31 Reviews Found

Review #26, by Aphoride One day after

2nd December 2012:
Oh my gosh. So, I've read a lot of Scorose's (who hasn't?! :P) but this is really, completely different to nearly every other one I've read and gah, it's so good!

First, gosh, I love your Scorpius! He's just so conflicted and sarcastic and kinda pathetic and a little bit whiny, and he's just so real that I just wanna hug him and not stop for about two hours. The way he interacts with everyone is just so post-teenage boy it's funny - he's scared of the women at work, feels lonely and without friends, is doing a kinda crappy job because it's something to do and is still living with his parents. I almost feel like I could walk down the street one day and bump into him, you know? It's almost terrifying... but just great ;)

I feel so sorry for him, though! You've really started this with a bang - Rose breaking up with him, the issues with his parents' marriage and his family life... he's got so much on his plate that maybe it's a good thing he's only doing a bad job, lol - he might not be able to concentrate otherwise. I really, really wanna see where you're going to take this - are he and Rose going to get back together? Are his parents going to work something out/stay together (Drastoria for the win!)? Will he stop being scared of the women at work? SO MANY QUESTIONS, SO FEW ANSWERS!

There were a couple of mistakes - you misspelled 'Avada Kedavra' - and a couple of little grammar things but they didn't effect the story at all.

Great, great job! :D

Aph xx

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Review #27, by AriesGirl40 Three days after

2nd December 2012:
Stacey stays, Scorpius needs someone who makes him think and keeps him on his toes, yet is not a romantic interest. I think she was a good idea.

Dominique though needs to take a chill pill. If Rose and Scorpius's split was in any way her fault, there must be something wrong with her life that she would make it her lifes mission to destroy a cousins relationship. I do hope you have a back story on her.
Good chapter, loved Scorpius freaking out on Astoria. What kind of mother would tell her son that thanks to his screw up she saw the light! I'd move out since they seem to be on the road to recovery. lol

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Review #28, by sour_grapes_snape One day after

27th November 2012:
Late review is late. Ah, well, what can you do? Better late than never, I suppose.

I would just like to know how it is that you can manage to be so awesome? How, pray tell, how? I can't help but love every single thing you write. And this is no exception. Brilliant work.

I'm really excited for your take on a Rose/Scorpius relationship. And, apparently, post-relationship. It's not often that you find stories that write about the aftermath of a breakup like this. So I'm quite interested and delighted.

Happy writing!


Author's Response: Hullo Laura dear! Your reviews are always appreciated and lovely and I'm most glad that you're here and enjoying at what not! I loved writing ScoRose actually, which I wasn't expecting... but there's going to be lots of messy chronology and what not!

Thanks for being lovely :)


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Review #29, by Anjali One day after

26th November 2012:
I love your story so far; I will make sure to
check in for a second chapter! I really want to
see a Scorpius Auction... :)

Author's Response: Thank you! So glad you saw it, and Scorp-Auction... well, we'll see if that actually occurs or not. Thanks for review and the next chapter should be up soon! :)

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Review #30, by AriesGirl40 One day after

22nd November 2012:
Off to a good start, keep on going. Rah! Rah! Rah!

Author's Response: Thanks very much! More coming :)

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Review #31, by alicia and anne One day after

21st November 2012:
This is a sad first chapter, I feel sorry for Scorpius :-( I like that he nearly didn't cry.

I like all of the background information, like where Scorpius works and who he works with, his feelings about them and his feelings for Rose and the break up.
I love Natasha, I hope they do have a Scorpius auction :D
Sebasitan Wilkes sounds like such a familiar name, have you used him before in one of your stories? It might just be the Wilkes name. *thinks*
I love Draco in this as well actually, I'm liking that he still manages to annoy Harry, Ron and Hermione event though they are adults :D
I can't wait to read more! :D

Author's Response: Poor Scorpio, he's a good lad whom I adore lots and lots and it's been great writing all this stuffs! I love Natasha.

Sebastian Wilkes... ermm, I'm not sure. Ack. Yes! I googled it and there is one in Sherlock, ahha. But I hadn't really thought about that when naming him...

I loved Draco too! Lots more of him coming soon.

Thanks for the lovely review! And more soon :D

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