Hey :) I've been following this story for a few weeks now :) I read the first book so to speak, and it was brilliant. The way all the characters are portrayed is fantastic. I don't understand the deal with dumbledore.. You seem to really hate him and you've made him out to be some weak cruel old man. Anyway, that's the only problem I can see with the story :) i'm glad smidgen survived :) well done xAuthor's Response: He's not weak, but there are other beings in my universe that are stronger and more powerful, such as Phil and Titania. He's also made some terrible mistakes in regards to Harry and Severus, mistakes which nobody ever called him on in the original books, but which I am having people confront him with in this one.
He's not so much cruel as willfully blind to all but his concept of the greater good. Think about what he admitted to Snape in DH--how he deliberately placed Harry in harm's way trying to get him killed so the Horcrux within him could be destroyed. He had a hidden agenda all that time and he also sent Harry back time and again to a place he had to suspect was abusive, all under the pretext of "protecting" him with blood wards from Voldemort. What good are wards to protect him from evil wizards if Harry dies from starvation or injury at the hands of the Dursleys? After reading DH I began to see what Albus was really like and what he did, even for a good cause, did not strike me as noble or good at all. Look at how he failed to protect Sev from the Marauders' bullying and tell me that he was a good Headmaster. Again and again Snape spied for him at risk of his own life and yet it was never enough, because when push came to shove, he put Sev's soul in jeopardy by using an Unforgivable. He also put students' lives in danger when he hid the Stone in the school and hired questionable defense teachers such as Lockhart, fake Moody, and Umbridge. If he cared so much about Harry, he should have destroyed Voldemort that time in the Ministry, instead he let him escape and cause more harm to everyone. I think it shameful that a supposedly powerful wizard should rely upon a mere boy to kill a mad wizard. Report Review
I have really enjoyed reading this story, you write very well, especially parts with emotions.
I hope there may be some more stories for this series :) Report Review
Well I lost access to my account but I managed to come back and finish reading your amazing peice of work.I love it and how it ends.hopefully there will be more someday. I truly wish you the best in your writing and shall go read more of your stories.
-*Liz* Report Review
Your story was absolutely amazing. Your ability to give such detail and keep it accurate is fabulous. I think i speak for everyone who have read your stories when i say, if you do decide to publish a story someday you already have a following. Keep writing. You have a gift. Thank you for such a great story. Report Review
this story was AMAZING! i loved reading every word of it. you set everything up very well and your character depth was amazing for the new characters not featured in Harry Potter and the old. in addition to that, your writing is wonderful unlike some authors. definitely a 10 out of 10 and one of my favorite stories Report Review
This was such an awesome story I can't believe it is over. Kudos to u. Report Review
Aww man... I wanted a much much future epilogue.. In which Victoria and Lyra were in school.. Harry and Draco and their family.. With the Blacks of course.. Probably celebrating Christmas together!
But still, this was sweet!Author's Response: That could be a future story or stories. Thank you for reading! Report Review
Very family oriented. Love how they got Toria to walk. Harry would make a very good pediatric doctor or healer. This has been an adventure to follow and I am very honored that you shared it with us. You have a beautiful writing skill, and are able to show a different side of Severus that would not have been possible had you not shared it. Thank you so much for this wonderful story. I know I will come back to it and read again frequently.Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading! I hope you enjoy it as much the second time around! One of these days I'll get around to doing some more stories. Report Review
I liked the end. It was a lovely story. I can't wait for the next one!! Report Review
I hope that you do decide to write more! You're such a great writer, have you considered getting any of your work published? :-3 Report Review
I have really enjoyed the story, it was very good, I do plan on checking out your other stories in progress. Report Review
Love it!! I'm almost sad that it's over! I may be able to draw you a pic... ;) do you like manga? Can't wait to read more of your work, you write amazingly... Report Review
It's ending :(
I know I haven't reviewed every chapter, I kind of stopped..but I never stopped reading! This fic and it's prequel are one of my favorites on this website, because they're fun and not extremely stressful dark pull-your-hair-out-status and you write very well! I'm sad to see it come to an end!
I was .. /really/ hoping that you would maybe, start a new fic about Harry and Snape and Draco and the whole crew going on to their fifth and sixth and seventh year, because their adventures are so entertaining! But every story has to come to an end.
maybe you'll pick it up later and write a few spin offs or something.
I know this story will never end for me, because I'll constantly read and reread and read again! I've already reread the prequel a good...ten times and this fic about five. I really enjoyed them and you are an amazing writer.
xoxo ~ Report Review
That was a perfect ending to a perfect story! I'm so glad you chose for Harry to be a Healer- yayy! I also thought it was funny that Dudley was going to be a police officer. I hope to read someday about the Snape family again. I really love all of your stories, and you have made me such a happy girl to be able to read these chapters in such a short time span. Fabulous as usual, and I'll be reading more of your work! Report Review
I liked this ending, it was very sweet. Perfect way to end a perfect story. I'd like a sequel but maybe not a real long one cuz its honestly just fine with this epilogue. Can't wait to get started on another one of your stories!
~Pandora Report Review
I'd love to do the drawing for you! Just leave a message for me on one of my story's or something. My autor name is artemisia as well also, I have a bunch if ideas for au stories!!! Unfortunatly I just don't have enough time to write :( so yeah, pm me or somthing! :) Report Review
Beautiful ending to a beautiful story! Loved it as always! Report Review
Well, I'm tired of Harry always being an Auror, it just doesn't seem like something he'd pick up after fighting with Voldemort for seven years. Not only that, but he's also got different talents in this story now. Draco's the wandmaker, and there are two DADA professors for the foreseable future... maybe Harry might like to do something with animals? Especially snakes, since he is a Parseltongue. Finding some sort of work in the Fey court also sounds quite interesting as well.Author's Response: Thanks! By the way, the epilogue has been posted. Report Review
I can't wait until you finish the epilogue! :-3Author's Response: Me either! I'm working on it now! Report Review
Excellant chapter, would love to see Severus smile, I look forward to the final chapter, but wish it where not over.Author's Response: I know. I'm going to miss writing in this AU. Report Review
wonderful chapter, quite long-really good.Author's Response: Thanks so much! Report Review
Yay she's walking!! Such a big girl :D. Quidditch player maybe? Idk Harry could do anything really. Loved the chapter as always. Pretty sure I'm going to cry after the epilogue, I love this series.
~PandoraAuthor's Response: Aww thanks! You're sweet! The epilogue has been posted, so get out the Kleenex! Report Review
This was a great chapter i have read the whole series. I reckon you should make it Katie has an accident and Harry helps saves her and wants to become a healer from there.Author's Response: More has been posted! Report Review
how about being a potions master at a magical research and development facilityAuthor's Response: Thanks for your input. I have posted the last two chapters and now the story is over. Report Review
Harry should be a professor! I have read all your stories and love everyone of o them!Author's Response: Thanks so much! The last two chapters are up! Report Review
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