I think that Cronos is having a lot of fun. Actually, so am I. Nice chapter. Harry has more friends this time. I'm glad. Dumbldore is still a twit and can't see that "young" people can have vaild contributions.Author's Response: I always felt he never noticed that in the books, and I'm glad you caught on that I was going for that. Report Review
He, he, ha ha. That prank was truly creative. So you didn't leave out the Chamber. Very nice way to introduce it without the diary. Dumbledore is such a dork.Author's Response: Thanks! When I think of pranks I always go for stuff I've never seen before, truly strange things. I'm glad you're having fun. Report Review
Great chapter. No chamber this time, good. I think I'm going to like this Colin Creevy better too.Author's Response: It's not really second year without the Chamber popping up at least once. Report Review
Interesting way to get rid of Lockhart. I like it. No Chamber of Secrets? I'll keep reading to find out more.Author's Response: I always hated him. Too egotistical. Report Review
Nice little filler. I had a gool laugh over the pranks.Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. Report Review
Great chapter. Harry and Hermione meeting was very sweet. I do have a question though. If Harry's birthday is July 31st, than there should be only one month until September 1st, the month of August. In one paragraph you said that two months until school started passed very quickly. Just curious, since he got his letter on his birthday, unless his birthday is different in your story.Author's Response: Oops. His birthday is still the same. Thanks for pointing that out. Report Review
I must say, wow, killing off all of the Weasleys? I liked most of them. Well, that will certainly make for a different story. Still, I liked this chapter, and good to keep Dumbles from his schemes!Author's Response: They had to go. And yeah, I liked most of them, too. Just Molly, Percy, Ron, and Ginny were the bad ones. But I couldn't come up with a believable way to kill off just those characters. Report Review
Awesome writing, i liked merlin, odin and chronos. I am muslim but love learning about other religions and cultures and this story gave me the chance learn a bit about christianity. But seriously Wow please include more sirius and peneleope scenes. I love sirius, i love his humour and hope u write more :D
Anna ^ ^Author's Response: Don't worry, more is coming up. I've held back on the Sirius/Penelope because she's still a bit young, only just out of school. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Report Review
what plot was bad enough the weasleys would of gone to hell for?Author's Response: Forcing Harry and Hermione to marry Ginny and Ron instead of each other. And all for personal gain. Think sowing discord, and violence against God for subverting the love between soul mates (a la Dante's Inferno). Report Review
Oh I like, it's so sweet. Just one thing When Did Harry and Hermione get engaged? I've probably missed that chapter.
10/10Author's Response: He actually hasn't asked her yet. Don't you think it's cute that he'd call her his fiancee just because he loves her so much and he intends to marry her just as soon as they graduate? But if you find the chapter where Dumbledore and McGonagall get married you'll see a hint. Thanks for asking! Report Review
I'm interested on how Dumbledore's character is going to turn out.. makes it more fun to read :]Author's Response: We\\\'ll see... That\\\'s all I can say for now. Report Review
Is all I've got to say, lol.
-AllieAuthor's Response: Thanks! I\\\'m glad you\\\'re liking it. Report Review
is hermione a virgin?Author's Response: Yes, she is a virgin. She was never assaulted, and never will be. She witnessed something terrible when she was a kid, and it left scars. Report Review
Ugh, Snape adn Krum are picgs. I really like your story it's interesting, especially with the Gods watching them. I can't wait to read more.Author's Response: Thanks! I really like writing this story, and I agree that Snape and Krum are pigs. Report Review
Good chapter :) Nice spell by Lily :DAuthor's Response: Yeah, that was my favorite part, and easiest to write. Report Review
Cool, a very good chapter, and we finally found out what that idiot Snape has been saying to Hermione. Now I'm just waiting for him to get his comeuppance.
10/10Author's Response: Oh, that was just one part of his behavior. There's still more beneath the surface. Just words alone wouldn't have affected her so much, but combined with something she saw... Report Review
Oh very good, been waiting for this chapter. But now I have to wait for the next chapter to find out what Lily does to Snape. Gr you are a mean writer.
Update Soon :)
10/10Author's Response: Of course I'll update soon. But I think you'll like Lily's payback. I just have to think it up first, hehe. Report Review
I'll be looking forward to Lily confronting Snape :DAuthor's Response: Yeah, me too. Never piss off a redhead, or mess with a kid or you'll be asking for trouble from his mother. Report Review
great story so far! plz update soon! i really like this story! update soon! great job so far!Author's Response: The next update will be soon, have no fear. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. Report Review
i like this story so far. it is a little different from wht i normally read. when i read the summery it looked like a timetravel story so i started to read it and got into it so when i found out it wasnt i really didn't care. i also don't usually go for H/Hr but this one seems like it will be a good one! if i do read H/Hr i try to read one like this one when Ginny is out of the picture as well as Ron. great job and i really do like this story so far!Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you kept an open mind, and I can edit the summary so as not to confuse people. Report Review
please continue loving itAuthor's Response: Thanks, will do. Report Review
Omw, that was such a good chapter, I was hooked right from the begining. I would've thought that you would have brought James and Lily into the story immeadiatly after Harry's poisoning, I would've love to of seen James' reaction to Snape poisoning his beloved son.
Anyway really great chapter, I can't wait to to the next update, but I suppose that won't be untill after the queue re-opens :(
10/10Author's Response: Actually, McGonagall informed Moody thinking he'd contact other Aurors, namely James and Lily. But Moody did no such thing, so James and Lily don't know yet.
And since I'm a trusted author, you don't have to wait until it reopens. Lucky you. Report Review
Good chapter, enjoying the story and eagerly awaiting next chapter! :)Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it so much. The next chapter won't be long in coming. Report Review
I like your story so far. The only thing that I don't like is that you have rushed a bit things between Harry and Hermione. Also I wish you could make it a little more like the books. I mean each year harry figures out what's gonna happen too quickly! It seems a bit unrealistic and too easy. It would be great if we could see more events from the books with the harry Hermione touch. These's no danger for Harry and his friends any more.Author's Response: Thanks for the advice, I can try to pull a few more events in. But things have been drastically changed with the addition of James, Lily, Sirius, and Remus as well as the subtraction of those infernal Weasleys. Report Review
Hey, this is a really good chapter. Just two things I want to ask you.
1. Please tell us what happened to Hermione, I really want to know what happened to her.
2. What is Harry's animagus form, you said we would find out in the next chapters but we didn't.
Anyways good chapter can't wait for the next one.
10/10Author's Response: 1.) This is a vital plot point, but I can give you a hint. She saw something she was never supposed to, now she's traumatized.
2.) Did I forget that? Sorry about that. Harry's form is a griffin.
The next chapter will be coming soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Report Review
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