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Review #26, by Kat B Chapter Thirty-One: Check-Ups.

9th December 2014:
Omg please publish the update soon I'm dying to know how it ends.. im begging you let it be a happy ending!!
Forever a fan of yours - Kat

Author's Response: Aw thank you so much! I'm so so so so sorry for the long delay. I've been unbelievably busy this past year with school and basically life in general. Check back soon though!

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Review #27, by Lina Chapter Thirty-One: Check-Ups.

25th October 2014:
Well, I can't wait for the final chapter! I hope it has a happy end for Hermione and Draco. Actually, I'm begging you to give them a happy end! :)

Author's Response: We'll just have to wait and see...Thank you for taking the time to review! Check back soon!

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Review #28, by Hannah Chapter Thirty-One: Check-Ups.

24th October 2014:
Okay so I am seriously in LOVE with this story! Is there really only one more chapter? :( NO!! Okay I also wanted to tell you how refreshing it is to have Lucius be the understanding one and Narcissa being the one to throw a fit. I feel like he always gets the short end of the stick and I really loved the character development.
Okay well that was all...

Author's Response: Lucius is one of my favorites! I figured I'd cut him some slack...thank you for the review!! I really appreciate you taking the time :)

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Review #29, by Penelope Inkwell Chapter Thirty-One: Check-Ups.

16th October 2014:
One more chapter? It's almost over?! Oh, gosh, I'm gonna be an emotional wreck.

Whisper, you're trying to drown me in emotions, aren't you? Is that your goal? Because you are doing a mighty fine job, chicadee. ; )

First off, I totally get Hermione's position at the beginning of the chapter. I think there would be people who would see her as selfish, maybe, but I don't think so at all. She's 23! She and Draco really have just started their relationship, and adopting Cooper changes things. I mean, I understand why Draco did it. I admire him for it. But I also understand why Hermione put the brakes on moving in. It was already going to be a lot to adjust to, and trying to do it all at once could have put a real strain on their relationship.

Besides, she hadn't signed up to be a mother--not yet. But it's clear that she does really care about Cooper. Hermione's a planner, so she needs some time to adjust to the idea. She's practical, so she would have seen the potential difficulties of both her and Cooper moving in at once. I think her decision makes a lot of sense for her character, and for her and Draco's relationship. It would have been nice and neat and prettily wrapped to have them all just magically fall together, but that's not how it works, and I like that this deals with the complications and ironing out the details.

Oh, Hermione! That's so hard. It's one thing to say that you don't want kids now (or even that you don't think you'll want them at all). It's completely another to be told that you may not be able to. That's a hard thing to go through. I'm glad that she has Draco by her side, but...just, ouch. That section gave me the uber-sad feels.

I'm holding out hope that magical treatment for those kinds of issues may be more effective. Besides, the regular fertility treatments definitely can work as well. Hopefully she'll be able to have a child one day, if she wants to. And it's good to know that, either way, there's Cooper. In some ways, I think having him might have kept their relationship from undergoing an (even more) major hurdle. I think Draco would have always been mostly concerned about Hermione; even if he had been disappointed, he's clearly the sort of person who'd be happy to adopt. However, I think Hermione, knowing how badly Draco wants to have kids, might have tried harder to pull away, and that could have been an even bigger problem.

So, even though it was obviously a bit of a curveball, Cooper may have saved the day, in some ways. For my part, I know someone who broke up with her boyfriend partly because she knew he wanted a big family and she'd found out wasn't supposed to be able to have children. It happens (It worked out, by the way. She actually married a guy who had a child from a previous marriage whom she got to help raise, and she ended up able to have one child, herself. And they all seem pretty happy : D ). But I'm really glad that Cooper is already around to deflect that line of thinking, and that Draco so firmly steers her away from sinking into that kind of negativity, which really could have dragged her down.

Ginny and Harry are getting married! I hope we get to see at least part of the wedding!

Aaaand vacation in the south of France. Fancy. I wonder what Draco has up his sleeve, now...

