i have no problems except when is there going to be some draco and hermione romance and wright faster i love thisAuthor's Response: Sorryyy, I know Draco and Hermione are still very much enemies atm, but in the next few chapters there will definatley be some action (or the beginnings of anyway!). I have already written up to chapter ten, but the reason they aren't regular is because I have four other stories to update (Torn had to wait it's turn haha!) and the backlog time always changes so that is also delaying the process. But, I will try to udate ASAP! Please keep reading and reviewing! Many thanks, Becky x Report Review
What happened to Hermione? Awesome chapter, by the way.Author's Response: Thank you! Well, the veritaserum made her forget what had happened (plus, well, something else - It'll become clear soon enough - added to the condition, consequently she collapsed under the strain) I hoped this was clear, maybe I should edit it..... Please keep reading and reviewing! Many thanks, Becky x Report Review
Wow, great chapter! I loved it, and that song was very good! Just one mistake I picked up. "Gryffindor whose brave at heart And whose courage will never part" The first 'whose' should really be 'who's', because it is a contraction of who is. Keep writing!Author's Response: woops! Punctuation is my weak point haha! Thanks for spotting the mistake; I'll change it now! Please keep reading and reviewing! Many thanks, Becky x Report Review
You know you wanna update now! Come on!Author's Response: Chapter six is waiting for validation! Many thanks, Becky x Report Review
Good, but could be better, soo keep going and we'll see!Author's Response: Thanks! Well hopefully it'll get better for you lol! Many thanks, Becky x Report Review
Not the best, not the worst. It's worth carrying on!Author's Response: Thanks! I've already wrote up to chapter ten so I'll probably finish it lol! Many thanks, Becky x Report Review
how come it ends here?? Add more now please - deffoo before xmas!Author's Response: Haha! Chapter six will be up in a matter of days and there will probably be about three more chapters before Christmas! Many thanks, Becky x Report Review
one work: amazing! Write more!Author's Response: *blushes* Thank you!!! I' currently writing three strories on here, plus school work so I will definatley keep writing! Many thanks, Becky x Report Review
I don't like Harry Potter, but it was well written so well done!Author's Response: Why are you on a harry potter fan site if you don't like it? Haha! But thank you for te review! Many thanks, Becky x Report Review
Okay, seriously update this very second because I want, no, need more! And your writing is just fabbb!Author's Response: Thank you! Chapter six should be up within days so please keep reading and reviewing! Many thanks, Becky x Report Review
Good, but it seems a little rushed so try slow the pace! Keep up the good work though!Author's Response: Sorryy; it just sometimes seems that nothing's happening, I'll look into it though! Many thanks, Becky x Report Review
First story I've read and I kinda like it so put the next one on soon!Author's Response: Chapter six will be up soon so please keep reading and reviewing! Many thanks, Becky x Report Review
Anither good chapter but I think you should make them longer!Author's Response: I'll try but I don't want to make it all drawn-out and boring! Many thanks, Becky x Report Review
What's the matter wiv Hermione? Update now!Author's Response: You'll find out soon enough, hun! Many thanks, Becky x Report Review
Are you from England? Your writing just seems english lol! But good chappie so keep it up!Author's Response: Yes, I'm from Liverpool, England. Many thanks, Becky x Report Review
I don't normally like draco/hermione strories, but the whole Pansy thing adds a good edge to it and I'm intrigued as to hat will happen next. Update ASAP!Author's Response: Thanks! I quite like Pansy, she gets a lot of angst from other stories (including this one haha) but I'm considering writing a Draco/pansy story; any ideas? Many thanks, Becky x Report Review
Hmm, could be good! Keep writing and update quicker!Author's Response: I try, I try, but I've got lotss of other stories going!! Many thanks, Becky x Report Review
OMG! Update now! Is Draco back to his badboy self of what? I need to know.Author's Response: Ooooo, I love badboy Draco as well, but I'm sorry that he isn't reallly in this story (yet....)! Many thanks, Becky x Report Review
I love Draco so I hope he's happier soon! Keep writing ~ slytherinprncessAuthor's Response: I want him to be happy too but life's not that simple haha! Many thanks, Becky x Report Review
I like it! Keep going and update soon!Author's Response: I will! Many thanks, Becky x Report Review
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I'm very intrigued at this point. The story is well written thus far!!Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you like the consequences that will be unvailed in the next chapter, though I must admit that I'm a little nervous on what everyone will think! Please keep reading and reviewing! Many thanks, Becky x Report Review
? What's going on!!! Great chapter, anyway.Author's Response: Haha! I'll update soon (tomorrow maybe) so you'll find out soon enough! Thank you and please keep reading and reviewing! Many thanks, Becky x Report Review
great job it really good so far not really too original (because there are a lot of dramionie head boy/girl storys) but this one is written very well good job!Author's Response: Oh God, I know! But I just love dramione so much that I have to write it! Thanks for the review and please keep R&R! Many thanks, Becky x Report Review
Another great chapter. You're writing has grown so much over the short span of the story thus far. I'm very impressed. I'm quite pleased with your plot so far as well. The veritaserum idea is clever, and I hope to see the effects in the next chapter! As always, good work! --Kate/RP =)Author's Response: Thank you! Your reviews mean so much to me because you're such a talented author yourself! Please keep reading and reviewing! Many thanks, Becky x Report Review
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