Very sweet, especially when Harry lying on Severus's lap. They are almost getting along too well. I mean I'm thrilled they both found the family they despirately need. However, their relationship is almost getting too fluffy and perfect. The conflicts between them made it more realistic and interesting. Maybe when the rest of the kids get back there will be more rukus. I do hope you plan to bring up Sirius's mission. I'm hoping for a bit of excitement being tossed into the works. Still a great job, of course, just a bit over the top on the sweetness scale. Esc.

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Ooh, MAJOR cliffie!! I'm surprised that Harry's scar didn't hurt. Is that why Severus gave him that potion?? I'm sure the answers are in the next chapter...can't wait...Esc.

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Very nice that Harry finally gets a family Christmas! I'm sure it will be great for Severus as well. I'm sure he spend most of his previous holidays alone...too sad. Esc.

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AWE!!! Very sweet! Never knew Severus was such a softy inside! I knew he was just trying to protect Harry! Their relationship is REALLY starting to grow on me...I still don't know how the heck you did that. Must be your great writing. Esc.

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I'm glad that Harry finally opened up to his friends. He obviously feels better about it. He even realizes that Severus didn't truly mean what he said. Could he be returning to his happy place?? I hope so. Great job, Esc.

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That was hysterical!! Sirius really does fit right in with them, doesn't he. I'm surpirsed that he isn't hanging out with Remus more, but then again, he is just behaving like one of the kids. Spending time with one of the professors would be boring for him...I guess. Even if it is Remus?? Esc.

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How sad!! Harry was finally happy. I find it quite ironic that I actually brought that up in my last review, and then you shattered his happiness in the very next chapter!! You did do a lovely job expressing both his and Severus's emotions, but they were just so sad!! I hope Severus comes around. He SO obviously wants "Alex" in his life. He just is denying himself the emotions that he has buried down deep for so long. I'm sure that he is also worried about Alex's involvement with Voldemort. He must be afraid that Voldemort will discover the truth and Alex's life will be endangered. Oh, so many layers in this chapter! Esc.

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I liked your quidditch tryouts. So many writers put in way too much detail about their quidditch games. It gets quite boring. Your description was perfect, not overly done. I do like the foursome's relationship. Sirius is just childlike enough to naturally fit into the group. Harry is definitely more relaxed since he doesn't have the pressures of being Harry Potter to the rest of the world. He still does have to deal with his visions, of course, but I think that he can deal with them easier than he deals with the pressure that the world puts on him. He seems MUCH happier. Esc.

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Very smooth, the way you got Harry back on the quidditch team. I always thought of Sirius as a beater, myself, but of course Fred and George have those bases covered. Great job, Esc.

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Nice to pull that prank of Fred and George!! I am really starting to like Severus....what the hell are you doing to me?!? I actually feel sorry for him! Love Harry as Alex as well. Esc.

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...Oh yeah, I forgot, THANK GOD you put him in Gryffindor!!!!! I mean, he was almost put in Slytherin the first time, and people DO change as they get older. The possibility for a Slytherin sorting was definitely there...it was an intense moment while I waited for the chapter to load. Perfect putting "Gryffindor" as the first word!! Esc.

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Very, very good! I just LOVE that Sirius gets to relive his childhood as Harry, and Harry gets a family plus freedom from being the boy who lived. It seems almost too good to be true. It was hysterical when Sirius realized that he'd have to do schoolwork!! LOL! Esc.

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Ooh a cliffie! At least it is already posted...thank God! I am really beginning to like this story a lot. I've even accepted Severus as Harry's father. Maybe because now he looks different, I picture "Alex" in my head, and not "Harry". It is weird, but true. Once Dumbledore lifted the spell, I don't picture Harry as Harry anymore. It definitely makes Severus more acceptable as his dad...Bazzaar I know. Esc....PLEASE be Gryffindor!! I couldn't handle two "unforgivable" events in one story. Remember "Not Slytherin, not Slytherin" Esc.

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It sounds as if Sirius will be having fun reliving some of his old Hogwart's days. Too bad he won't have the Marauders with him. At least Moony will be there. He did take the news surprisingly well. I was very surprised when he actually ASKED Severus if he could remain as Harry's godfather. He's come a long way. How will they explain Severus's having a son?? Wouldn't it be easier for them to come up with a different background story for Harry? I mean he could simply be a "nobody" transferring from a different school. Now everyone will be interested in Severus Snape's son, and they will wonder why no-one ever knew he existed. Esc.

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OK, it's getting better. Maybe it was the fact that Harry got to vent out as Severus. Maybe it's because I'm slowly accepting him as Harry's father...now there's a horrid thought. I do look forward to Sirius finding out. Did he know all along?? Why not he was Lilly's close friend and they fought about Severus all the time. Maybe he helped her perform the obliviate charm and alter Harry's appearance. Somehow that whole idea seems just too devious for Lilly. More Sirius's idea, or maybe even Severus himself. Now there's an idea for you. Esc.

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Why do I keep having these visions of Darth Vadar reaching for Luke Skywalker saying, "Luke I am your father."? Seems fitting somehow, don't you think?? Esc.

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So if they didn't "sleep" together exactly how was Harry conceived?? I do hope you answer that one. Esc.

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Damn you! I knew it!! Just YUCK! It's not that I don't like Severus, but I just don't see him as Harry's father. Why the heck would he treat Harry SO horribly if there was even the POSSIBILITY that he was his father. Sorry it doesn't seem quite right. Esc.

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OK, this is getting a little scary. Harry is becoming very powerful very quickly. I do hope you explain why. Severus and Lilly dating...ewe! Sorry, but they were friends. That I accept. I always see them having a close friendship, but NOTHING sexual at all. Now I have to wonder if Harry is Snape's son?!? THAT is not right! ..at least not in my little corner of the HP universe. I do hope you come up with a different answer. Esc.

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Wow! Does this mean that Harry was not a blood relative of James?!? Perhaps old Padfoot had something to do with that....GOD I'm pathetic! Everything doesn't have to do with Sirius...does it?!? Just wishful thinking on my part. Esc.

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Nice descriptive chapter. I can't wait to see what is causing this change in Harry. Obviously it's more than dreams. He is physically changing, like the glasses for example. Something is definitely going on. I'm off to see what it is. Esc.

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if there is a sequal what is it called

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oh god snapes not his father is he??

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great story

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I hope you are not going to make Harry "too good to be true". He's definitely showing signs of being so much more confident and intellectual than normal.....it's Harry he does need angst to be really Harry. Esc.

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