Favorite Quotes:

"It’s kind of endearing in a psychotic way."

-“I’m hoping Harry cries a bit.”
-“If he doesn’t I’ll step on his foot to get him going.”

Thanks for another chapter! And for this story! And for giving me, like, a gift basket of sad and happy emotions in this one. So many feels. I hope next chapter can give me a much needed sparkle of sunlight. Poor Hermione and Draco have been through so much!


Author's Response: Penny!!! Hello, dear. I'm so so sorry for the million year delay. I have just finished my last year of law school and it was a hectic one, indeed. I'm also studying for the bar now but I feel like it's well past overdue to finish the next chapter. I promise it'll be a good and long one. Thank you for your amazing insight into the chapter. I always appreciate it! Check back in a couple of weeks for an update! :)

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Review #30, by Chrissy Chapter Thirty-One: Check-Ups.

16th October 2014:
I've been reading your story for about a couple weeks now and I'm super excited to see that you put up a new chapter. I really enjoyed it. So realistic and Draco and Hermione's relationship melts my heart !! I'm upset to hear that she can't conceive but I'm sure she will get her happy ending!! Can't wait to read the final chapter :-) Excellent work!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!! Please check back in a couple of weeks. I'm studying for the bar so the last several months have left me with very little free time to get a good chapter written but I plan on working on it during whatever spare time I have now.

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Review #31, by andrea Chapter Thirty: Public Relations

28th September 2014:
Omg. Please update soon!

Author's Response: The next chapter is in validation! :)

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Review #32, by Lina Chapter Thirty: Public Relations

24th September 2014:
I really liked this chapter! After a long summer with no new chapters I was starting to get desperate that this story would be left unfinished. Please keep writing!!!

Author's Response: I hadn't even realized that it had been so long until *after* I finally posted and went back to see. I have only submitted THREE chapters this year which is honestly pathetic on my part. I am working on the next chapter and I will have it up way sooner than last time...probably within a few weeks. thank you for checking back for this story. I won't abandon it, I promise!

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Review #33, by Frankie Chapter Thirty: Public Relations

18th September 2014:
So are you back now?

Author's Response: I never left! I was just busy with school and then summer school and work and now I'm back at school again while still working. I never imagined abandoning the story. it just took a lot longer to update this past year than the years before. but there are only a couple chapters left.

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Review #34, by Jackie Chapter Thirty: Public Relations

17th September 2014:
You have no idea how overjoyed I was to see the next chapter updated. Thank you for this update, and I can't wait for the next one. :)

Author's Response: aww thank you! it makes me feel all warm and fuzzy when people tell me they're happy to see this story updated lol.

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Review #35, by Penelope Inkwell Chapter Thirty: Public Relations

17th September 2014:
Whisper! You’re back, you’re back, you’re back! And now I can finally read more of this story! :D

Well, first of all I’m glad that Draco and Hermione have come to the place where they can discuss the situation rationally. In so many stories where “the obstacle” occurs, one half of a couple inevitably chooses to make “the great sacrifice”, putting the other one before themselves and breaking up with them to “save them”. I am so, so thrilled that you didn’t do that. Hermione is (understandably) upset--she wants to protect Draco, and Narcissa is always putting doubts in her mind about whether or not she’s good for him. But rather than Hermione just running off and making both of them miserable, she and Draco have an honest, open conversation. I think it really reflects the growth in their relationship, and how healthy and mature it is. I love that!

And Astoria! I was proud when she stood up to Pansy and refused to fake a pregnancy, but now I’m super proud of her growth. She acts like a sensible person. And she doesn’t just dismiss this as another of Pansy’s antics, but she also makes it clear that she isn’t an idiot--she’s always known what Pansy was like. I don’t want Astoria settling for just anyone. I don’t like her, exactly, but I do wish her well. Which is a big jump from how I felt about her not so many chapters ago.

