Wow is pretty much the only thing I can say here. I don't think i've ever read a more poignant one-shot on here. I haven't cried in about 7 years but that's as about as emotional as I get after reading this. Fantastically written. It could have easily gone wrong but your writing is so mature that it just becomes fantastic instead.

Yet again, utterly amazing one-shot and i'm definitely going to have to read the rest of your stories now.

10/10

James x

Author's Response: OK, this has totally made my day! I can't thank you enough, ever. I never intend to make people cry, and i certainly didnt with this story, but the fact that you got so emotional when reading is really touching.

I can't say how much this means to me, but just thank you ever so much :)

- Marina

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Well you're lucky I'm wearing waterproof mascara or I'd be so mad at you!!! That really mad me cry. Your writing has a maturity that I could never have managed at your age (and I don't mean to sound patronising) and that was so beautifully done. The way that his memory was slipping away from him was amazingly done, so poignant.
Fantastic!

Author's Response: aw thank you so much! You always kick my doubts right out the window, you know that? thank you *hugs*

I don't know how i get the maturity in there. I think I'm quite naive for my age XD but thank you for saying so all the same. Your opinion matters the most to me.

- Marina.



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