you wrote that so well, all of the feelings were conveyed and such beautiful language!Author's Response: Thank you! I tried to express the feelings without coming out and saying "This is how it is." (; Report Review
Hello, this is Wildheart!
Challenging challenge, eh? I think you definitely overcame the difficulty, because I certainly found it believable and interesting.
I love how you showed Voldemort's affection quite clearly, too, and not just Bella's. You were good at making it clear without just having them say the words "I love you" or something.
Thanks for joining in on the challenge! I hope you enjoyed writing the entry like I enjoyed reading it!
~WildheartAuthor's Response: Heh, it was rather challenging. This is my third attempt at making this believable, and I must say, I really like how it turned out.
I'm glad you liked it! I had a lot of fun writing it. (; Thanks for the review! Report Review
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