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Reading Reviews for We'll Call Her Lily
  
32 Reviews Found

Review #26, by BonnieWritter We'll call Her Lily

9th April 2008:
Nice chapter. I was really good and well written. Although, definitely fluff.

Keep up the good work. 10/10

Best line:

"Yes. Admit it; things would be several times less fun if we didn't have a daughter."

I just cracked up laughing *LOL*

~ BonnieWritter

Author's Response: Fluff is what I aim for. :D Thanks so much for reviewing!!!
-earthfarie


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Review #27, by sectumsempress101 We'll call Her Lily

9th April 2008:
James was in fifth year when Lily had two years to go, so James would have been six when Lily was born. Other than that, great job!

Author's Response: Yeah. My age-time thing with James is off and by the time I figured it out, I decided I like him younger better. :) Thanks for reviewing!!!
-earthfarie


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Review #28, by CallieWood We'll call Her Lily

9th April 2008:
Haha! That was a really good one shot and it ended like a one shot should be -- leaving you wanting more. great job! ten/ten

Author's Response: Thanks!!! That means loads to me!!
-earthfarie


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Review #29, by dianap00 We'll call Her Lily

9th April 2008:
I like the Potter family dynamic. They are rather sweet. You did a lovely job.

Cheers.

Author's Response: Thanks for the wonderful feedback!!!
-earthfarie


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Review #30, by Padfoot7 We'll call Her Lily

9th April 2008:
Great little one-shot! Your writing is very good. Write some more like it?

-Padfoot7

Author's Response: Thanks so much!!

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Review #31, by Padfoot7 We'll call Her Lily

9th April 2008:
Great little one-shot! Your writing is very good. Write some more like it?

-Padfoot7

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the positive feedback!!!!
-earthfarie


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Review #32, by Leo072491 We'll call Her Lily

9th April 2008:
That was so sweet! I think you did an awsome job! :) Keep Writing!

Author's Response: Awesome! First review!!! Thanks so much!!!
-earhfarie


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