{reviewid: 2374716, reviewer: 'very%20proud%20ravenclaw'}
7th July 2010:
I'm so anxious to see how her parents react! oh, this is gonna be good. love it and update soon!
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{reviewid: 2374708, reviewer: 'very%20proud%20ravenclaw'}
7th July 2010:
this is very interesting. i like it alt
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{reviewid: 2370083, reviewer: 'RupertsPheonix'}
29th June 2010:
I like this story quite a bit. Interesting twist to the teen-pregnancy, which is a bit refreshing.
I like that Rose is very close with her family. It's unusual to see her close with James in a Next Gen fic, and that's pretty neat. :) I also love that Lily is willing to keep the secret as Rose figures out how to break the news. I would like to see Albus try to be supportive, even though he's bound to be upset. Even though he's a blabbermouth, Rose seems to think he's a good cousin all in all.
On the family front, I can't wait to read about Rose's telling everyone. I can't even begin to imagine it! I hope Scorpius is kind (at least somewhat) when she talks to him about the situation next. I hope their relationship grows from here on out.
As a side note, you might want to look into getting a beta. You have some grammatical issues (dealing with commas and tenses and such) that could be taken care of easily with a proofreader.
Great job thus far! Update soon please?
--Kate/RP
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{reviewid: 2367475, reviewer: 'Maeve%20Epans'}
25th June 2010:
o_o
I love this story. Period.
Write more! This is so awesome!
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{reviewid: 2333983, reviewer: 'gracea569'}
17th April 2010:
Ooh, Scorpius must have saved her :)
Keep it up
xx
Grace
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{reviewid: 2333978, reviewer: 'gracea569'}
17th April 2010:
Brilliant. Much better than them getting drunk and having unprotected sex :) Just makes it interesting, and Rose still seem sort of innocent. Can't wait to see how the parents take it :)
xx
Grace
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{reviewid: 2333975, reviewer: 'gracea569'}
17th April 2010:
Awesome, there are many stories out and about like this, but there is something about this, maybe the cliffhanger, that makes it seem better :)
xx
Grace
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{reviewid: 2329400, reviewer: 'Rowdy18'}
9th April 2010:
Uh oh. Ron better be like drunk or something when Rose tells her family. He gonna flip. More soon please!
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{reviewid: 2327098, reviewer: 'Sarcastic_Bones'}
6th April 2010:
It's so brave of Rose to accept the rumours that could circulate about her just so that Scorpius isn't tragetted also.
I felt so bad for her in this chapter but I loved that she had Lily and James to talk to.
Her parents may go mental, yes. Uh oh.
I look forwards to the next chapter.
10/10
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{reviewid: 2327091, reviewer: 'Sarcastic_Bones'}
6th April 2010:
Oh, Rose! You should really lock the door!
Excelent ending, though. :)
I really enjoyed this chapter.
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{reviewid: 2327078, reviewer: 'Sarcastic_Bones'}
6th April 2010:
I just love how James is the dependable cousin. :)
And I so hope Scorpius starts to care.
Great chapter.
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{reviewid: 2325240, reviewer: 'regin'}
4th April 2010:
I Like, I Lust, I Love!!Please Update Soon!!
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{reviewid: 2324098, reviewer: 'Bleached%20Rose'}
2nd April 2010:
Interesting...I'll read on.
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{reviewid: 2323507, reviewer: 'prongsie4ever'}
31st March 2010:
wow i wonder if rose will tell him
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{reviewid: 2323459, reviewer: 'amy'}
31st March 2010:
i can,t wait to see what they allsay about it all
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{reviewid: 2323440, reviewer: 'jessicanicole'}
31st March 2010:
Oh dear, this seems to be getting better and better with each new twist. I'm quite curious to see if Lily can keep a secret, how Scorpius is going to act when all this starts getting worse, and how Rose's parents are going to react. Great job! Excited to see what comes next :)
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{reviewid: 2323379, reviewer: 'Hermionniny9'}
31st March 2010:
oh dear me... this could be an interesting family meal. well i cant wait.
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{reviewid: 2323363, reviewer: 'Ponytail%20Goddess'}
31st March 2010:
That went better than expected.
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{reviewid: 2323352, reviewer: 'serenity_1'}
31st March 2010:
I LOVE what you've written so far.
Hope you update again soon cause I can't wait to read what happens next! 10/10
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{reviewid: 2322718, reviewer: 'reading_is_my_life'}
30th March 2010:
Looking forward to the next chapter. Can't wait to see how the Weasley/Potter clan reacts. I mean you really can't be mad at Malfoy since he didn't do ir
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{reviewid: 2322684, reviewer: 'reading_is_my_life'}
29th March 2010:
Ok I have to say I might like this twist on the whole Scorpious gets Rose pregnant fic. I had to lol when I read how she got pregnant.
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{reviewid: 2319264, reviewer: 'Hermionegrangeravis'}
23rd March 2010:
i love it keep updatiung i love love it!
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{reviewid: 2313538, reviewer: 'Rowdy18'}
13th March 2010:
uh oh! She better tell her parents ASAP! Before Lily does. Oh man, I can't wait to see what happends next. More soon!
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{reviewid: 2311006, reviewer: 'Hermionniny9'}
9th March 2010:
Nosey cousins, tut tut.
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{reviewid: 2309965, reviewer: 'ThelostWeasley13'}
7th March 2010:
LOL! That was so funny. Poor Rose she got herself into one big mess her and there is no one to help her out now. I can't wait for the next chapter to see how it keeps going.
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