Pansy. Pansy, Pansy, Pansy. She is finally getting her comeuppance and REVENGE is SWEET! Blaise finally (FINALLY) breaks up with her, and Astoria seems like she’s drawing the line on this one. Draco’s done. She has finally lost her enablers. Because really. It’s like Astoria says--she gets so caught up in the idea of ruining Draco and Hermione’s relationship. It was originally supposed to be out of concern for Astoria, but clearly we’ve moved far beyond that if she’s willing to let her best friend suffer through headlines like MALFOY FAKES GIRLFRIEND TO ESCAPE OBSESSIVE EX (that’s what I’m guessing would go down, anyway. Girl is crazy. Mean and crazy. And rarely do I dance over the grave of someone’s reputation but for now I can only say good riddance!

And RON! I’m so proud of Ron, and happy that he’s finally come round. I think his initial crazy, jealous response was understandable--not as in “acceptable”, but I could see his character doing that. However, I’m glad that he’s realized that he’s lost the right to be jealous over Hermione, and that he doesn’t want to ruin her reputation or their friendship. But to actually go so far as to write to Lucius Malfoy and tell the papers that Pansy was lying? Good move on the Harry Potter name drop, too. I know Harry can be a bit self-concious about his fame, but it does come in useful sometimes, doesn’t it?

And WOAH! Plot twist! But it makes sense. Draco has had a strong connection with Cooper from the beginning. And he’s very much a kids guy. Still, it’s a lot to ask of a relationship that’s still getting off the ground. Suddenly he’s going to be a father? Whew. Can’t wait to see how this all falls out.

Thanks for the new chapter! I’m always happy to see them!


Author's Response: PENNY! I swear I was JUST thinking about you yesterday and I paid traitorous hearts a visit for a bit before getting back to school work. but I saw that you have a lot more chapters put up and cannot wait to really delve into it after all this blasted homework is done.

thank you for the magnificent review (again). I'm so thrilled that you could see what I intended with the last couple chapters. I wanted to bring Ron and Astoria around because, as annoying as they were initially, they're not the real problem. And as far as Cooper is concerned, it just goes to show that there are more important things in life than paparazzi and exes.

I am going to continue with the next chapter soon. I know I seriously dragged on updating but hopefully the next chapter will take only a couple weeks. I know where I'm going with this and I plan on wrapping it up soon.

thanks again so so so much for the review! :)

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Review #36, by Love Dramione Chapter Thirty: Public Relations

17th September 2014:
OMG you finally updated! I'M soo happy!

Please Update the next one sooner!

I liked how you wrote the chapter, it was quick and informative which was good since it was a long wait, i dont know if i like where the story is going though!

Author's Response: I will! that last update time was just sad.

I'm curious to know where you think the story is going lol. I can't wait for everyone to find out! thanks for the review, my dear :)

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Review #37, by Chaserholly Chapter Thirty: Public Relations

16th September 2014:
Yayyy you updated! Well I guess now Draco is gonna adopt him? And proposing to Hermione in the process? hahaha can't wait! hope you'll update soon! :) til the next chapter!

Author's Response: everyone has such interesting

check back soon! and thanks for the review, dear!

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Review #38, by Ella Chapter Thirty: Public Relations

15th September 2014:
Oh my goodness! Not only does Hermione decide to move in, but he's also going to have a new addition to the family?! The twists and turns never cease to shock me ;) Awesome story!

Author's Response: it's called tangled web for that reason! haha thank you so much for the review! :) I'm really happy you like it!

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Review #39, by Quinn Chapter Thirty: Public Relations

15th September 2014:
Yikes! Already on the road of parenthood. Reminds me of couples that adopt a pet as a trial test before having a child together. Yet, I think Draco and Hermione would be excellent parents. They will encounter problems, and many understandings, but everything is going to work out.
It has been a while since you have written a new chapter, that's okay, I needed to refresh my memory of this story anyway.
Keep up the good work! Cheers!

Author's Response: yeah I think it'll be interesting to see how it goes with this new dynamic thrown into the mix...but who knows? lol thanks for the review! sorry for dragging!

