What an excellent story! It's been so long since a fanfic has sucked me in like this! Your writing is great, and you show a great grasp of character!

I do hope this hasn't been abandoned!

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So it was lucius malfoy who messed with the sorting hat! I was wondering who did it. I think this chapter was great.

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I love reading about love potions! Hermione sure is clever!

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The marauders are hilarious! I like that lily and hermione are friends.

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This story just keeps getting more interesting.

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The slytherin girls are real annoying. :)

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Great chapter! I think it's cool that the slytherin common room is underground.

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Sorted into slytherin! That can't be good! I can't wait to see where this goes.

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Stuck in the past! Bummer. I can't wait to see where this goes!

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Interesting! I can't wait to read more.

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Great chapter! It was really funny!

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I loved it! This story is going to be one of my favorites.

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Hey!! I'm still here if you are willing to update?! I still am totally in love with this story, and I just got through reading the whole thing through again.

I love the entertaining characters you have created, and the amusing drama that envelopes each one of them.

I can't wait for you to update! And I will be looking forward until that time comes. (if ever)

Bless you and yours!!
Erratic

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PLS UPDATE SOON! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!

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This is a really brilliant story. It's really well written, and very addictive - I can't wait to know what happens next. Hermione's a little different from the one we come to know in the books, but you're explanation of her being perceived differently because they didn't know her as long kind of helps to cover that anyway. I also really like the way Peter is a proper member of their group, bantering with the rest of them, as too often you find stories when he's just pushed to the side and ignored. The bits between Hermione and Snape are really clever too, and the idea of Remus sensing people's emotions.

ok, favourite moment:

("So, do you now know the secret answer to everything?" James asked her with a tinge of jealousy in his voice when she met he and Sirius in the hallway outside the classroom.

"42," Hermione responded, almost on instinct. )

I do the same thing the whole time - although you said in your author's note that that doesn't occur till the third book, and it's definitely in the first, as well as being in episode 2 or 3 of the radio series. sorry for being such a pedant, I just really like Hitchhiker's Guide...

anyway, please update soon...

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I loved it. It such a great chapter about friendship. I'm so glad that Lupin finally confronted her on the subject. I know how hard it is to confront a friend, but you did well with him confronting her. Ik what you mean. There are just stories that you have to have on you at all times. Besides your story i only have a few on my computer, but most of them are mine. I'm glad that i found your story. It's such a great piece 10/10

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Oh My GOD! This is, by far, the best story I have read on this site. Best plot, best writing, best details, descriptions, dialogue-you name it. You have something truly special going on here and I very much look forward to your next update. By the way, I do think there was a repeating section in this chapter---formatting issue. Please keep up the fabulous work.

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I'm in love with this story! GAH! I can't wait to read the next chapter:)
~hpf14

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YES YES YES YES! OK, I'm very happy now! This is an incredible story and what a twist you sent us on! Sly little devil, you are. Keep writing! I love the Sirius/Hermione interaction to. well done
~hpf14

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BOO! Hermione can't be in Slythering.I wanna cry, isn't she supposed to be with Sirius, is this not a Sirius/Hermione fic, please correct me if it's a Snape/Hermione.I'm sad, she's supposed to be in gryffindor, and have fun with Sirius and james and lily.sigh.
~hpf14

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great chapter! loved it!

10/10

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You depict Remus's monthly transformations in one of the most believable ways I've ever read. The way he takes to his bed, his heightened senses, his friends bringing him food, and Dumbledore accompanying him to the Shrieking Shack every once in a while . . . it's all brilliant. Just as I would imagine it.

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Story is fantastic so far, very VERY well-written! I really love the Remus/Hermione relationship so far (but I tend to love any Remus relationship...or Sirius...or James...or even Peter, for that matter. Go Marauders!). Can't wait to see where the story's going. =)

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Yay Sirius made an appearance! Still eagerly hoping for Regulus. I love that guy. Great chapter.

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Ah, you updated! I was literally bouncing in my seat when I saw it posted. This chapter was amazing, naturally ;)
10/10

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