i hope rose gets some closure atleast now...Author's Response: She will :) Thanks for the review! Report Review
awww, i was hoping rose would give scorpius a chance but i guess the heart wants what it wants. it seems like everyone is happy though (except for teddy/victoire) so i'm glad for that. i hope everyone finds their happiness.Author's Response: Thank you so much :) If you haven't seen already, the sequel is up, so you'll be able to see if they do find their happiness or not. Report Review
Yay! So good! I love ur writing style- it just flows so well and ur extremely creative. Can't wait for the sequel!Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked the flow and it's such a compliment that you think I'm creative. I hope you enjoy the sequel, which is now posted :) Report Review
I loved this story and had been reading it fro a while (even if I didn't review it) and now it's finished. Great ending, the whole thing with Dom was written nicely and Teddy definitely changed. I was slightly disappointed that Rose and Scorpius didn't end up together, but you writ a really good story.Author's Response: Sorry to disappoint, but at this point in time it definitely wasn't right for them to be together. The sequel is now up, so who knows where they'll go from here ;) Thank you for reviewing, I'm glad you enjoyed it! Report Review
Oh gosh, I remembered reading this when you were only on Chapter 14 (I remember reviewing on my birthday too!) You've come a long way and I'm super psyched about the sequel. I think it's a good plan (well since I'm pretty much addicted to Rose and Scorp now.) I want Teddy and Victoire back together since it's going to be an impossible task, I want it to be a possibility.
You'll do great in the sequel and I'll keep following you no matter what! Author's Response: Wow, Chapter 14 seems like a lifetime ago! Thank you so much for reviewing, I look forward to seeing you again in the sequel :) Report Review
AH LOVED IT! This was a fantastic end to a fantastic story, congratulations!!! xxAuthor's Response: Thank you so much! :) Report Review
Oh my gosh, loved this story so much! It had a really good plot which was nice and the humour was spot on! Ah have so much love for this story right now! Rose was perfect, and I am so so glad she grew up but still was as sarcastic as ever! I come from a large extended family myself so i could definatly relate to her! ...wish i could relate to the magic part as well though! Anyway great story, can't wait for a sequel!Author's Response: Thank you so much! Humour is so hard and important to get right, so I'm thrilled you thought it was spot on. Thank you and I hope you enjoy the sequel :) Report Review
Oh... That was so good. :)... But... Matthew? Author's Response: Yes, Matthew! I'm surprised you didn't see it coming. Thanks for the review! Report Review
Matthew? Well, I suppose every girl needs a practice boyfriend. He's okay, just wanted to see Scorpius and Rose mature together in the long run. Teddy needs some father lessons.
Yea! a sequel. So much out there left unsaid, I'm happy you decided to continue. I loved this story. See you with the next one :)Author's Response: I am so excited for the sequel. I have so many ideas and I knew in my heart I wasn't ready to stop writing Rose. Lots more to come, so I hope you enjoy it. Thank you for your continuing support the whole way through, I really appreciate it :) Report Review
Yes! Woo! I sort of hope Victiore finds someone.
So excitteedd agh!
Shindig :DAuthor's Response: I'm so excited for the sequel!! I wasn't planning on it, but I decided I had so much more story left to tell and I wasn't quite ready to leave Rose behind just yet :) Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
Congrats on finishing!! I loved the last scene with Scorpius, he's such a lovable loser!
And teddy.. Grr he was such a letdown.
Love that she's with matthew!
Thanks for sharing this with us all, and congrats again on completing it!Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it :D Report Review
YAY! SO HAPPY! An amazing story has finally come to an amazing end *sniff* so emotional right now! It was perfect. Seriously. Loving that Matthew and Rose are together now (forget the lawyer, although that was definitely a red herring) and they are ridic cute. THEY MUST HAVE CHILDREN IN THE SEQUEL! Ahem.
I thought the whole seeing the baby at Shell Cottage was done really well and didn't make the epilogue a sugar-fest. It was bittersweet, and it was good to see Teddy there just so we could hate him a bit more. So many stories make a point of idolising him so it's nice to see a different angle being taken with him. I actually really loved Albus in this too, although I only just realised this now. He definitely needs to have a bigger role in the sequel because I love him and that's enough reasoning, right?
Victoire is such a babe in this. I love how Rose has really gone on a journey when it comes to Victoire in that she went from hating/envying her to "admiring" her as you put it, so of course now I love her too. She is handling things remarkably well though, I would have gone a little bit insane to be honest. Though maybe that's just me. :P
And last but not least, SCORP. The character you have made me despair over the entire bloomin' time. (Still hate you.) Gotta say that his bit was hilarious, knitting club? Really? Sounds right up my mum's street... Though I'm glad that he's moved on and that they're just friends. And that he's a little bit less weird in this. There's hope yet...
