This story was fantastic! You took it so much farther than most people usually do with dramione's and it is all that much better for it. I love that you managed to keep the same next generation kids we already know and love while having hermione end up with Draco. Brilliantly done! Loved it!Author's Response: Well, I'm glad you enjoyed that! I was worried, at first, about going so far, but it seems to have worked out. Thank you very much! Report Review
I love the way you said it. "and they loved", perfect way to describe it!Author's Response: Oh, thank you! :D Report Review
so, this is the second time i have read throught ur story becasue i loved it so much :) ur such a great writer, and i cant wait for ur next story. i really hope u plan on writing another Draco/Hermione story, becasue your's is the best i've ever read, and i've read quite a few :DAuthor's Response: Oh, thank you! I always love to hear that people have read it more than once, :D I don't know about another Dramione. Grazed Knees was really the one for me. I mean, I've written a few previous to this, but, other than some oneshots, this will probably be it. Thank you very, very much, though! Report Review
the dates go back =S
Hermione paced back and forth in her bedroom while Ginny sat on her bed cross-legged, Anna next to her. They were all silent, save for the soft footfalls of Hermione’s feet. The two girls trailed after her, their gaze lazily following her as she traced the length of the room. Finally, after what seemed like forever, her alarm went off, and she ran across the hall as Ginny shut off the alarm and Anna got up to go stand by the doorway.
Ginny immediately started waving for Anna to help her when Hermione let out a little shriek, and they hurried over to the bathroom where Hermione was jumping around, a little white device in her hand.
“Oh my God, no way!” they both screamed, and Hermione just nodded before stopping and pointing to the sink where two more similar devices lay.
“They’re all positive!” Hermione exclaimed ecstatically, and the three girls spent the next ten minutes giggling and freaking out until they finally calmed, and Hermione sunk against the sink, “I’ve already set up an appointment at St. Mungo’s. It’s this Sunday. Will you guys come with me?”
“Absolutely,” Ginny promised, nodding fervently, but Anna was frowning.
“I can’t Sunday, Hermione,” she mumbled, “I’m sorry.”
“Hey, it’s okay. I’ll come right over and let you know as soon as we get out.”
“Er—I won’t be home Sunday.”
Ginny and Hermione stared at her suddenly, though they could see Anna was struggling to hide a smile.
“Oh, alright!” she finally sighed, “I was going to ask you after all this because I didn’t want to interrupt your moment, but Ron surprised me with a little vacation to Australia, and I need next week off, and we’re leaving on Sunday,” she finished all in a rush.
“Anna,” Hermione tsked, “Of course you can have it off. I’ll just cover your shifts or talk to the girls. That’s so exciting. Australia? What made him do this?”
“He just wanted to tell me he loved me,” she sighed happily, “God, he’s so sweet sometimes. He said he wanted to go away, just the two of us, and have a little getaway and be all romantic and stuff. I can’t wait! I’m so excited!”
This only provided a segue for more excited chatter, and, soon, the girls found themselves downstairs with cups of tea, talking nonstop.
2006.Author's Response: I'm--I'm not really sure what is the purpose of this review. Report Review
IS THERE GOING TO BE A SEQUEL?!?!?!?! I CALL FOR MORE! :D :D :D :D Author's Response: Oh, definitely not. This story was long enough as is! I do have other Dramiones, though, so you might want to check those out, but no, this is done. Thank you very much! Report Review
I love Narcissa too. You characterizations of here did not throw me off. I thought of her to be the same. So caring and polite.Author's Response: Oh, I'm so glad! I'm always worried when I write about Narcissa because I tend to see her as a lot more heart-warming than most people. Thank you so much! Report Review
Amazing story dear!!! I loved it!!! A truly remarkable piece of writing!!! great job!!! You're a rocker at Draco/Hermione (I read Unforgivable too). Great great work!!
