I can't believe you finally updated!!! It has been forever!!! I'm so happy now!!! I love the story and it was a great chapter. Please continue to update soon!!!

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THIS STORY IS AMAZING! The characters are just how I've always imagined them to be and the plot is flawless. Lily and James are so in love and they are perfect for each other!!! I cannot wait to see what happens next and I hope you'll update soon!
9,500,700/10 =)

-Jaz

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Bonjourno!
So er hi?
First of all, I love this story! I've read it before but I reread it when this chapter and I just fell in love all over again. Seriously, it's a great story and I love the family line ties, it makes for a very interesting story and I would love to see where all that is gonna go.
I love Lauren, she's one of my favorite characters and it'll be so sad when she dies or whatever (Harry has no family so I'm assuming...but you know what they say about assuming, please) but I do really like her.
I love the friendship between Lily and Sirius, its really funny and her temper is great with him.
James. man. Oh my god I love him. He's so cute and over protective and loves Lily ridiculous amounts and them two together is adorable.
Lily is great and I love that she works in the DOM, it's a much more interesting place for her to work than what you usually get, it really shows off her skills and gives loads of opportunities for interesting occurrences.
Basically, your story is really well written and I haven't noticed any grammatical errors (grammar nazi for the win). It's also surprisingly canon considering the whole blood lines thing. I love this because it means that I can like believe the story if that makes sense but you've still given it your own little twist.
So congratulations on an amazing story and please update soon (:
Kx

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Awww! Lily is expecting! James is amazing - so sweet and caring. I was thrilled to read this update - thank you!

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awesome glad you are back

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WOW !!! awesome it is please please please tell me you are writing more of it ans soon.I cant wait to read

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This was such an awesome story!! I really want to know more and see this story through until their deaths. Keep up the good work!

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Spent the past couple of days reading this story and it was great :D well worth spending my time reading it :)

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hey, weren't the McKinnons supposed to die around the time of Harry's first birthday? I think Lily mentioned it in the letter to Sirius that Harry finds in grimmauld place...

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i just have to say that while reading this story i entirely forgot that it wasn't J.K.Rowling who wrote it. You did an amazing job and i just loved it!!

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please please write more as soon as you can!!! i really really loved it.i want to read till their death!!! please!

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This is so amazing! :D Please tell me you're continuing this?! I have become a HUGE Jily fan all because of this story. You are really an amazing writer. :)


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this is an amazing story! i keep on rereading it cuz its so good.
plz plz plz write more chapters?? I would LUV 2 read more chapters! Thnx so much:) PLZ UPDATE!

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Wow. This is REALLY good! So, my question to you, is: Will you PLEASE update?! I must know what happens next!

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Is this story abandoned if not please update!

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Keep writing!!! This series is awesome!! :-)

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I found I had written reviews for other chapters, so I decided to write it here. I just re-read chapter 37, and it struck me! I had, since a long time, suspected that Remus would fit in with Lauren, but how, I had no idea. Lauren being the subject of interest of a Vampire finally brings things into place. Werewolves and Vampires are natural enemies. Great writing! Please, please post chapter 40 soon. Its been so long!

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AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME
when will we get to read the next chapters!

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Absolutely loved the whole story, its kept me reading well into the night so that i could see how the match made in hogwarts happened!! You have such a talent for literacy which has had me constantly enthralled by the drama. However it shouldn't stop here, it isnt a suitably amazing ending to match the amazing story. Keep writing untill they find out Lovely Lilly is pregnant, that would be a apropraite end. But that is the only negative i can possibly think of :)

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Awsome! Please write more ASAP!
10/10

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This series is great!!! Keep them coming! :]

Author's Response: ty! and u bet!

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So, a few years back, I started reading this story. My account got deleted (or rather, my email and I forgot my password so I could not email a new one) and I had forgotten about it. A few days ago, I was searching for a story and found this one! I can't tell you how excited I have been. I have been reading for four days straight. I stay up until one or two every morning and wake up by eight just to read this. When I'm not home, or on my break at work, I'm reading it off my phone. Heck, last Sunday, I spent the entire service reading it!! (hmmm, study God or read about witchcraft?)

I think it is clear that I am very addicted to this story and I want nothing more than for you to update very soon!! It saddens me when I think that with Lily getting pregnant soon, the story line will come to an end. Lily Evans (or Potter) is my favorite character!! I know she dies, but I don't want her to!!

A++ in my book!! Keep up the amazing work and update soon, please!!

Author's Response: lol. you seriously sound like me...with a lot of my own favorite fan fiction. the next chapter is 80% complete and then i need to edit the final half of it. i try and work on it when i get the itch to write. these last 10 chapters are the harder chapters because i want them to be exactly as i envisioned them. i can't forget the tiny details or it just won't be right. thanks so much for the nice review and there will definitely be more! ;)

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THIS IS SOOO GOOD!!!

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Wow - your story is a beast! It has taken several days but I just finished all 39 chapters. It has been a pleasure to read it. The story has gotten darker and darker as the events also darkened. You have done a really nice job with the characters - especially Lily and James. You have set up the spy in the order scenario so that it does seem like it might be Remus. Thank you for sharing your work!

Author's Response: thanks! and don't worry, there is more to come with the order! ;)

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What happened to chapter 32?

Author's Response: because some of the validators don't like me; i think it's mor ehtan a little fishy that i get validated...then not validated...then validated...then - you get the picture. hopefully things should be fine in a few days when things are re-validated.

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