This was a great chapter. You're reallygood, and I just can't wait until she finds out the truth! :) Please update asap!! :)

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awww. cutie. update soon.

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Another great chapter! Please update, I really want to know what happens!

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LOVE this story with a burning passion. Mellie, Sirius, James and co are my lives! I love your style of writing an how you are able to make the story really flow! 10/10

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She thinks that Sirius is a secret agent ? HAHAHA, I just love Mellie, she is so funny and adorable! I can't wait to see how she will react when she'll know what they really are ! And I'm so happy that you posted this chapter, I was so scared that you would drop it. Anyway, thank you for still posting ! (:

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wow, amazing chapter! i have to be out of the door, like right NOW, but i HAD to read this! i cant belive they erased her memory! :O :'( please let her find out! i bet her reaction would be halarious :D
you're awesome, and an amazing writer!
becky :)
p.s update? pretty please? its been so long!

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Ohh, a new chapter:) I remember this being the first story ever that I reviewed on this site! Ahh, the memories. Lols.
So I might aswell be the first reviewer to this chapter also xD
I really loved this chapter and can't wait for more:):)

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That was really good! Can't wait to see how the story progresses!

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Oh my! What's happened to Mellie! Can't wait for more! :)

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*GASP* update! Please! this is becoming one of my favorite stories!! =D and plus I just sat up all night reading this when I have school ina few hours.Great story =D Mellie is a cool character and her friends seem nice!!

so I really think you should update.

10/10

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I've seen the date on this story and realised that it hasn't been updated in a while. Please update soon!!! It's AMAZING x

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:O What happened? Did a Deathie get her!? Or is it before the war started getting bad? I don't know. It's kind of hard to tell exactly what's going on with the war when it's from a Muggle's POV. But I'm not complaining. It's a nice, original change, and I like it.

Can't wait for the next chapter!!! :)



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Hello!
Having Remus talk to Mellie was a great window into what the other Marauders are thinking about the relationship. It seems as if he's hinting that he wants Sirius to tell her. Also I like how you don't try to treat Peter as an annoying slightly suspicious seeming follower as most other fics do. But then the amazingness ends with DUN da DA dun! A cliff hanger and promise us that there will not be a huge gap as it is mostly written. TWO MONTHS. Please Please PLEASE! I am on my hands and knees please upload.
-Rea

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Ahh can't wait for more! Love it!

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Ha!! She is hilarious. I love it!

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Ha! I loved that last little bit! I really like this! Its definitely keeping me interesting! I love her journals and observations.. hilarious!

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Dammit! the cliff hanger!...i was so upset when i realized there wasn't a next button, but oh well...
I'm so into this story! i didn't expect myself to be this drawn in honestly, but i am.
You MUST update soon!>___<
please.=]

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the beetles son! HAHAHAHA!
i HAD to comment on that.X]

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Hey, hey! Ending like this is just wrong, you know? You should be ashamed of yourself. And to make me forget you should update as son as possible. And the next chapther better be freaking long! Anyways I love it. It is just so uhm... Mellie, which I love so so much:D

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How is a beetles son a bumble bee?

Author's Response: He's not, the beetle that was on Mellie's face that caused Sirius to fall on top of her was the beetle's son. He's a tricky devil.
Thanks for reviewing!
:)

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No...No! NO!!! You cannot stop there! I won't allow it!!! Ah :o WHAT IF MELLIE DIES? I bet it's not Sirius there! Omg maybe James actually DOES think he's an axe-murderer and killed Mellie!!! Holy shizzle, what if it's like someone from Sirius's messed up family?!?!?! Please please please please write more and update soon! I love this story and your style of writing! It's hilarious, deep, romantic, mysterious, well-written and is basucally everything a fan fic should be! 20/10 from me! Yes, TWENTY ;)

Author's Response: Haha, I promise Mellie didn't die. I like her too much to kill her off. Thanks so much for this review, it made me really happy and I'll update soon!

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I love this fic so much! It's so much fun to read!
Please, update soon! Don't take so long :(
Amazing chapter!
Lots of love,
Kate

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OH NO, I CAN'T WAIT. PLEASE POST IT SOON !

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Ohh, I hope that there will be more chapters like this ! I was just so... anyway good work!

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Mellie's theory is just hilarious. I couldn't stop laughing .

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