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Review #26, by HogwartsMafia Home

21st December 2006:
Hello it’s me HogwartsMafia/Ambient Breakdown

I would totally read your story yesterday but my internet connection went out. Now it’s back on, also hurray for the seventh book title is now officially been released. Okay another with that here’s your review.

Hmm I do really appreciate the additional info. Some people just skip over that but I usually don’t.
To begin with I’ve notice your punctuation is great. Did you ask for a beta, if you did great if you didn’t still great. Me I’m usually too embarrassed and I personally suck at grammar. T_T. I usually am a good story teller not the best writer. I love how your story flows freely it makes it easy and fast to read. You made Sirius so passionate. Reminds of a Spanish lover type. Anyways I thought the first chapter was king of short but sweet and clean. Though now you have me wandering who is female he was lovin. Anyways I would like to read the rest of your story. My email is witchfiretonks@yahoo.com…

Till next time. Peace!

Author's Response: Yay for 7th title! You're the first person that said they've appreciated the info. I felt it was necessary in this story to help prevent confusion when chapter two is available. I appreciate that you took time to read it.

No, I did not ask for a beta for this chapter. Thank you for the compliments on my punctuation and writing style, they mean alot to me. Sirius is my favorite character from the series and I enjoy writing him. I role-played with another writer with her as Sirius and she showed that Sirius can have a range of emotions and feelings and still be himself. I can't say how much I love writing Sirius.

The female is his wife and I will tell you that her name won't be revealed in the Adult Sirius portion. He will use a nickname that he gave her during school, but her actual name won't be said for sometime. Thank you for the review!


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Review #27, by phobia_of_seaweed Home

10th December 2006:
Aw, it was so sweet, and so sad, please continue. i swear i had tears in my eyes!

Olivia.

Author's Response: Thank you so very much! Your review was touching to me. Thank you so very, very much!

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