AMAZING!!! i just read delicate and as much of still delicate as possible and then i got bored so i looked at this one and i have to say you are my absolute favourite author right now :) please keep going with this one, and with still delicate

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This is great, please do carry on. I've always wanted to read a good founders story, but I've never really found one that I've really enjoyed. I'm intrigued... :)

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Excellent!! I was a little wary to read a story about the founders, for the same reasons you said, it is pretty ancient, but I love what you've done! It's a great story line and I can't wait to see what else happens!

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really interesting plot!

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really interesting story... i kinda skipped over this because i was too busy with delicate and still delicate but i'm glad i finally started reading this one too! please update soon? i can't wait to see how godric and rowena's relationship evolves :)!

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Please keep writing this!! You have a wonderful writing style that draws your reader in and makes them feel as if they know each character. Very well-balanced writing! I haven't read a Founders Era story I've liked besides yours. I'm very interested to see where it goes.

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This is REALLY good! I came to the site looking to see if you'd updated Still Delicate and decided to read this since you'd updated this one instead. And I LOVE it! I love the way you've explained Slytherin's beliefs. It makes a lot of sense when viewed from that perspective. I really hope you keep going with this story, I see so much potential in it, I think it's going to be a great one. I can't wait!

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i love all of your stories! please update soon! (:

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all i can say is that it made my heart flutter at the end.

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Okay, I LOVE this story! You're tieing in every detail perfectly. I love how everything that J.K. gave us has been explained or justified in this story. The only thing I'm not quite sure how I feel about is the Ravenclaw/Gryffindor relationship. But it's still cute! Lol. Btw I've been such a huge fan of your stories forever, you're such a talented writer! If you have a Pottermore add me! I'm LeviosaSilver80.

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Hey man. This story breathes. It's got that raw inspiration that even Rowling only catches sometimes. The imagery is clear, the excitement is infectious! I just want to keep reading but there's only one more chapter. Brilliant start keep it up. LOVE the angle.

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Wow, this is so cool! I love the way you use the formal language, its very artful ( ;) )
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Georgiexx

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I love the way you've incorporated the new characters. Your writing skills are amazingly good, I really enjoy reading your work and look forward to future updates

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I'm so in love with this. Not only is the plot so original and creative, to fan fiction, but this is so believable! I'm so excited to see what you'll do with the already amazing story you've begun to tell! :) x

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Love, love, love it! This doesn't even seem like a forced reason for Salazar Slytherin to be the way he is. I love how you can twist things around and show them from a different perspective and all the sudden make us on a side we never even considered before!

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Very intriguing so far! Short, yet compelling. Definitely makes me want to read more! 10/10

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I love this story! I've set myself to read all of your stories, which I'm almost done, except the R/H. I think you've found the perfect mix of old English and proper modern. Not many can do that, you know, including me.

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So glad to see your update! This is the first founders story I have read and so far it is great. You do well with drawing readers in. Keep up the good work!

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I like the idea of this story, but i feel its a bit dense. Can't wait for other updates though!

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I thoroughly enjoyed this, it's so nice to have a break from the normal stories. Most Founders' era fics are very unrealistic and have either completely modern language, or really over top old English, but you've found the perfect mix. Update soon!
Ada

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I love this idea, it'd be fantastic to see more. this sounds like a really interesting idea

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PLEASE CONTINUE!!! It truly is amazing. And it's great being able to see how the term mudblood was created. I could picture this all happening. It's a really good story so please continue.

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I absolutely love this! Please continue :-)

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I think it's a good idea for a story! Keep writing please!! :D

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I can definitely tell you this story is the opposite of boring. You don't even know how many people are begging J.K. Rowling to write a founders story. I think this is one of your better stories and I absolutely hope you continue it. I love how this story continues your accuracy of the original Harry Potter stories and how it makes the stories much more believeable. I love how you included the creation of the term mudbloods and how this tragedy explains his hatred. Splendid story. Please continue! :)

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