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Reading Reviews for The New Pride of Portree
255 Reviews Found

Review #26, by ThestralPrincess Epilogue

19th October 2014:
aw, love the ending. :D Also love the mention of Johnny Lupin :) Looking forward to see what you write next!!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

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Review #27, by PetrificusTotalus Flight and Family

19th October 2014:
Only time for a quick review before I read the next chapter! Loving this so far, excited to read on! :)

Author's Response: Thanks very much! I hope you enjoy the story. :)

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Review #28, by Snuffles Epilogue

19th October 2014:
I meant babies 7 and 8 (in Done).
BTW. Please give us another story. You got me addicted

Author's Response: I'll try to get another story out soon! I've got one half-written from Scorpius's POV, hoping to have that done by Thanksgiving. :)

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Review #29, by Snuffles Epilogue

19th October 2014:
This was so cute! Your characters sound so real. I can't picture the Wealey family in any other way than the way you write them.
Just a little doubt: I didn't really get you time line in this story. I read all of them (more than once, I have to confess - chuckles) and if in this story Victoire has only five kids, where exactly does it fits (time wise ). Because she is going to babies 6 and 7 isn't she? Xoxoxoxo

Author's Response: Ah, I must admit, my timelines in Next Gen are a little fuzzy. I make a bit of effort at having it all fall into line, but don't be surprised if it doesn't always match up. Whoops. It started that way in JAMR because Rose was so vague about things like how old the Lupin kids are or how long she and Scorpius have been together, and then I had to nail down exact dates after and it just. Well. It's timeline-ish.

I'm glad you like the story and my version of the Weasleys! Victoire goes to babies 6, then 7 and 8. Because she and Teddy are crazy people lol. Thanks so much for reviewing.

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Review #30, by coolgf Epilogue

19th October 2014:
Omg. This is so cute. Now on to James, Albus, Lily and Hugo. Thank you. You can do it, more please.

Author's Response: I've got an idea I want to write that would be a lot on Lily and Hugo. Hopefully will start writing it in earnest soon! Thanks for reviewing!

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Review #31, by beatergirl21 Epilogue

18th October 2014:
I adored this whole story, the ending was lovely! It was fantastic all the way through and I can't wait to read whatever you do next!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really appreciate the review and kind words :)

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Review #32, by knitting_goddess Leverage

17th October 2014:
Oh my deary me, I've got this really nice warm fuzzy feeling in my tummy! :D I just seriously hope they don't mess this up, please don't make them mess this up... Happy endings for everyone!!

Author's Response: I do love a happy ending! I'm glad you liked the chapter :) Thanks for reviewing!

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Review #33, by Penelope Inkwell Therapy

16th October 2014:
Hello hello!

So, first off, I may have mentioned it before, but I love how the team reacts to Fitz and Molly's relationship. And I really enjoyed how Fitz reacted to their reaction...to put it in the most confusing way possible ; ) Anyway, it's adorable.

Another thing I really like is that you have Fitz and Molly really talk. They've got passion, but they're also just comfortable with one another, discussing things like Molly's feelings on seeing her old teammates, stuff like that. Normal relationship stuff. That's something I feel like it's easy to skip over when you're plotting out a relationship arc, because there's the temptation to only deal with the BIG ISSUES, but the small ones are also hugely important. It makes them seem much more grounded, like they can really make a go of it, and that makes me happy.

Finally, I thought that scene between him and Mariah was very well done. You created an atmosphere in which we were able to feel more charitable toward Mariah, maybe recognize that she isn't all bad, while still remaining kind of wary of her. And I think that's exactly what Fitz feels, so props on really bringing us to that place during the scene. I liked how you had Fitz realize that even though Mariah had been kind of awful, she hadn't always been. And he also takes responsibility for his failings, realizing that maybe he hadn't always been the best husband. Sometimes break-ups are one party's fault, or even (as perhaps is still the case here) mostly one person's fault. But usually it's a two-way street, and when a relationship falls apart, usually both parties have a hand in that, in some way. I'm glad to see Fitz own up to that. It shows maturity, and I think it will help him move on from some of his bitterness.

Also, glad to see that he's going to therapy. I think that'll be a big help. Actually, a team therapist sounds like a *brilliant* idea. If you ever wanted to do a spin-off one-shot, I think it would be so awesome to just have scenes from the official therapy sessions of the Pride of Portree. I would sooo want to read that. So much room for comedy (and serious moments too, of course, but so much humor potential).

Aaand Mariah's going back to Tutshill. That is such a relief. Nice to see some things wrapping up nicely, after all Fitz and Molly have been through. Now, to just deal with McCormack...


