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104 Reviews Found

Review #26, by very proud ravenclaw Quiet Laughter

7th July 2010:
I'm so anxious to see how her parents react! oh, this is gonna be good. love it and update soon!

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Review #27, by very proud ravenclaw Revelations Of Accidental Reproduction

7th July 2010:
this is very interesting. i like it alt

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Review #28, by RupertsPheonix Quiet Laughter

29th June 2010:
I like this story quite a bit. Interesting twist to the teen-pregnancy, which is a bit refreshing.

I like that Rose is very close with her family. It's unusual to see her close with James in a Next Gen fic, and that's pretty neat. :) I also love that Lily is willing to keep the secret as Rose figures out how to break the news. I would like to see Albus try to be supportive, even though he's bound to be upset. Even though he's a blabbermouth, Rose seems to think he's a good cousin all in all.

On the family front, I can't wait to read about Rose's telling everyone. I can't even begin to imagine it! I hope Scorpius is kind (at least somewhat) when she talks to him about the situation next. I hope their relationship grows from here on out.

As a side note, you might want to look into getting a beta. You have some grammatical issues (dealing with commas and tenses and such) that could be taken care of easily with a proofreader.

Great job thus far! Update soon please?

--Kate/RP

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Review #29, by Maeve Epans Quiet Laughter

25th June 2010:
o_o

I love this story. Period.

Write more! This is so awesome!

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Review #30, by gracea569 Games And Flirtation Situations

17th April 2010:
Ooh, Scorpius must have saved her :)
Keep it up
xx
Grace

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Review #31, by gracea569 Revelations Of Accidental Reproduction

17th April 2010:
Brilliant. Much better than them getting drunk and having unprotected sex :) Just makes it interesting, and Rose still seem sort of innocent. Can't wait to see how the parents take it :)
xx
Grace

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Review #32, by gracea569 Revelations For One

17th April 2010:
Awesome, there are many stories out and about like this, but there is something about this, maybe the cliffhanger, that makes it seem better :)
xx
Grace

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Review #33, by Rowdy18 Quiet Laughter

9th April 2010:
Uh oh. Ron better be like drunk or something when Rose tells her family. He gonna flip. More soon please!

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Review #34, by Sarcastic_Bones Quiet Laughter

6th April 2010:
It's so brave of Rose to accept the rumours that could circulate about her just so that Scorpius isn't tragetted also.
I felt so bad for her in this chapter but I loved that she had Lily and James to talk to.
Her parents may go mental, yes. Uh oh.
I look forwards to the next chapter.
10/10

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Review #35, by Sarcastic_Bones Truth Without Freedom

6th April 2010:
Oh, Rose! You should really lock the door!
Excelent ending, though. :)
I really enjoyed this chapter.

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Review #36, by Sarcastic_Bones Of Prats And Kept Secrets

6th April 2010:
I just love how James is the dependable cousin. :)
And I so hope Scorpius starts to care.
Great chapter.

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Review #37, by regin Revelations Of Accidental Reproduction

4th April 2010:
I Like, I Lust, I Love!!Please Update Soon!!

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Review #38, by Bleached Rose Revelations For One

2nd April 2010:
Interesting...I'll read on.

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Review #39, by prongsie4ever Revelations For One

31st March 2010:
wow i wonder if rose will tell him

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Review #40, by amy Quiet Laughter

31st March 2010:
i can,t wait to see what they allsay about it all

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Review #41, by jessicanicole Quiet Laughter

31st March 2010:
Oh dear, this seems to be getting better and better with each new twist. I'm quite curious to see if Lily can keep a secret, how Scorpius is going to act when all this starts getting worse, and how Rose's parents are going to react. Great job! Excited to see what comes next :)

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Review #42, by Hermionniny9 Quiet Laughter

31st March 2010:
oh dear me... this could be an interesting family meal. well i cant wait.

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Review #43, by Ponytail Goddess Quiet Laughter

31st March 2010:
That went better than expected.

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Review #44, by serenity_1 Quiet Laughter

31st March 2010:
I LOVE what you've written so far.

Hope you update again soon cause I can't wait to read what happens next! 10/10

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Review #45, by reading_is_my_life Truth Without Freedom

30th March 2010:
Looking forward to the next chapter. Can't wait to see how the Weasley/Potter clan reacts. I mean you really can't be mad at Malfoy since he didn't do ir

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Review #46, by reading_is_my_life Revelations Of Accidental Reproduction

29th March 2010:
Ok I have to say I might like this twist on the whole Scorpious gets Rose pregnant fic. I had to lol when I read how she got pregnant.

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Review #47, by Hermionegrangeravis Truth Without Freedom

23rd March 2010:
i love it keep updatiung i love love it!

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Review #48, by Rowdy18 Truth Without Freedom

13th March 2010:
uh oh! She better tell her parents ASAP! Before Lily does. Oh man, I can't wait to see what happends next. More soon!

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Review #49, by Hermionniny9 Truth Without Freedom

9th March 2010:
Nosey cousins, tut tut.

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Review #50, by ThelostWeasley13 Truth Without Freedom

7th March 2010:
LOL! That was so funny. Poor Rose she got herself into one big mess her and there is no one to help her out now. I can't wait for the next chapter to see how it keeps going.

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