ADAuthor's Response: Awh, :D I'm so glad you enjoyed both of them! Thank you very much! Report Review
Best book evvehhh. I stayed up till half 1 just so I could read it. You have reeeall talent :)) I will deffo be reading more your books!!Author's Response: Awh, I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Thank you so much, :D Report Review
Fine! If you want me to leave you alone then I'll just stop reading! Just Kidding, I am in love with this story. THe way its written and the lay out and how you use events that happened in the books/movies. so GOOD! also, i love how you can really get a sense of how he falls for her and she him. Really its Romeo & Juliet/Atonement/Harry Potter/ Your own writing. And IT IS AWESOME!Author's Response: Oh, thank you! This is such a sweet review, and I'm so happy you're enjoying it! :D Report Review
I loved this story, I know its been chapters since I left a reveiw. But I would have sounded like a broken Record, I enjoyed this fic so much. I look forward to reading whatever else you put up next!Author's Response: Oh, I don't mind broken records, :) Thank you so much! Report Review
Wow. That's all I've got to say. :) Author's Response: Thank you! Report Review
very ooc. its good for Dramione, but its not realistic. at all.Author's Response: I, uh. I disagree. But thank you. Report Review
I just read this and I FREAKIN' LOVE YOU!Author's Response: Oh, thank you so, so much! :D Report Review
I have been addictively reading Draco/Hermione fan fictions for ages now. I stumbled upon yours and I wanted to let you know that yours is my favorite so far, hands down. I really loved where you went with their relationship. You are a really talented writer! Thank you for such a good read.Author's Response: Oh wow! Thank you so much, :D This is certainly one of the greatest reviews I've ever received. I hope you enjoy anything else you stumble upon! Report Review
Oh my god, I absolutely LOVED it! It felt so real and there weren't any jealous exes (I hate those) :) I love how Harry and Ron accepted Draco. And no main characters died. lol. You're an amazing writer :)Author's Response: Awh, thank you! Yea, I figured I'd tie up all the loose ends and not leave any drama in the end. I can never kill main characters! It was even hard enough for me to kill off Chelsea. Thank you again! Report Review
Usually I don't care for Draco/Hermione stories, [I've several rather horrible ones] but when I started reading your story, I pleasantly surprised by how well it was written and how realistic the characters were, and how recognizable they were from the book.
And then the next thing I knew I couldn't stop reading the story, and felt sad when I finally tore myself away from the computer to go to work.
I really liked how you showed the different stages of the relationship, how it developed and how the characters changed throughout the story. You had enough details giving context so that I was never confused about what was going on.
I think that you're an amazing writer and I'd like to read some of your other work.
I've always loved writing too, but I hadn't written for quite a while, and you actually inspired me to begin a new story [an HP fanfiction too yet :) ]Author's Response: Well, thank you!
I've striven to make this particular story as close to canon as possible, so I'm glad it's been noted, :)
I'm so glad! I always love to hear that I've inspired others to write again, :D
Thank you so very much for your amazing review! Report Review
Oh my gosh, this story was AMAZING!! I'm def gonna get all my Potterhead friends to read this! I love it and I'm super sad that it's over! Thanks for not letting Harry Potter stories die out just cause the last movie came out...Author's Response: I will never let them die out, trust me, :D
I love it far too much.
Thank you so very, very much! Report Review
OMG!!! That's it?! All over?! Now what am I going to do with the rest of my pathetic life without waiting for a chapter to have been uploaded, continuing the best Dramione fan fiction I have and probably will ever read? But thank you so much for sharing this with us all, it was too good to have never written, I take my (virtual) hat off to you and give all the praises I can. Well done.Author's Response: You could always check out some of my other works, haha, :)
Thank you very much for this wondrous review, :D It really made my day. Report Review
I dont mind when you upload them as long as you do. ;)
Loving your story. How do you do it?!?!?! Author's Response: I honestly don't know how I do it, haha.
Thank you so much! Report Review
Ooh great chapter! When is chapter two February stars gonna be up? It looks fantastic! i absolutely adored the first one. Can't wait. keep up the writing skill! it's great.Author's Response: In two days! Usually, they will be five days apart, as all my other stories, but it went up late, so the next will go u pearly.
Thank you so, so much! :D Report Review
Wow! Very intense. Shame someone had to actually die. Anyways brilliant as usualAuthor's Response: Thank you! Report Review
Perfect. Very, very realistic. Nothing to worry about there. As i said previously, i LOVE Scorpius. I really do. He is just so super sweet and adorable sounding. Love it! write on! :)Author's Response: Thank you so, so much! :D Report Review
Oh my goodness! I just LOVE Scorpius! he just seems so adorably sweet and we haven't even seen much of him yet! Yay! They are parents! woohoo! This was such a great chapter. You have no idea how glad i am this has been written. i spend most of my free time reading it now. I can't get enough!
I recently had a look at february stars, great stuff by the way. Really enjoyable. All your stories are. I REALLY hope you keep on writing. As i said before i just can't get enough.
Great job keep it up!! :)Author's Response: :D And I loved writing him! He was just so innocent and so much fun.
Awh, thank you, dear, :) I'm so glad you like it so much.
Oh, I definitely will, no worries! I'll be writing until my hands fall off, haha.
Thank you super much! Report Review
Badass Narcissa! Nice touch! I love this so much! I wish that it would like never end. love it, love it, love it! Keep writing forever, please!!! :)Author's Response: All good things must come to an end eventually, :)
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Very realistic. no worries there. Good job, i really enjoyed this. but poor draco!Author's Response: Thank you so much! Report Review
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