Woohoo. Best story ever! It’s a really interesting idea looking at it from the perspective of those who are no longer living. Very interesting. Update as soon as possible :D

Author's Response: thanks! will try to update as soon as possible!

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Well done! I loved the chapter particularly how James became Harry's patronus and how they all came back for the graveyard scene! Great work, I know you will keep it up! Please update soon!

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post more, this is a great story!

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very nice, update soon

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oooh. so so good. can't wait for the next chapter and keep going.

Author's Response: thanks! will try to post another one soon! :)

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I really like your story so far, it must be hard for Lily and James to see their son in danger. I really hope Aurelia has one of those moments with Sirius *hopeful*. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: will come soon! there was a bit of a mix up actually! i submitted the next chap, and it was validated but then i realized a couple days later when i went to look at if i had any new reviews, i realized i'd stuck it in the wrong story! funny, right? anyway, it's now in the queue again but for the CORRECT story, so sit tight and it'll come soon! thanks! and so sorry for the mix up!

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I always love th epart of the Mirror of Erised. It always makes me cry when I read the book. When I read your part it made me cry, thats how good I personally think it was. Well I hope you update soon because I really love this story.

Author's Response: thank you! that part always makes me sad too! thanks for reading and reviewing! will try to update soon!

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Wow! That chapter was beautiful particularly about the mirror! It was so sweet and so heart breaking at the same time. I also really like the ending, it is one of those great one liners. Anyway well done! 10/10!

Author's Response: thank you! and thanks for the 10/10! as always! and don't worry, more is coming! next chap is in the queue!

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wow. that was good. but it took u forever to update...

Author's Response: yeah, sorry about that, life's been crazy! will try to update next real soon! glad u liked this chap! =:)

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very nice, update soon

10/10

Author's Response: thank you! will try! =:)

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This is wonderful!

This is very thoughtful and quite original. I really love that you didn't modify JK's characters into something they're not, but still put a different prospective on them to make it your own. Well done! Please continue :)

Author's Response: thank you! don't worry, i shall continue.

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Cool! I really liked it! Peoplestools! lol!

Anyway great story 10/10!!!

Author's Response: thank you! and thanks for the 10/10!

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Good job! This is a creative, well written story. Update soon!

Author's Response: will try! thanks for reading!

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I loved the way that Ariana told her story, made it seem more real than JK.

I'm looking forward to the rest so please update soon.

10/10

Author's Response: thank you! will try to update soon! thanks for the 10/10!

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poor ariana. good story though. you make it really real. that sounds weird, but it's what i'm thinking right now. i really like this and can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: thank you! the next chapter will hopefully be coming up soon!

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THIS IS REALLY WELL WRITTEN!!! when i clicked on this i thought it was going to be a good consept but hard to pull off, but this is really well thought out. ooh, i can't wait to see who's next.

Author's Response: thank you! i'm blushing now.

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Oh, wow. Love it!!

Please update soon.

10/10

Author's Response: yes, this is the story that have a chapter waiting in the queue for! glad you like it! thanks for the 10/10, and thanks for reading!

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Like your idea. Would love to read where the story will take us. And what James and Lily will see of Harry's life. Please keep up the writing. I love it!
J

Author's Response: thanks! chap 2 is in the queue actually!

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you should post more

Author's Response: i will, i will...don't worry! thanks for reading!

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nice JOB! 9/10

Author's Response: thanks!

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That was so sad but I LOVED it! I was a really clever (and sad) idea that when Lily and James were dead and they tried to come near a living person they just caused them more anguish!!! Also the idea of James being barred from his body forever was really good (and sad!) I love this story (just like all your stories!!!) Please keep writing! You're the best author on this site! 10/10 ;-)

Author's Response: thank you! thank you! thank you! yes, it's all very sad -- i do have some less sad ideas, but i think i'll get these over with while the book 7 hype is still relatively high, and everyone's still grieving for peeps in the book(s)! thanks for the 10/10!

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