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Review #26, by meg Snapping Knickers

4th December 2010:
I was actually screaming "no! No! No! No!" In this chapter. It was SO good :) x

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it so much! :)

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Review #27, by meg Jealousy is an Ugly Beast

4th December 2010:
Aw... Poor dom. I personally think it'll be easier if she stuck with nate however she really does love teddy x

Author's Response: Yeah, she's in an awful predicament, isn't she? But I guess we'll see what happens...

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Review #28, by meg Confrontations

4th December 2010:
Aw nate is so sweet to dom. I

Author's Response: Yeah, he's pretty awesome, isn't he?

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Review #29, by meg A Semi-Charmed Life

4th December 2010:
Aw lovely :) I'm loving this story so much :) xxx

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it! :D

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Review #30, by meg Adulterer's Club

4th December 2010:
I love this so so so so so much! :)

Author's Response: Thanks a bunch! :)

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Review #31, by meg Bad Luck

4th December 2010:
Wow! This is rlly good! :) x

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

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Review #32, by DramaticEmerald Flickering Flame

27th November 2010:
I hate Dom. She needs to sit down in a room by herself for as long as it takes to figure shit out. She needs to not be with anyone for a while. Oh my god. Teddy, I hate him. I think he's annoying and selfish and he just needs to be with no one for a while and sit in a room and figure out what the hell he wants. Aww, poor Nate! :( Good job. And I'm looking forward to more of this ridiculous nonsense. :)

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Review #33, by killjoy Flickering Flame

13th November 2010:
No no no no no no no no,ohhh come on please no Dom/Teddy! How can she love someone who is a comple JERK(and that's saying it nice)? I still can't understand how anyone here can like Teddy?! He could save a bus full of orphans from a fire and I'll still think he's the scum of the earth in this story.

Author's Response: Teddy is definitely one of those people that you want to punch, isn't he? But like I said, Nate will still be involved in the story...

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Review #34, by itzy Flickering Flame

13th November 2010:
ahh this story is so goood (please update soon!!)
i cant believe shes still in love with teddy its so stupid hopefully she stay's with nate!
teddy is a dumbass who swears he loves dom but wont leave vic cause he promised he'd marry her ughh he's an asshole

p.s. why cant dom just get over teddy if that happend dom wouldnt suffer, hahha but then there would be no point in the story right

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Review #35, by ochalke5 Flickering Flame

13th November 2010:
Oh my god. I don't know how i feel about this chapter. Please update soon! It was really really good!

10/10
Natalie

Author's Response: Well, I'm glad that you still enjoyed the chapter. And there will be another update soon, I promise. :)

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Review #36, by ochalke5 Daddy Dearest

13th November 2010:
What?

10/10
Wow!
Natalie

Author's Response: Yeah, a bit of a twist, isn't it? But I'm glad that it shocked you. :)

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Review #37, by ochalke5 Crumbling Walls

13th November 2010:
Well finally, I hope that they get together soon! I love it! this story is amazing!!

10/10
Natalie

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! It means a lot to know that you're enjoying it so much! :D

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Review #38, by ochalke5 Snapping Knickers

13th November 2010:
I wish that Teddy and Dom would get together. I really like this story. Great work.

10/10
Natalie

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad that you're enjoying it! :)

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Review #39, by couldyoureallyknow Flickering Flame

13th November 2010:
yiikes. but dom and teddy finally admit they're in love with each other! more soon please :)

Author's Response: Yeah, it's about time, isn't it? There'll be more soon, I promise. :)

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Review #40, by Joi de Coeur Daddy Dearest

18th October 2010:
Ouch! Good for you, Bill.

Author's Response: Yeah, it's about time that Bill did something good...

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Review #41, by Joi de Coeur Adulterer's Club

17th October 2010:
OMG! I love this story! Keep it coming.

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it! And I promise to keep it coming ;)

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Review #42, by DramaticEmerald Daddy Dearest

7th October 2010:
Whoa!!! What??? It's because of Dom isn't it? Oh gee. Oh gee. I'm waiting waiting waiting

Author's Response: Yes, it's because of Dom. And if you think this is shocking, then you'll probably fall out of your chair in a couple of chapters...

