I am very sorry for your loss of your cousin. This chapter is one of your best. I love the character Nemsay, is she your creation?Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, Nesmay's mine. Report Review
What about the runespoor, that is a magical creature too! But loved it the same as always Report Review
Lol my favorite part was "Professor Snape's never bittten me yet and I'm sure he's wanted to sometimes" Oh god! Snapegirl you rock! Report Review
Hey! I'm sorry to bother you, but about how long does it normally take for chapters to get validated? I know I could ask anybody but you are an active writer and trust you.Author's Response: It can vary, based on how many authors are in the queue ahead of you. It once took me a whole week maybe more to get a chapter validated before I was a trusted author. Report Review
Glad to know i'm not the only one who thinks of vomit when i hear SPEW. Report Review
I love your story so far. I read the first prince manor story and loved it. I also plan after reading this to read your short stories about Prince Manor. The characters I love beside Severus, Harry and Draco are Philip and Duncan. Will you be making more stories about Duncan and will you help me find more stories about Philip because I would like to read more stories about him?Author's Response: Thanks so much!
I will eventually do a story with Duncan and Luna, to tell how they got together and what happens to them after she finishes school. One of those short stories, Prince Manor Bubble Bubble tells how Harry and Katie and Severus met Duncan. He also makes another appearance in RPM at the fairy revel.
As for Phil, he's not mine, I borrowed him from a good friend, and she hasn't written anything to post online yet about him. I keep urging her to, but she's shy about her wiriting. His appearance in RPM is his first official online one. Report Review
thank you for such a wonderful story. I draw but not that good. Im working on a family portret from the time that sarai was pregnet the first time but its not even close to being doen. sorry about any wrong spelling. i have recently lerned dutch and speek that most of the time and that can get comfusing. Report Review
yay. i was so hopeing that sarai was going to be there. its so sad that she has that contract. anather great chapter..Author's Response: I know, but something's going to happen to get her contract released early. Report Review
haha sweet reveng. gota love this chapterAuthor's Response: Yup. Never ever mess with Sev or his family. Report Review
yay... i dident know there was a part 2 . yay...Author's Response: Yes, there is! There's also some short stories that go with this, Prince Manor Bubble Bubble, Trick or Treat Slytherin Style, Wizard's Luck, Unlucky, and Silver Doe. To be read in that order while reading RPM. Report Review
I LOVE this story! I have really enjoyed reading all your works. I can't wait to see a third installment in the Prince Manor series!!! Keep up the great works! I am a faithful reader & will continue as long as you are writing!!! Report Review
I love this story very much! I think Severus is a very brilliant Dad! Sarai is filling her role in this quite well also!! I think Draco and Harry are perfect brothers!Author's Response: Thanks so much! Report Review
A great end to an amazing story. I am so glad that I was able to read the end before heading off to boot camp. I hope one day you will continue writing. I would love to read something about Harry having children of his own and raising them in the manor. Also more about Draco and his family. And where Nessy ends up going. Thank you for putting so much time into this story. I'm gonna try and mess around with my paints and see if I can come up with something for you with severus and toria. I don't know though so no promises.Author's Response: Anything you could do would be very appreciated. You're very welcome, I do have a small one-shot called Silver Doe I just posted about Severus from Prince Manor and the way he created his Patronus. Report Review
Its good but i might have split into three or four shorter storiesAuthor's Response: Well, I didn't want to have several sequels, so that's why I left it the way it was. If I do any other stories, it will be about the kids individually. Report Review
Not all pregnant woman have uncontrollable moodswwings most choose not to try and use it as an excuse. And women were designed to give birth naturally without meds is not unbearable and less likely of complications. I thought you did excellent with this section unlike most who exaggerate pregnacy and birth. Love waterbirth ideaAuthor's Response: Very true, they've been giving birth naturally for thousands of years. Thanks very much! Report Review
Btw not every pregnant woman has weird cravings. Symptoms different for all women. All i had was heartburn heat flashes and exhaustion thats it.Author's Response: True, my niece on the other hand had very bad heartburn with one kid, terrible back and leg cramps with another, and with the third wanted the strangest combinations of food, like pickles and ice cream . . . which I happen to think is gross! My sister had headaches with her first, was nauseous all thru her second pregnancy and her third was like a yo yo with the mood swings. By her fourth, she was on bed rest because of some kind of complication with the placenta. So I know what you're talking about. It all depends on the person, I used to work for an OB/GYN office for five years and saw a lot of different pregnancies. Report Review
OMFG! YOU ARE SUCH AN AMAZING WRITER!I've read both books from start to end and I totally think you should publish them; though there might be some legal issues involved... still I'd buy a copy... or maybe two... dozen... ;)Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked this version so much. Report Review
i love the way you portrayed rita it sounds like what her character would do. and i love how hermione took care of Krum it was very inventive and what she called him was funny too!!! Report Review
Is the answer to the riddle "Death"?Author's Response: Nope. You'll see what it is, keep reading! Report Review
LMFAO @ that last bit w/ Hermione and Ron bickering! I love how you portray them as siblings and not lovers as is done in the book. Same sorta thing w/ Harry; I never really went for the whole Ginny/Harry pair.Author's Response: Thanks. I always thought of them as siblings, and didn't really like it when suddenly they became romantically involved. They really didn't strike me as a good couple. It was the same with Harry and Ginny. I felt Harry and Hermione should have been together. Report Review
This is a very good story!! Draco and Harry getting along is pretty scary!! Severus is bloody brilliant as always!!Author's Response: It is, especially when you think about what those two can do when they work together. But you'll see more as the story goes on. Thanks for reading! Report Review
This was an awesome chapter, full of lots of excitment. You are one of my favorite authors. I have only recently started reading your stories, and so far I am amazed at your writing skills! You continiue to astound me with your twists and talents.
P.S How and where did Hermione learn latin? I want to learn it too, but don't know how are where to learn it.
From : An Unusual ReaderAuthor's Response: I would assume that she learned it, as I did, in school. When I was in middle school and high school, they offered Latin as a language alternative to French and Spanish. I took Latin for two years in middle school, seventh and eigth grade, and then all four years of high school. I had an excellent teacher who made the language easy and yet fun to learn, and even the declentions and translations were not so bad. We had Saturnalia parties watched movie adaptations of Cleopatra, the Aeneid, and Julius Caesar, and had a great time. Latin was considered good to learn because it helped you score higher on the vocabulary part of the SAT's, and also the HSPT exam.
Now i think you can learn Latin online or get a CD course at Barnes and Noble. Report Review
I love this story and im sad to see it at its end. I loved it though.I do hope that you do return to this family as i think they are amazing.Author's Response: I will eventually write more about the Prince Manor Snapes as they are a favorite of mine too. Report Review
Please do continue on and write another then it could become a Snape family trilogy! :D
I love this story so much and I wish this could have been how Harry Potter ended..
You're an amazing writer and I look forwards to reading more of your work. Report Review
I loved it!!! You have a serious talent. Your stories are filled with emotion, I love the way it's written! :)
I would really love to see a story on Lyra and Toria's future at hogwarts as well as harry & katie and Draco and hermione's future together. Also I hope Sarai has a boy :)Author's Response: Thanks! Someday I will write those other stories, because I'm curious too. Report Review
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