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Review #34, by coolgf Leverage

14th October 2014:
This is so great ! So great ! What happens next , a wedding ? Please.

Author's Response: Oh not right away, but of course! I love a classic romantic ending. :)

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Review #35, by ThestralPrincess Leverage

11th October 2014:
YAY! That is all I have to say. :)

Author's Response: Woohoo! Thanks for the review :)

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Review #36, by Rachel Leverage

10th October 2014:

As usual this story continues to be amazing - I'm so glad McCormack came to her senses!...even if she did need a shove from Ballycastle :D

Author's Response: McCormack is secretly a softie when she gets emotionally attached. ;) And she is sensible, so she wants to keep both Fitz and Molly on board. Thanks for reviewing!

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Review #37, by B Leverage

10th October 2014:
Best leverage ever.


Author's Response: lol! Glad you liked that! Thanks for reviewing.

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Review #38, by coolgf Therapy

28th September 2014:
Very nice, I can't wait for more. I just want to see what happens next. Please update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you like the story so far.

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Review #39, by stargirl100 Therapy

24th September 2014:
Love that you updated. But we need more. :) Thanks. How are they going to tell her ? And is she going to have him meet the parents and family ?

Author's Response: Always need more! That's a good sign ;) She will meet his parents, but whether or not that'll be shown...

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Review #40, by Snuffles Therapy

21st September 2014:
OMG. I'm so in love with Molly/Fitz! The little exchanges between them are so awesome! You're awesome!

Author's Response: Aw thank you so much! I'm glad you like them so much :) That makes my day.

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Review #41, by Rachel Therapy

20th September 2014:
I've been excitedly checking this story every day hoping for a new chapter. And at the end of a truly awful day of work, I was beyond pleased to find this waiting for me. My day did a complete 180. This story is amazing; the characters (both canon and original) completely make sense in the world, and your dialogue is some of the strongest I've ever read. If I didn't know any better, I'd say you were JKR herself, its so fantastic. Can't wait to read the next part, sometimes I feel more invested in Molly and Fitz's relationship than my own :D

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Review #42, by Anony Therapy

19th September 2014:
Thank you!!! This is the first review I have ever left and i've been reading fanfiction for years. I love this story and it was EXACTLY what I needed as today was pretty rotten. I hope the updates keep coming, I love all the original characters and be backgrounds that seem so well thought out. Keep it up, please!!! :)

Author's Response: I'm glad I could help brighten your mood! Thank you so much for the lovely review, I really appreciate it. And I'm so glad you like the story!

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Review #43, by RedHairGinny An Off Day

18th September 2014:
Hey, it's been a month since the next chapter, and I really can't wait for the next one!
Please publish it soon!
Thanking you,
An ardent fan XD

Author's Response: Ack it took me too long to update, I know. I'm so sorry! I hope you like the new chapter.

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Review #44, by Snuffles An Off Day

7th September 2014:
Actually. Could you tell what jobs the Weasley/Potters have? We know about a few but I'd like to know about all of them

Please update. You're a fantastic writer and I look forward to your new stuff. Xxxx

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

I actually haven't thought out all of them - most, though. Teddy Lupin works at the Floo Network Authority, Rose is a bounty hunter, Hugo is a Healer, Victoire a stay at home mom, Lily is a buyer for Madame Malkin's, Lucy owns a bookshop, Roxanne is a writer, Fred works at his dad's shop. Albus and James I don't know. I have thought James ought to be in the Department of Magical Sports and Games, but hadn't decided. Louis, oof, Louis I have no idea what he does, aside from sleeping with inappropriate women. Then there's Dominique, who was a stay-at-home mom, got divorced and wrote a best-seller, and is desperately trying to become a wealthy socialite.

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Review #45, by ohnobeans An Off Day

7th September 2014:
I LOVE Meghan and Tavish sitting around and talking about Fitz and Molly. I'm so happy things are starting to work out for everybody!!

Author's Response: Haha, those two are shipping it. I liked the idea of McCormack secretly having a boyfriend, and Fitz's old coach looking out for him and he has no idea. It made me smile. Thanks for reviewing!

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Review #46, by Snuffles An Off Day

6th September 2014:
Please come back! Your story is too amazing to be left
hanging. We miss you!
I know it's not related to this story but since I'm a big fan ( read
all of them more than once) I am allowed to ask: what kind of
job does Ted have? With that much of kids and Victoire not
working is kind of amazing they don't struggle just as Molly
and Arthur did when theirs were little. Big hug

Author's Response: Aw thanks! I took too long on that update, I know, very sorry.

