It was great how easily they got rid of Lockhart as a professor before September first. Well done--keep up the good work! :DAuthor's Response: That was easy, actually. All I had to do was save James and Lily. Report Review
Another fun chapter--I loved the prank that Harry and Hermione pulled DumbOldDoor. Well done--keep up the good work! :DAuthor's Response: Thanks! I appreciate that! Report Review
This was a fun chapter to read. Well done--keep up the good work! :DAuthor's Response: I had fun writing it, too. I'm glad you had fun reading it. Report Review
*::cavalry bugle charge::* Harry and Hermione to the rescue! This was a fun and exciting chapter. Well done--keep up the good work! :DAuthor's Response: Yep, Harry and Hermione to the rescue! If it wasn't for them, Voldemort would be Headmaster. Report Review
I like how Harry has been taught some skills at home, prior to his Hogwarts years, such as potions and flying. It is because of this training that Harry was able to predict the events unfolding in Potions class, allowing him to save Professor Snape's life. I got a chuckle out of their (Harry and Hermione's) idea of maybe enchanting a fishing pole to remove Professor Quirrell's turban. I forgot to mention, in my review for the last chapter, that I thought that it was a great plot point/background history to have had Peter Pettigrew discovered and arrested prior to Harry entering Hogwarts. Well done--keep up the good work! :DAuthor's Response: Yes, there was no way James and Lily would have allowed Harry to begin at Hogwarts without teaching him some things. Most parents do. And you can count on kids to think outside the box, as in the fishing pole plan. Report Review
Great chapter; I enjoyed Harry and Hermione meeting for the first time and hitting it off right away. I also enjoyed the segment on the train in which Hermione snuggling into his side, and Harry asked her to be his girlfriend (when they are old enough to date that is); it was so sweet. Well done--keep up the good work! :DAuthor's Response: Thanks, I thought it was sweet, too. Report Review
Whoa! The Weasley family off-ed by Voldemort and company on the day of their coming home with baby Ginny?... BRILLIANT! Although I never had anything against Bill, Charlie, or the twins. The rest I can do without. LOL I thought that it was too cool that by having the above take place, it dashed DumbOldDork's plans straight to Hades. This story has a great plot concept. I'm looking forward to seeing how it pans out. Well done--keep up the good work! :DAuthor's Response: Yeah, I like Bill, Charlie, the twins and Arthur. But Molly, Ron, and Ginny had to go. I'm glad you think my story has potential. Report Review
i hope that you update soon its just now getting good.Author's Response: The next update will be soon, the chapter is finished but I have something else awaiting validation now. Report Review
Nicely done. So when's the next chapter?Author's Response: Whenever I get enough time off from school to write it. Report Review
when are you going to write some more i love this storyAuthor's Response: School's a bitch, isn't it? I'm glad you like the story, but writing has to take the passenger seat when I'm at school. Report Review
yeah they do tend to tell you a bit more than necessary don't they. but year 11 health was worse.Author's Response: When my teacher got to the unit with...certain parts of the body involved in, how should I put this without ticking off any mods, continuation of the human race, he scarred everyone for life. I will never forget the "black box". Report Review
Nice chapter, i wish it'd be longer tough :DAuthor's Response: Thanks. I can't do longer chapters now because with school it would take too long. But I'll try. Report Review
Very nice litte chapter. Love the scene when Harry sees Hermione. The ring is a nice touch. Poor Cedric. I hope he gets over Cho. There are much better witches out there for him!Author's Response: He will, eventually. His road to happiness will just be bumpier than Harry's was. Report Review
Aww nice we chapter, now what I would like to see is Harry, Hermione, Katie, Neville and Luna all getting their revenge on Cho. Not that I'm telling you how to write your fabulous Story :). I can't wait to see what happens between Sirius and Penelope. 10/10 , brilliant as usual.Author's Response: Oh, Sirius and Penelope are now engaged, so they'll get married soon. Probably next summer. Cho will get what she deserves, as will someone else. Report Review
Its a great story and needs to be updated asap.Author's Response: I know, and I'm sorry for the delay. But thanks for reading and reviewing. Report Review
Excellent!!! i love this story more and more everytime i reread it to refresh my memory before reading the newer chapters!!! great job and update soon plz! Also if you have the time i would be extremely grateful if you would read my story The Changes To Life and Review. I need all the feedback in can get! thanx and great story really love it!!!Author's Response: Sure, I'll check it out. I'll update as soon as I can, but it'll be difficult. Anyway, I'm really glad you like my story so much. Report Review
This story is awsome. Sorry, I stopped reviewing each chapter, I just wanted to keep reading, this was so good. I can hardly wait for the next chapter, but I know that you have school, so I'll wait.Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you like the story so much, and I'll update as fast as I can. School gets in the way, doesn't it? Report Review
Hm, the plot thickens. Can't wait to see what happens next.Author's Response: Thanks! You'll see later what Snape's deep, dark secret is. Report Review
Great chapter. I hope that you get that greasy git soon.Author's Response: He's on borrowed time now, and the bill will come due in a few years. You can think of Harry as a creditor. Report Review
Wonderful prank. Your very creative. Harry even got his father, that was just classic. LOL. I can't believe that Dumbledore thought James would be upset. Dunce!Author's Response: Thanks! I'm you liked the prank. I had so much fun writing it! Report Review
Loved this chapter. Oops indeed. And Dumbledore is still a dunce.Author's Response: Yeah, he is. He may be a genius, but no one can accuse him of being smart. Report Review
LOL. I have a great laugh over this chapter all the way around. Thanks. I think that Snape should stay that way, but, hey that's me.Author's Response: Did you read my mind? I'd like it if he stayed that way, too, but he has a larger role to play still. Report Review
Numbnut, loved that. Twit, twat, idiot, dumbbell, dork, airhead, sits on his brains, I could go on, but I won't. Excellent chapter. Oh yes, good riddance to bad rubbish.Author's Response: Yeah, I liked that, too. Thanks. Report Review
Without POA, I'm very curious what you will do with third year. I'm also glad that you took out the time turner.Author's Response: I just couldn't think what I would do with it. But I'm glad you think I didn't take the meat out of the year. Report Review
Snape giving the "talk"? Ack! Run for cover! LOL Great chapter.Author's Response: Yeah. Sort of reminds me of my health class back in high school. Thanks, though. Report Review
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