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Review #43, by killjoy Daddy Dearest

6th October 2010:
I know I've said it many times and I know you're tired of hearing it,but I'm going to say it again.I HATE Teddy Lupin! He is beyond a jerk and is,well something I can't use the words on here to describe.A lot of people here say he's romantic but NO he's not.All he is is a perv who would like nothing more than to string BOTH sisters along and be able to sleep with both of them.There is NOTHING romantic or hot about that at all.I'm hopping in the end he not only gets dumped by both Vic and Dom but Bill puts the AK curse on him! Ohh and good on Bill for dumping Fluer!

Author's Response: Please, keep telling me that you hate Teddy. Cause that is exactly what I'm going for, and I'm glad that it has stayed that way.

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Review #44, by itzy Daddy Dearest

3rd October 2010:
I really love that the dad left the mom haha i mean i kinda hate that the mom wasnt mad with teddy i mean he obviosly had something to do with the whole pregnacy thing right? Oh and hopefully nate stays with dom i mean its not fair that he's all in love with her and she's so into teddy hopefully they stay togethere and get married!Teddy needs to stop bothering dom also i hate that he says he loves her but wont stay with her (sorry i keep bringing that up its just that teddy gets on my nerves) Hopefully once teddy gets married with victoir he forgets about dom.

p.s. wouldnt it be crazy if dom gave her baby to vic? its all up to you haha even tough i know you probably wouldnt agree to it right hahah.

Author's Response: I'm glad you don't like him :D You're not supposed to (I'm sure I've said that before...)
And giving Vic the baby WOULD be crazy...
Thanks for the review!


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Review #45, by Spell_it_out Daddy Dearest

3rd October 2010:
no. fix it. Dom's parent's have to stay together or its just like every other NG story on here. other that that the story is perfect. quite well written.!

Author's Response: Thanks! As for the parents, I'll say that there is more to the situation than what has been revealed...

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Review #46, by couldyoureallyknow Daddy Dearest

3rd October 2010:
OMG :O ! wow. wow. wow. omg more is needed really soon please!!

Author's Response: Wow, thank you!!! I'm already half-way done with the next chapter, so it'll be up soon.

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Review #47, by Potter1126 Daddy Dearest

3rd October 2010:
OMFG! Good for you Bill!!! I totally applaud him. Fleur is horrible! I hope that Teddy and Vic are miserable...just for the fact that I hate the pairing and Teddy is obviously still in love with Dom. I'm starting to give up hope on Dom/Teddy :( GREAT CHAPTER however!

Author's Response: Yeah, I thought it was about time for Bill to have some backbone...
As for Dom/Teddy, there's a lot more of that relationship coming up...
Thanks for the awesome review! :)


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Review #48, by FallenDreams3 Daddy Dearest

3rd October 2010:
How can you just leave me hanging like that!???!! GEEZ! :O

Author's Response: Sorry. But I like leaving little cliffhangers...

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Review #49, by itzy Exploding Body Parts

26th September 2010:
i think its better that dom is not going to listen to teddy anymore. I mean she gets on my nerves when she's with him haha. i mean why is she listening to him he wont leave Vic and he swears he loves her they're making things to complicated if i was her i'd be mad and i wouldnt listen to him.
Hopefully Vic leaves teddy and Dom dosent stay with him either so that he can learn his lesson hahah well anyhow i like the story so far(:

Author's Response: I think its better for Dom as well. She needs to stand up for herself. As for the Dom/Teddy/Vic triangle, I can't say anything without spoiling the story; we're at that point in the story.
Thanks for the review!


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Review #50, by Potter1126 Exploding Body Parts

18th September 2010:
I still think Teddy and Dom should get together, but he was a complete jerk. I don't know why, I mean a part of me hates him for hurting Dom and tearing her apart like he his, but at the same time you sort of know he doesn't want to...so yea I don't know. But GREAT CHAPTER as usual :)

Author's Response: Teddy is definitely a complex character, and how he is perceived is different for each person. But that's the entire goal. I think I round character is so much more interesting than a flat character.
Thanks for the review! :D


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