teddy. I hate men who can't make up their minds! I hate men who tell you one thing and do another, and who make you feel like you're the only girl they want and then they dissapear, or go to another woman, or decide after making out, or having sex, or whatever it is they wanted, that they don't actually care about you. So you go home and get confused. Stop talking to them. Then next time you see them, bam, they're doing it again, with an excuse of course for why they dissapeared or what have you, and you go falling right back into the trap. and then they're gone again.
Uhm.. yeah, anyway... I hate Teddy and I wish he would grow a pair and make up his mind... uh.. Yeah... Good chapter.Author's Response: It IS very weird, but this is one weird story...
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