Of course you're allowed to ask! I always love questions about my headcanons ;) Teddy Lupin works for the Floo Network. He makes decent money, but not a ton - I just don't focus on any money issues they may or may not have. But, I picture it being budgeted but not tightened-belts, if that makes sense. Victoire is a smart cookie, she makes sure everything runs smoothly, even the money ;) Not nearly as poor as Molly and Arthur were, no.

Thank you for reviewing!

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Review #47, by ReallyAnAuror Surprising Depths

1st September 2014:
I freaking love this story. It makes me smile. Well-written and entertaining.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! :D

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Review #48, by RupertsPheonix An Off Day

30th August 2014:
I love Molly & Fitz on his balcony just chatting and drinking a brew. Its so perfectly them.:)

I hope that Meghan doesn't make them stay apart too long. I know Ballycastle would be good, but I do love them working together too.

Anyways great chapter! Looking forward to another! -RP/Kate

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Review #49, by coolgf An Off Day

18th August 2014:
This was so great! I look forward to updates now. :) McCormack and that coach, love them. Its nice that we find abit more about her and that she is not mean but wants the team to do well is all. But poor Molly, like she didn't realize that the team would have figured it out, that they were hooking up, really? Lol. Can we see Hugo with a girl, he is a cute character. Thanks.

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Review #50, by LightLeviosa5443 Let Us Break A Few Heads

18th August 2014:
AHH. I'M SO SLOW. HOW HAVE YOU UPDATED SO MUCH. AND I HAVEN'T REVIEWED?! Glad the review battle brought these chapters to my attention! (even if I got ninja'd because it takes me forever and a half to review)

I'll just review spam you now :)

Okay, so I'm like absolutely 100% in love with Fitz and his stubborn miserable firewhiskey-drinking self. Oh man, I'm afraid now. I don't like this. Fitz, drinking, in a bar, next to the guy who slept with his ex wife. Who he hates. (have I mentioned lately that I love that he hates her?)

Still wary. Terrified, actually. Oh. Good lord. I can't. I'm literally reading this between fingers because I'm covering my eyes because I can't. I can't. Ferris is a little thick, isn't he? Oh boy. Oh man. No. Don't take it outside. Outside is always a bad idea. Outside is like the worst of all ideas. Where is Molly. Molly needs to come running up and stop this. I don't know if I can scroll down and keep reading. stahp.

Uhm, I might be wrong but nearly ripping doors of their hinges and then kicking them shut is N E V E R good!! No shoving boys!! I'm afraid to keep reading. I'm just going to keep repeating no until this scene is over. No, don't do it. Oh stop insulting each other. OH NO. NO NO NO. NO NO NO. I can't. What? Wow. Um. Wow.

Oh no no no. I feel like this is 100 levels of not good. Like on a scale of 1-not good this is very bad. Like my description? yeah me too. I'm not even capitalizing correctly anymore. Only sporadically. It's for emphasis, I swear. Okay, wait, I'm going to go back to reading. LOL OMG IT WAS RON THAT'S PERFECT. I SHOULD'VE KNOWN. I can't.

Molly and Ron's relationship is perfect. You've written Ron perfectly. Molly is perf. It's all perf. Okay? Okay. Ooooh, she used his first name. I don't know if that actually has any significance, but I haven't noticed her doing it previously, so maybe it does. Wait, is she being formal with him? Ugh. Why'd you break them up?? I just want them to get back together again. #riorolly4ever ... fiteasley? Yeah, no, there's no good way to mash that up. I give up.

RON IS SO CUTE. I want to hug him. Ugh. ♥ can they just be a couple, molly and fitz? I'm gonna repeat it until it happens. Flirt flirt flirt flirt flirt flirt flirt! This review is totally senseless. UGH THEY'RE SO CUTE. I CAN'T HANDLE THIS. YOU'RE PLAYING WITH THEM AND ME AND I JUST CAN'T HANDLE IT. kiss kiss kiss kiss. YES. I wish it was a more substantial kiss.

LOL I love Duff and Sid. They're both perfect. You're one of us after all. That line is perfect times a million. Hugo is priceless. The team is priceless. I love that they whistle and catcall and encourage his bad behavior. and they don't even know what he did. And Hugo just goes with it.

Yes. Kick their butts. YAY THEY WON. WOO.

This chapter was like a million levels of perfection. I loved every second of it. Even if I read half of it with my hands over my eyes and saying no no no no over and over.

xoxo Sarah ♥

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