{reviewid: 2087371, reviewer: 'Erilin-chan'}
2nd April 2009:
Bad, bad ron! poor hermionie, the loves gone.
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{reviewid: 2087359, reviewer: 'Erilin-chan'}
2nd April 2009:
hehe, lol...i wonder if he really did have an affair.
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{reviewid: 2087333, reviewer: 'Erilin-chan'}
2nd April 2009:
aw, poor hermionie, ron is being quite insufferable! draco's so cute to the children!
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{reviewid: 2087324, reviewer: 'Erilin-chan'}
2nd April 2009:
lol, silly ron! hehe, crazy mother hermionie is really quite funny ^_^
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{reviewid: 2087316, reviewer: 'Erilin-chan'}
2nd April 2009:
I love this chapter, so emotional and brilliant!
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{reviewid: 2080397, reviewer: 'gryfndrgrl22'}
22nd March 2009:
eight is too much, six is the appropriate number. good job though!
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{reviewid: 2063117, reviewer: 'FutureAggie09'}
25th February 2009:
Lovely chapter =] I have no idea how to make an apple crumble though lol
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{reviewid: 2063115, reviewer: 'FutureAggie09'}
25th February 2009:
I loved that chapter, particularly the way Draco talked to Rose. It was beautifully written!
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{reviewid: 2063114, reviewer: 'FutureAggie09'}
25th February 2009:
Your writing style is magnificent! You have the perfect balance of dialogue and description, as well as nearly perfect grammar and spelling. I have really taken a liking to your story. Well done!
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{reviewid: 2063110, reviewer: 'FutureAggie09'}
25th February 2009:
Awww, very cute and I LOVE DRACO! lol
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{reviewid: 2063107, reviewer: 'FutureAggie09'}
25th February 2009:
Love the story idea =] And Draco's wife's name is Astoria Greengrass, just so you know. She's one or two years younger than him.
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{reviewid: 2060000, reviewer: '_Martha_'}
21st February 2009:
Wow! This story was simply fabulous! I think I liked the other ending better, even if it was unhappy, but that's just my opinion.^-^
I really, really, REALLY hope you do a sequel as I enjoyed the story enormously!
10/10
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{reviewid: 2037597, reviewer: 'ghostwriter1030'}
21st January 2009:
Lovely just lovely. off to read more ^_^
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{reviewid: 2037591, reviewer: 'ghostwriter1030'}
21st January 2009:
Oh yes, I think I'm falling in love with this story ^_^
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{reviewid: 2037585, reviewer: 'ghostwriter1030'}
21st January 2009:
Oh my god *swoon* he call her Hermione. This story is damned wonderful ^_^
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{reviewid: 2037575, reviewer: 'ghostwriter1030'}
21st January 2009:
I love the interaction between Draco and Hermione. This is shaping o be wonderful
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{reviewid: 2037570, reviewer: 'ghostwriter1030'}
21st January 2009:
Wonderful so far. Can't wait to see what happens next :)
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{reviewid: 2014993, reviewer: 'LunaNigra'}
22nd December 2008:
Lovely story!
And even if I didn't like the other ending (it was good though, just no Hermione/Draco ending...), I like this one even less. It's kind of Out Of Character and so not Hermione...
Luna
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{reviewid: 1959993, reviewer: 'mrs_heather_grint'}
10th October 2008:
Okay, you totally got me addicted. I sat here and read this in one sitting (and I haven't read a fan fic in over a year). I HATE Draco/Hermione, and yet I absolutely loved this story. You really did a good job, especially of making it believable. I really preferred the original ending, but I understand that some people didn't accept that ending. =P The emotion in this story was written well, not at all over the top, like some people may be quick to write in a story such as this. All in all, amazing job. You have some skills. :]
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{reviewid: 1955733, reviewer: 'SpringTime'}
6th October 2008:
I am so glad that they stayed together. I really believe that that is the choice that she would have made as well. Great read!
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{reviewid: 1931713, reviewer: 'harrys_angels'}
24th May 2008:
yes you were right the last chapter was more realistic and alot better writen. No mother would ever abbondon her kids like that no matter what. Well unless they were a horrible mother.
Definatly like the other ending. thanks for writing this story.
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{reviewid: 1931706, reviewer: 'harrys_angels'}
24th May 2008:
aww im greatly depressed this has to come to an end, but I suppose that after this chapter I can finally go to bed. :O Im yawning to much its starting to get annoying.
xx
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{reviewid: 1931689, reviewer: 'harrys_angels'}
24th May 2008:
Nice touch. I had such a vivd picture of Draco and Scorpius and Hermione baking. It was a beautiful image as well.
You know how to write emotions on paper:D well in this case the computer.
xx
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{reviewid: 1931678, reviewer: 'harrys_angels'}
24th May 2008:
Fantastic. really good. You have certainly highlighted the tension between Ron and Hermione, especially with rose now injured. You have captured the true feelings of a mother.
xx
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{reviewid: 1931668, reviewer: 'harrys_angels'}
24th May 2008:
Beautifully written first chapter. I love this idea for a story.
Im reading a bit late so, ill keep leaving reviews. Hope you dont get sick of me :D
xx
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