Oh Syn! I always get sad when I read stories about Harry dying :(. Good story though, very emotional. Author's Response: Thanks. I'll try and read more of your novel today but I'm working on writing 5 differnt stories at the same time and I might not have time. I will get to it sometime though so don't worry. You shall have your reviews from me=] Thanks for reading and reviewing. Report Review
First off, Xuan did a lovely job with your banner! Secondly, I really like this! The whole thing is so sad, especially when she sees Harry's grave after thinking about what life would be like if James, Lily, Sirius, and Harry were alive. It's such a sharp contrast between that happy vision and the overall sad tone of the actual story. You have a few typos, mostly forgetting commas. But other than that, brilliant job with this!Author's Response: Yes this is my most favorite banner that has ever been made for me because of the picture frame of Harry and not the actual character on the banner. I'm glad you liked it. I try to create a story that will have an impact on people or that will leave them with wanting to read more and I really think that the overall mood and tone of this story really gets the reader to think about the actual character themselves. I shall re edit it sometime and fix all the typos. Thanks for pointing them out. I'm glad you left me such a great review. I'm over to your story now. =] Report Review
This was really good. I liked it a lot. Author's Response: Why thank you. I'm glad you liked it =] Report Review
I refuse to accept stories that have Harry dead. Especielly since they always make me cry, ruining my "bad ass" image. :( Author's Response: I'm sorry it made you cry. If it helps it got me sad and I wrote it. I'm glad it has that much of an affect on people though. Makes me think that the story is actually good. Thanks for the review. Report Review
L anguage was great
O h, it was so sad!
V ery enjoyable
E ek! It was so good!
D eath to Harry? Noo!
I absolutly loved it
T en out of ten!Author's Response: That's cute the way you did that. I'm happy that you liked it so much. I am getting another chapter of another story validated right now so check back up later. If you have any stories I might be on there later to read some. Thanks for the review. Report Review
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