OMG!
I need to know what happens next!!!

Amaizing, trully amaizing!
I didn't expect this to happen at ALL!
Please don't tell me you abbandoned this story!!!

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wow. that was intense. i think they kinda overreacted tho, i mean it was an accident...

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WOW. You can't stop there!! As I've read more of it, then please finish still delicate but how am I meant to concentrate not knowing if Rhys is going to live.
Great story all the same. Keep writing,
Ellie

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Wow. This story is soo diferent to Delicate and Still Delicate, but it's still awesome (sorry, I over use the word 'awesome' way too much. But your story is awesome) I can't wait to know what will happen next.

However, you have left me with quite a big problem - which am I more addicted to, Still Delicate or this? It really is quite a pickle!

Anyway, I love your stories; please update them soon!

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wowww i like the line of this story!! it seems really interesting & i cant wait ot read more..i really like the dynamic of the characters, and can't wait to get to know them in future chapters...i hope you keep going with this story, its really good so far!!!

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You must write more!! I want to find out whether he lives or not

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very interesting beginning. I can't wait to get to know the characters better. I like that this story has an unusual start.

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i have read your stories delicate and still delicate and i absolutely love them!
But i think that this story it is very interesting and different, and i loved the gang, please please continue it, please!

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wow this is really good. It has potential to turn into something brilliant; all your stories are brilliant though! can't wait for an update! 10/10!

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Wonderful! I loved the suspense you created and the characterisation was intriguing considering that you did not go into great detail for each person - it was great. I can't wait to see where this goes next! PLEASE write more!!

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this is awesome!
update!

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amazing. cant wait for more. i like these characters a lot.

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So I know you are having troubles with your computer... and I know Still Delicate probably holds most of your attention right now, but this story has the potential for greatness. I'm very excited to see where you will take this, and I hope you take it there soon. Happy writings, and as always, UPDATION SOONATION!

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omg it's really exciting! like: i know what you did last summer, but better. the group of friends seem cool, from the first view.
can't wait to read more because if ryhs dies... :|

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it's fantastic, i love it! it's something different from you but i must say that i enjoyed this story as well as delicate or still delicate. i am again and again amazed how you can describe the characters and situations that seems so real because so many points of your story can happen in the magic world as well as in that real one. your stories and ideas in them are brilliant, i like it very much.

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I love this story and it where it is going.

I think its really relatable because no matter where you are or what school you go to (magical or not) theres that one kid that no one really likes, and I think this story takes it to the next level with is scarily close to how things can get.

On the characters I like the quiet Scorpius, especially how witty he is. I also like the general dynamic of the group. I think its a lot more on the immoral side to lie about what they did to him, but then again if I was in their situation I would prob do the same thing. He isn't worth getting kicked out of school for.

Wonder where you will go with the rest of the story! Update soon :)

becca

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This is definately a lot different than Delicate and Still Delicate, and I really like that. It's very hard to put yourself in a sarcastic frame of mind one second and then a dark, mysterious frame of mind the next. I applaud you. I'm very, very curious to see what happens next, so I can't wait for your next chapter! Plus, I'd like to see how these characters develop, and you've done a brilliant job of explaining each of them so far!

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I know this is not delicate but Is this a scorpius and rose romance thing, going on here? if so plzy reply?

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I loe all your stories! You are such a talented writer!

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Wonderful. Truly fantastic. I can't wait until you update this, its amazing. I love all your stories. You've got such a talent! Thankyou for an enjoyable first chapter!
10/10
MG

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ooh!! whats gonna happen?? hurry up and update!! awsome, and MYSTERIOUS...

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Ahh! it's so horrible!! (not the story, the events)
please continue. i want to know what happens next!

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Whoa...Intense xD

I love it. I really hope you update soon =D

10/10
LoveAlways
Ur2ndBiggestFan
~Annie

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Wow, this is really good! Very Dark and twisty. Please update!

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Wow, I really loved this chapter. It's so different from your other ScoRose. I can't wait for the next chapter, I love all of the characters. 10/10

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