So, I read your first story in about a day(I'm a reading fiend) and now I have come to the conclusion that you are a pretty good writer, and I really enjoy this story you have. Update soon please, because I'm not sure I can wait that long. P.S. I voted, and I don't really know about this Honor stuff. I mean, she could be better than Delilah, and I'm glad that you let another side of her come through. I'm not asking for them to be friends, but maybe Dom and Honor could not hate each other? Report Review
I love it. Update soon! Report Review
So I haven't been on for a while so i had a lot of catching up to do (I think it was about 5 chapters!) But now i am going to need to remind myself to keep coming on to see the updates for this! I do not know what to make of Honor but I really hope she doesn't screw everything up for Dom. I like that Dom and Lorcan broke up which sounds bad but i am hoping they get back together in the future but i think i ship Dom and Wood in my current mind frame :') Update soon? Report Review
I'm actually glad you included depth to the character of Miss Jones in this chapter! I know she seems like a bitch and is part of the high school drama that essentilally runs this story but YAY FOR NICE PEOPLE ^^
I'll be interested to see character development of honor woot! Report Review
I voted! Also, I love Freddie and I can totally see it... Idk maybe shell become a nice Person. I wanna know tho! Update again! I'm addicted! Report Review
Oh Merlin. This is a bad deal all around. Terrible bad deal. More like a horrible deal. I don't know how Dom hasn't completely broke down yet from all these bad things that are happening to her. She is a strong girl. Good chapter, in any case. Update soon!
-KAuthor's Response: I feel awful for my poor character :( Report Review
Aww, poor Neville! But still, I have to love anyone who paraphrases 'Gone With the Wind' (:
Great chapter again and I'm looking forward to finding out what Dom has to do next and what the repercussions of her deal with Honor are.
-TashaAuthor's Response: It should be fun :) Report Review
Woahhh, total change in Jones.
That was definitely unexpected.
Do explain, haha. :)Author's Response: YAY for unexpected :) Report Review
Dom agreed to help Honor? Really? Honor (oddly) appears to be sincere in pursuing Fred. I'll bet that Holden did a good job with the team and she won't find them dead when she finally gets back to practice. Thanks for the update - I look forward to reading about the game. The team seems to be in disarray at the moment. I just voted for your essay. Good luck with the competition.Author's Response: I think she's sincere. I do not actually know just yet. :) Report Review
I am pitting it on me Facebook.Author's Response: You are FABULOUS! Report Review
1)" Suck my non-existent dick, H.J." Most. epic. quote. EVER!
2) HOlden is back, albeit it briefly!
3) However, my joy for that is countered by the fact that LOrcan is still being a DICK!
4) Honor and Fred. I can definitely see it. I hope she's being sincere!
5) Awww, James, i love you and your girly ways.Author's Response: THIS CHAPTER IS FULL OF EPIC DOM QUOTES. I was on a serious kick when I wrote it. :D Report Review
I'm trying to vote for you but everytime I go to the page it doesnt load properly. I'll work on that. :)
Loved this chapter! & I kind of like the idea about Dom working with Honor. Maybe Honor will stop being such a bitch if she gets with Freddie, who knows. Plus, Honor cant be much worse than Delilah as a girlfriend for her cousin, so she isnt really loosing here. Thats the way I see it anyways.
I'm kinda wanting to see something with Holden & Dom soon. I didnt really like him in the first story, but I'm secretly wishing Locran would fall off his broom during the Quidditch game, so Holden is my favorite now.lol Your doing a great job. :DAuthor's Response: Thank you so much :) Report Review
Voted! Hope you win!
Honor likes... Fred? When did this happen, lol? This isn't going to be pretty.Author's Response: I know! I amaze myself sometimes with my hooks. Have you all missed me? Report Review
This is not going to end well...Author's Response: Absolutely not ;) Report Review
I dislike this chapter. Only because I thought that your own version of Dom and Lorcan were perfect for each other, they balanced each other out. I hope they can work it out but at the moment I doubt that. Please update soon! (:Author's Response: I dislike what happens myself, but all characters must go through things like this sometimes. No happy endings. :( Report Review
1) WHAT? no... WHy, LOrcan, whyyy? He BETTER have an explanation! PLEase, please get back them together!
2) Tears, tears and more tears.
3) I AM happy for James and Penelope!... but so sad for Dom!
4) "Lorcan Newt Scamander has ruined Quidditch for me – at least for the time being.
I am going to kill him." Yes, she SHOULD
5) PLEASE update, it's killing me!Author's Response: He will eventually, but he doesn't yet. I'll update soon, but there won't be much progress for a LONG time. :( Report Review
me no likeie. Its well written as always but i really want a trouble free relationship (as if one exhists.) great chap tho. update soonAuthor's Response: Oh, if only one DID exist! Report Review
i used to like lorcan now... not so much. Gr plez update now poor dom i cried. i thought something like that might happen but not like that. gr dumb lorcanAuthor's Response: A lot of people are feeling that way now. Including the author over here! Report Review
What? No. Bad deal. No. This. Can't. Be. Happening. Oh. This was not expected. This ending of Dom and Lorcan. But I could tell there was a rift...I just didn't realize it was inconsolable. Poor Dom. Update quickly!
-KAuthor's Response: I know, I know. :( I'm sorry! And I'll try my best. Report Review
I completely love this story, I've read ladylike twice through and save up two or three chapters to read through in a go because otherwise its too painful to stop. I hope you update asap.
This chapter was so 'whoa'. I wonder what reason Lorcan has for saying 'i cant' because it seems like he wanted to, hmmm. Also, I hope that Dom doesn't go back to Holden although he did give her chocolate (always a bonus). He's manipulative, using the 'friend then more' technique to get her back while playing with her insecurities.
Keep on keepin' on,
P.S. I can totally imagine Rose and Dom doing 'Single Ladies' at Penelope's hen night or new years eve or somthing simalar to rub it into their faces even more (they can get back together after that).
P.P.S Single Ladies = great name for the sequel to this huh? ( I just want more, i can't help it!)Author's Response: Oh yeah, Holden is definitely manipulating. And I don't think there would be another sequel... if there is, it would be in Lily's point of view. Dom is probably getting a little sleepy. Report Review
Great chapter once again. Poor Dom and Rose, though, but hopefully everything will be sorted out soon!
-TashaAuthor's Response: I feel awful for them. :( Thanks! Report Review
I can't even comprehend what's going on.
Amazing chapter.Author's Response: I know, right!? Report Review
That was just so brilliant, Paige! I adored every second of reading it. You seriously made me cry though, it was just that fabulous. Poor, poor Dom and Rose. Being heartbroken is the crappiest feeling in the world. I can't wait for the next chapter!Author's Response: Awh, thank you so much. Report Review
Ouch, poor Dom :'( I wonder where they head next and indeed, is there any way back for her and Lorcan?Author's Response: Who knows? We'll find out eventually. You know I tend to drag out such things. Report Review
As sad as it was I have seen the story heading this way, too. Poor Dom and Rose. I hope that Dom won't lose the escape that quidditch has always given her. She will need it. I look forward to reading where she will go next when you have the time to update. Good luck with your school year and thank you for writing!Author's Response: I think most of us have, even though we all hate it. :( Report Review
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