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Review #40, by bluemoon22 Chapter Thirty: Public Relations

15th September 2014:
Such a great chapter, I enjoyed reading it
immensely. Keep it up, but don't take so long this
time. OK?

Author's Response: haha I promise I will try not to! it was like 6 months or something, right? yikes. that is just unforgivable. thanks for sticking through it though! and thank you for taking the time to review!

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Review #41, by Carissa Chapter Thirty: Public Relations

15th September 2014:
Awww! This is perfect!!!

Author's Response: thank you so much :)

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Review #42, by ArtyGirl Chapter Thirty: Public Relations

15th September 2014:
Great! Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: thank you!

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Review #43, by Am Chapter Thirty: Public Relations

14th September 2014:
Really enjoyed this chapter, can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: thank you! check back in a few weeks. I'm going to force myself to be diligent and get the chapter done sooner rather than later lol.

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Review #44, by foxaylove Chapter Thirty: Public Relations

14th September 2014:
I sense a, "you're unfit to adopt being single" coming, leading to a Dramione proposal that was coing anyways for a joint adoption. PERFECT! Astoria and Ron surprised me in this chapter. Honestly, I'm shocked Pansy never took Astoria's feelings into play when doing what she did. It always seemed like she schemed because she wanted to help her friend get Draco back (no matter how misguided and wrong she was). Here's to Ron and Astoria being able to find happiness elsewhere and move on.

Author's Response: I'm so glad Ron and Astoria surprised you because it was important to me to have them come around in the end. because they are adults and they both do obviously care about Hermione and Draco in their own ways.

Thank you so much for the review! :)

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Review #45, by Katie Aprea Chapter Twenty-Nine: The Cottage.

26th August 2014:
I've been following this story for months on end and I really need toknow what happenes next. When's the next chapter being published?

Author's Response: the next chapter just needs to be proofed and then it can be submitted (finally, I know). I finished it this morning and I'm really excited to finally get it up! *fingers crossed there aren't any problems with validation*

thanks for the review!! :) I'm glad you're enjoying the story!

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Review #46, by ArtyGirl Chapter Twenty-Nine: The Cottage.

19th August 2014:

Author's Response: YOU GOT IT DUDE!

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Review #47, by dracosworld Chapter Twenty-Nine: The Cottage.

4th August 2014:
Whisper in the wind,
I love your writing style and your stories. I've been following "Tangled Web" since you first started it. I would have rated and reviewed sooner but I have only recently made my own account. I actually got the idea of starting to write fanfiction after reading your stories. I want to thank you for inspiring me to write my own FanFics. Maybe when I start one you could check it out? It would mean a lot to me. Thank you again.
-dracosworld c:
P.s. Can't wait for the next chapter

Author's Response: aw thank you so much! that means the world to me :) yes! I will definitely check out your stories! this is so awesome. I can't wait to read your writing :) thank you for taking the time to review, dear!

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Review #48, by helena7654 Chapter Twenty-Nine: The Cottage.

23rd July 2014:
This is a really great story. I stumbled across this late last night and ended up staying up till 2am to finish it! I hope you continue, I really did enjoy this :) xx

Author's Response: lmao wow that is a lot of chapters to read in a day! I'm really glad you enjoyed it though. it makes me happy knowing that I have a story that makes people feel the way I feel about my favorite fanfics! it means a lot. check back soon! I'm working on the next chapter now. thanks for the review, dear! :)

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Review #49, by ms simone Chapter Twenty-Nine: The Cottage.

19th June 2014:
Great that Draco enjoy meeting Hermione's parents!!

Author's Response: yeah it could have gone either way really with their luck lol

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Review #50, by Sie Chapter Twenty-Nine: The Cottage.

11th June 2014:
Damn, I can see that my mobile changed my name. Well, Sie is me, Sassie xD.
Still love this fic!xD

Author's Response: haha gotchya! ;) xx

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