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Review #26, by EN Christmas Night

1st November 2009:
hey... nice to see an update after so long... i thought allegra was more smart than this... she should have known that guys get defensive about their girls when spoken directly... how stupid can she be to call victoire a bitch in front of ted ??? do update soon...:-)

Author's Response: I think with alcohol and the relaxed atmosphere she wasn't thinking- we know what her fathers like for that lol

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Review #27, by AmayyMalfoy09 Christmas Night

1st November 2009:
i like your story (:
btw your title in the banner says 'Finding THE future' but your title of the story says 'Finding A future'

Author's Response: Thanks :)
I noticed a while back, just keep forgetting to sort it. Thanks


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Review #28, by EN Christmas Eve

11th October 2009:
i have a feeling that Allegra will be doing the - ' keep ur friends close but keep ur enemies closer ' thing. she does consider victoire her enemy right...? ? ? well this could be fun. im eager to see how this turns out .

Author's Response: She does have a plan... she's her parents' daughtr after all... haha... We shall see..

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Review #29, by marauderqueen Christmas Eve

10th October 2009:
I liked this chappie. Al is getting to the 'grown up' stage of life lol
Keep it up
x
10

Author's Response: She is growing up, isn't she? I'm writing the next chapter now.
Thanks


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Review #30, by verbal87 Home for Christmas

10th October 2009:
I thought it was nice, the way Renee was immediately integrated into the family and got the chance to see the madhouse that created Allegra. The little bit between Lily and Terese was brilliant as well, and perfectly written. Now all we're missing is a little Allegra/Teddy reconciliation although I can see that being easier said then done with Victoire in the way. 10/10 anyway

xxx

Author's Response: I have an idea re Allegra/Teddy/Victoire... tee hee just about to post the beginnings of it...

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Review #31, by verbal87 Learning

10th October 2009:
Another lovely chapter and as you said, a fantastic way of cementing the friendship. It was especially nice to see the more caring sensitive side of Allegra come out. Obviously we know she can be like that but most of the time, she just puts up the bolshy, slightly spoilt front we've come to expect which I think she hides behind slightly so it was nice to get more of a true reflection of her. 10/10 again anyway soph!

xxx

Author's Response: I think coming from a family full of strong characters she feels she has to hold her own. But she is very much her mothers daughter, and would do anything for the people she loves!

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Review #32, by verbal87 First day

10th October 2009:
Wow, I think i'd probably be overawed too if i'd met someone like Allegra, especially with the size of that family as well. Another brilliant chapter though and i'm really liking the character of Renee, she seems the perfect foil for Allegra, trying to calm her down. I think the Allegra/Victoire rivalry will be brilliant in this story as well. Fantabuloso anyway soph!!

xxx

Author's Response: She is a character and a half, isn't she??? It felt like a good idea to have a character to balance her out. And the rivalry could get fun...

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Review #33, by EN Home for Christmas

30th September 2009:
im glad that allegra realises that she is lucky to have such a wonderful family... i hav seen a totally different side of her... maybe she is not as bad as she is on the surface. when is she going to face teddy ???

Author's Response: She is Sirius and Terese's daughter after all ;)
She knows what she has, she just doesn't like Victoire. As for Teddy... I have a plan.
Thanks :)


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Review #34, by i First day

14th September 2009:
me likes, this was a very good chapter :P

Author's Response: Aw thanks very much!

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Review #35, by EN First day

14th September 2009:
Allegra never tires of showing off, does she... its like her daily boost for a nice day !!! i hope renee isn't a suck up and can stand on her own feet.

Author's Response: I think Renee is a bit overawed at the moment- we shall see... And Allegra is her father's daughter I think...

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Review #36, by marauderqueen After the feast

4th September 2009:
I do like this very much but Allegra's character is quite on/off for me. I love her for the most part but like, her spoiltness is annoying.
Don't think I'm critising this because I'm really not!! I love this story.
Please update
marauderqueen
10

Author's Response: I can totally understand that, but hats the whole point of her character and a big part of this is her mayrealising shes not the centre of the universe haha.
Thanks, I'm happy you like it :)


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Review #37, by verbal87 After the feast

4th September 2009:
I have to say, Allegra's life is a lot less carefree than it always seemed that she would come across throughout "All is Not Lost".

Definitely think that this Allegra/Victoire feud has got a lot of legs in it and I like this new character, Renee already, she seems quite a polar opposite to Allegra so might be the person to keep her grounded occasionally. Anyways, I think i've pretty much exhausted any imaginative superlatives I might have had during all of the reviews i've given you so i'll just say another fantastic chapter and another 10/10. Brilliant as usual soph!!

James xx

Author's Response: Thanks yet again :) (I think I'e definately exhausted that one!!)
I like Renee and I thought, as you said, she could balance Allegra out now Teddy isn't around so much...


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Review #38, by verbal87 Kings Cross

4th September 2009:
Yay, the Allegra/Victoire feud has begun, was brilliant the way yu did it and had Allegra catching them both. Victoire really seems to be a nasty piece of work the way you've written her in this. Anyways, brilliant as usual, loved it and looking forward to reading the next chapter now :)

10/10

James xx

Author's Response: hehe Victoire isn't the nicest is she???
Thanks, and feel free to throw any random ideas at me lol


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Review #39, by EN Kings Cross

3rd September 2009:
hey... is allegra in love with teddy or is it just a possessive feeling. is ted with victoire ? i know allegra is spoilt and i guess she will learn her lesson one day about jealousy the hard way...

Author's Response: Its jealousy pure and simple. Similar to how James was when Sirius and Terese got together. As for Teddy and Victoire...I haven't decided yet...

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Review #40, by EN Past revisited

27th August 2009:
hey... this story looks interesting... im eager to see where this will go... pls do update soon...

Author's Response: I'll update when I can. No one can post at the moment but I'll try and have something for when I can...

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Review #41, by verbal87 Past revisited

18th August 2009:
ooh well that's an interesting twist you've snuck in there, so she can see visions of the past or is it just visions of murder she can see, either way very interesting and an intriguing way of fleshing out the story for future chapters. Brilliantly written as usual and I don't care if you think i'm being too kind, I think its fantastic lol!!

10/10 again anyway

James xx

Author's Response: you really are making me blush haha. I thought there should be a way of bringing out the strength of the magic she was displaying as a toddler. Not quite sure what exactly to do with it as yet... Any ideas welcome lol


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Review #42, by verbal87 Arrivals

17th August 2009:
Woo hoo!! Now I know i've been horrible reviewing anyone's work recently but if there was ever a reason to come back to the site, its definitely Allegra's very own fic!

She's already one of my favourite characters on the site so having a fic of her own is just fantastic really. Anyway, on to the chapter. I thought it bridged the 14 year gap really well and still maintained the essentials of each character especially Allegra's pampered behaviour. I thought Stephen was really well done as well.

Anyway, fantastic start to what i'm sure could well be my new favourite fic. 10/10

James xxx

Author's Response: Hey stranger (hehe)
I had a little plot bunny and couldn't resist- shes just too much fun!
Ps check out found again- I wrote something you asked me to ages ago...


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Review #43, by marauderqueen Arrivals

16th August 2009:
Good first chapter. Nice to see Al grown up a bit :P
please keep going, id like to see what you have in store for us.
marauderqueen
10

Author's Response: Thank you :-)
I do have a few ideas...


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