AMAZING work lovely, this is one of my favourite stories ever and I've loved every minute of it. Thank you for writing such a wonderful story and I LOVE YOU! Report Review
Another mushy chapter! Luckily I love mush, so we're golden. It was good to see everything sort of 'coming together' again, what with Molly and Rose sharing the flat again and hearing Victoire's thoughts on everything. Although Lorcan annoyed me, he should be happy that his girlfriend has made up with her best friend! Hmph.
I actually can't think of anything else to say because I can't even tell you how excited I am to read the epilogue!! Report Review
Oh goodness, so emotional! :'( you did Boris' funeral very well, dear. Although I half expected something weird to happen there because it seems like Boris would have wanted something like that to happen. :P
I'm definitely thinking that Scorp and Rose are just gonna be friends from now on, thank goodness. Ever since you ruined Scorp for me I have secretly hoped this (unless Scorp magically turned into a Greek god overnight). Matthew and Rose - didn't see that coming really, I was thinking the lawyer more?! Hmm. Still two chapters to go...
And the bit with Dominique in was cute too. She really needed to redeem herself somehow, although I still think of Teddy as the real villain in the whole situation. Still, no more giant Weasley get togethers, right?
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Grr...Molly. I actually think Rose is in the right this time, and I do think it seems to be gang up on Rose week. Bless Scorpius though, he's being really sweet and a true friend to her.
Love it.Author's Response: Thank you so much! Report Review
I'm really sorry that I haven't reviewed this story so far because it's amazing and I'm just reading it so quickly, but I had to with this chapter.
Oh. My. God.
The whole make-up of this story has just come crashing down with this news! I can't actually believe it! I thought Teddy was a genuinely nice guy! Rose is going to have a self esteem collapse after this, and be very conflicted.
I also want to say I love the way you write. You managed to make so many witticisms and write in an engrossing way. I love it! Report Review
No! I don't want this to end. Rose and Scorpius haven't even gotten together. Oh boo. :( I suppose my gunning for them through the entire story was for nothing? Ah well! I still enjoyed their friendship and slight relationship anyway.
I thought it was very big of Rose to ask Victorie if she wanted to come and apply for a job. I think back to Rose from the first chapter and golly (oh lord i just used the word golly) she has changed! I feel like she's nicer, more understanding and she grew up a lot. She's going to make poor choices again I'm sure but she's going to come out stronger with whatever she does. And she has a 'proper' job now! Go Rose!
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Rose owning a shop? It's actually...well, I could see it and I dig it. Scorpius was too cute when he said she wouldn't have time for him. He's still clearly in their relationship and I think Rose has been distracted that she doesn't realize the way they've been acting towards each other. I think her leaving his flat would really sting him.
I'm still sad about Boris but life really is too short. I thought it was kind of funny that his wife was really nice to her considering she once thought he was having an affair with Rose. Oh! That feels like a life time ago. Now everyone has grown up and they're acting age appropriate. Even Dom has turned out nice! What character development! Report Review
Brilliant writing. Rose is so likeable- very human, very flawed, very normal.
I read this thinking it would be a ScoRose, and as much as I love your Scorpius, I think it would be great if they stay just friends. But in saying that, who she going to be with?!?
All of your characters are so well rounded as individuals, and (apart from the whole magic thing) this story is so realistically portrayed! I love it!
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So I'm not going to reread this chapter but I want to review before I go away.
I KNOW THIS WAS FAB. I LOVE YOU LOTS. HAVE A NICE LIFE.
xxAuthor's Response: Enjoy your holiday! Report Review
Love it! Update soon please!Author's Response: Thank you! I will :) Report Review
Great chapter! I can't wait to read more!Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review :) Report Review
This is such a lovely chapter, with the forgiveness and family looove etc ;) I admire Victoire too.
Treated myself to a packet of ginger biscuits while reading it... I'm gonna miss this story! Looking forward to the epilogue!Author's Response: Oh I am already missing it so much. Thank you for the review and I really hope you enjoy the epilogue :) Report Review
Last chapter? She just left Scorpius and is gone home to Molly, and has a new guy in her life, are you continuing in a new fiction now? Just doesn't seem done to me. Good yes!Author's Response: Well, I suppose it's never ever going to really be the "end", is it? for the purposes of this novel, Rose has developed and changed beyond the person we met in chapter 1 so to keep going now defeats the plot and themes rather! We won't say the word sequel because it scares me, but I'm tempted. We'll see if everyone hates Matthew or not and then I'll know whether I can :P Thanks for the review :) See you at the end! Report Review
Ah! Scorose! Scorose! Scorose! Pleassseee!Author's Response: Haha, they're still friends!! Thanks for the review :) Report Review
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