{reviewid: 1709321, reviewer: 'mar-l'}
12th November 2007:
ohhh, i like it. so harry. he can be so slow some time, hahaha. i can wait when he cames to his sense.
Author's Response: thanx for the review... i really appreciate them. i might not mention it in the story but they really do keep me going, especially now that i live in the city. i have lost my main place of inspiration (country) so the chapters might come a bit later than i wish, but that is alright. thanx again.
with much love,
American Ginny
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{reviewid: 1708986, reviewer: 'blkdmdcharl'}
12th November 2007:
I like the direction (a little short but that's just me- can't get enough). Keep up the good work and I'll keep reading.
Author's Response: thanx for the review and i'll try to make them longer, but i can't guarentee anything. thanx for the review again.
with much love,
American Ginny
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{reviewid: 1708244, reviewer: 'harrysgirl88'}
12th November 2007:
Please write soon. Really enjoyed that.
Author's Response: The next chapter will be up asap. Thanx for the review.
with much love,
American Ginny
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{reviewid: 1708154, reviewer: 'HarryGinnyFan18'}
11th November 2007:
UPDATE R.SP. 100-100! Jackie.
Author's Response: Thanx for the review. Next chapter will be up asap. thanx again
with much love,
American Ginny
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{reviewid: 1705279, reviewer: 'none'}
9th November 2007:
it is really good, justwish the chapters were longer
Author's Response: Your wish is my command...that is for reviewing i promise the chapters are getting longer. the next one should be up soon. thanx again.
love
American Ginny
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{reviewid: 1687632, reviewer: 'Mrs%20HJ%20Potter'}
28th October 2007:
Good chapter.lets see what Harry thinks.
Author's Response: Chapter 3 is up and in waiting so keep an eye on it... Thanx for the review,
with much love,
American Ginny
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{reviewid: 1687406, reviewer: 'Darkpaw'}
27th October 2007:
Great work so far. I'm very interested in reading the next chapter. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: The next chapter is submitted and in waiting so keep your eyes open... Thanx for the review and i hope you like this chapter too!
with much love,
American Ginny
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{reviewid: 1686952, reviewer: 'AriesGirl40'}
27th October 2007:
very tragic 3 chapters. Love it. Have got me curious about what is going on in Harry's mind. Please continue. Not a bad start at all.
one thing. alot of "I" repitition. Look for more words with the same meaning. Thesaurus would be very handy for that. A Snitch to You!
Author's Response: The next chapter is in waiting so keep a hawks eye on it... Thanx for the review. i have tried to use "I" less but the is no word with the same meaning so it was hard, but i think i got it...Please tell me if i improved it. thanx
with much love,
American Ginny
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{reviewid: 1686948, reviewer: 'Nastyman'}
27th October 2007:
Good story. But very small. Write More and dont worry if people dont reply. Awaiting next chapter.
Author's Response: The next chapter is being looked over it should be up in about 4 days if nothing goes wrong so keep an eagle eye open... Thanx for the review. i really appreciate it and took your advice. it is around 1500 words. thanx!
with much love,
American Ginny
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{reviewid: 1686851, reviewer: 'harrysgirl88'}
27th October 2007:
I liked it but it was really short. Please write more!
Author's Response: Next chapter is submitted and in waiting so keep on it... Thanx for the review. i hope you like the next chapter... i really appreciate this review and the next chapter is much longer. thanx
with much love,
American Ginny
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{reviewid: 1669654, reviewer: 'Mrs%20HJ%20Potter'}
15th October 2007:
Keep going this is a good story the more you update the more reviews you'll get.as updates come out your story gets pushed back on the pages and is harder to find.
Author's Response: The next chapter is in waiting so keep an eye on it... thanx for the review. Thanx for the advice, i'll keep it in mind. thanx again.
love,
American Ginny
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{reviewid: 1666515, reviewer: 'ginnyXharry'}
13th October 2007:
oh oh update uptade!!! please!!! i love it...
Author's Response: 4th chapter is in waiting... thanx for the review and keep reading. i don't know where it is going, but i have a good feeling about it. thanx once again.
Love,
American Ginny
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{reviewid: 1666290, reviewer: 'Harrysgirl35'}
13th October 2007:
Nice chapter!please update soon!10/10!I bet it's Harry knocking on Ginny's door!
~Shannon
Author's Response: Chapter 4 in waiting!!! *Newsflash* Chapter 4 in waiting!!! Thanx for the review. i hope you like the next chapter. :D Once again thanks.
Love,
American Ginny
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{reviewid: 1666230, reviewer: '..'}
13th October 2007:
great
Author's Response: Thanx for the review chapter 4 is in waiting...please keep reading. thanx
Love ya,
American Ginny
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{reviewid: 1648756, reviewer: 'crazygurl17'}
29th September 2007:
yay go ginny wright more a.s.a.p!
Author's Response: Chapter 4 is waiting should be up soon...thanx for the review and encouragement. thanx
love,
American Ginny
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{reviewid: 1648496, reviewer: 'amy'}
29th September 2007:
good start, hope can be continued.
Author's Response: Thanx for the review...keep reading there is a lot to come. Chapter 4 is in waiting. thanx.
love,
American Ginny
P.S.
It shall be continued till it is completed!
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{reviewid: 1648141, reviewer: 'ginnyXharry'}
29th September 2007:
nice beginning! I can't wait to see what will happen next... suggestion: ''Through her eyes'' I know it's not very good but I can't think of enything else. SORRY!!!
Author's Response: I love it! Thanx maybe you could help me name some of my chapters... I am not very good at names. Thanx for the review.
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